Na talaash kar hamen ashkon mein,tere dil mein hum bus jaayenge.

[vichiter]

aap ki is mehfil mai VICHITRA KA SALAAM
kuch kehna aur ruk jana,batoon ka yeh tana bana,
kaise bana yeh main naa jana.............................:confus ed:
DOSTON DIL KI BAAT HAI JUBAAN PER AANAY MAIN TIME TO LAGTA HI HAI FIR HANSKAR BOLO YAA ROKAR.....DIL KI BAAT TO DIL HI JAANTA HAI .........................
Na talaash kar hamen ashkon mein,tere dil mein hum bus jaayenge.
Tu bulayegi hamein baaraha,kabhi laut kar nahin aayenge..
Jo talaashne ki ho justajoo,zara aankh apni tu band kar.
Tera ishq sachcha hua agar,hameen-hum nazar tujhe aayenge..
Gaye waqt mein na talaash kar,main basaa hoon teri nigaah mein.
Tere ashk ban kar aaina,mera aqs tujh ko dikhaayenge..
Hain jo chand lamhe bache huye,mujhe yaad kar le tu toot kar.
Kya pataa ki kal koi aur bhi,teri zeest mein chale aayenge..
Tum paas kitna bhi ho mere,mujhe door lagte ho kyon sanam.
Hum kal bhi tanhaa thay raah mein,aur tanhaa hi rah jaayenge..
Hai jo dard dil mein nihaan mere,ye diya hai kisne bataa zaraa.
Kya khabar thi mujhko ki dost bhi,mujhe zakhm de ke sataayenge..
Mujhe waqt sa kyon bhula diya,mere humsafar mere humnavaa..
Hum ban ke khushboo-e-gul sanam,teri zindagi mahkaayenge..
Kar ek baar tu koshishen,mujhe khud mein tu mahsoos kar.
Hum ban ke chitra "Vichitra"sa,tere dil mein hi nazaraayenge..

[abed_farooqui]

Originally Posted by vichiter

aap ki is mehfil mai VICHITRA KA SALAAM
kuch kehna aur ruk jana,batoon ka yeh tana bana,
kaise bana yeh main naa jana.............................:confus ed:
DOSTON DIL KI BAAT HAI JUBAAN PER AANAY MAIN TIME TO LAGTA HI HAI FIR HANSKAR BOLO YAA ROKAR.....DIL KI BAAT TO DIL HI JAANTA HAI .........................
Na talaash kar hamen ashkon mein,tere dil mein hum bus jaayenge.
Tu bulayegi hamein baaraha,kabhi laut kar nahin aayenge..
Jo talaashne ki ho justajoo,zara aankh apni tu band kar.
Tera ishq sachcha hua agar,hameen-hum nazar tujhe aayenge..
Gaye waqt mein na talaash kar,main basaa hoon teri nigaah mein.
Tere ashk ban kar aaina,mera aqs tujh ko dikhaayenge..
Hain jo chand lamhe bache huye,mujhe yaad kar le tu toot kar.
Kya pataa ki kal koi aur bhi,teri zeest mein chale aayenge..
Tum paas kitna bhi ho mere,mujhe door lagte ho kyon sanam.
Hum kal bhi tanhaa thay raah mein,aur tanhaa hi rah jaayenge..
Hai jo dard dil mein nihaan mere,ye diya hai kisne bataa zaraa.
Kya khabar thi mujhko ki dost bhi,mujhe zakhm de ke sataayenge..
Mujhe waqt sa kyon bhula diya,mere humsafar mere humnavaa..
Hum ban ke khushboo-e-gul sanam,teri zindagi mahkaayenge..
Kar ek baar tu koshishen,mujhe khud mein tu mahsoos kar.
Hum ban ke chitra "Vichitra"sa,tere dil mein hi nazaraayenge..

विचित्रा भाई
अभी ही आपकी एक पोस्ट पढ़ी थी जिसमे आप क्या कहना चाहते थे साँझ के बाहर रहा पेर यह पोस्ट बहुत बहुत अच्छी है कुछ एक शेर क्या सभी शेर एक से बदकेर एक है.

Jo talaashne ki ho justajoo,zara aankh apni tu band kar.
Tera ishq sachcha hua agar,hameen-hum nazar tujhe aayenge..

[vichiter]

Originally Posted by abed_farooqui

विचित्रा भाई
अभी ही आपकी एक पोस्ट पढ़ी थी जिसमे आप क्या कहना चाहते थे साँझ के बाहर रहा पेर यह पोस्ट बहुत बहुत अच्छी है कुछ एक शेर क्या सभी शेर एक से बदकेर एक है.

Jo talaashne ki ho justajoo,zara aankh apni tu band kar.
Tera ishq sachcha hua agar,hameen-hum nazar tujhe aayenge..

SHUKRIYA BHAI
AAP AISE HI MUJHKO PROTSAHIT KARATAY RAHIYE GA
AAPKA
VICHITRA

[vichiter]

Originally Posted by vichiter

SHUKRIYA BHAI
AAP AISE HI MUJHKO PROTSAHIT KARATAY RAHIYE GA
AAPKA
VICHITRA

Aap sabhi gazal kay shokeeno ka dhanyavaad

aapka vichitra

[vichiter]

Originally Posted by abed_farooqui

विचित्रा भाई
अभी ही आपकी एक पोस्ट पढ़ी थी जिसमे आप क्या कहना चाहते थे साँझ के बाहर रहा पेर यह पोस्ट बहुत बहुत अच्छी है कुछ एक शेर क्या सभी शेर एक से बदकेर एक है.

Jo talaashne ki ho justajoo,zara aankh apni tu band kar.
Tera ishq sachcha hua agar,hameen-hum nazar tujhe aayenge..

EK SHAYR KO JAB TAK ..............DAAD NA MILAY TO KUCH ADHURA HI LAGATA HAI AUR JAB AAP JAISE .........SHOKEEN MILAY TO DIL MAIN AGHAY LIKHNAY KI TAMMANA JAGTI HAI.........
AAP SABHI KA HOUSLA AFFZAI KARTI HAIN.........AISE HI KIJYEGA .....KHUSH RAHIYE

APPKA VICHITRA

[vichiter]

Originally Posted by vichiter

EK SHAYR KO JAB TAK ..............DAAD NA MILAY TO KUCH ADHURA HI LAGATA HAI AUR JAB AAP JAISE .........SHOKEEN MILAY TO DIL MAIN AGHAY LIKHNAY KI TAMMANA JAGTI HAI.........
AAP SABHI KA HOUSLA AFFZAI KARTI HAIN.........AISE HI KIJYEGA .....KHUSH RAHIYE

APPKA VICHITRA

hoslaaffzai ZAROOR kiyega........

APPKA VICHITRA

[vichiter]

Originally Posted by abed_farooqui

विचित्रा भाई
अभी ही आपकी एक पोस्ट पढ़ी थी जिसमे आप क्या कहना चाहते थे साँझ के बाहर रहा पेर यह पोस्ट बहुत बहुत अच्छी है कुछ एक शेर क्या सभी शेर एक से बदकेर एक है.

Jo talaashne ki ho justajoo,zara aankh apni tu band kar.
Tera ishq sachcha hua agar,hameen-hum nazar tujhe aayenge..

EK SHAYR KO JAB TAK ..............DAAD NA MILAY TO KUCH ADHURA HI LAGATA HAI AUR JAB AAP JAISE .........SHOKEEN MILAY TO DIL MAIN AGHAY LIKHNAY KI TAMMANA JAGTI HAI.........
AAP SABHI KA HOUSLA AFFZAI KARTI HAIN.........AISE HI KIJYEGA .....KHUSH RAHIYE

APPKA VICHITRA

[vichiter]

Originally Posted by vichiter

aap ki is mehfil mai VICHITRA KA SALAAM
kuch kehna aur ruk jana,batoon ka yeh tana bana,
kaise bana yeh main naa jana.............................:confus ed:
DOSTON DIL KI BAAT HAI JUBAAN PER AANAY MAIN TIME TO LAGTA HI HAI FIR HANSKAR BOLO YAA ROKAR.....DIL KI BAAT TO DIL HI JAANTA HAI .........................
Na talaash kar hamen ashkon mein,tere dil mein hum bus jaayenge.
Tu bulayegi hamein baaraha,kabhi laut kar nahin aayenge..
Jo talaashne ki ho justajoo,zara aankh apni tu band kar.
Tera ishq sachcha hua agar,hameen-hum nazar tujhe aayenge..
Gaye waqt mein na talaash kar,main basaa hoon teri nigaah mein.
Tere ashk ban kar aaina,mera aqs tujh ko dikhaayenge..
Hain jo chand lamhe bache huye,mujhe yaad kar le tu toot kar.
Kya pataa ki kal koi aur bhi,teri zeest mein chale aayenge..
Tum paas kitna bhi ho mere,mujhe door lagte ho kyon sanam.
Hum kal bhi tanhaa thay raah mein,aur tanhaa hi rah jaayenge..
Hai jo dard dil mein nihaan mere,ye diya hai kisne bataa zaraa.
Kya khabar thi mujhko ki dost bhi,mujhe zakhm de ke sataayenge..
Mujhe waqt sa kyon bhula diya,mere humsafar mere humnavaa..
Hum ban ke khushboo-e-gul sanam,teri zindagi mahkaayenge..
Kar ek baar tu koshishen,mujhe khud mein tu mahsoos kar.
Hum ban ke chitra "Vichitra"sa,tere dil mein hi nazaraayenge..

app sabhi ka hoslaaffzai ka shukriya
aapka vichitra

[vichiter]

app sabhi ka hoslaaffzai ka shukriya
aapka vichitra

[Mayank]

Originally Posted by vichiter

Jo talaashne ki ho justajoo,zara aankh apni tu band kar. Tera ishq sachcha hua agar,hameen-hum nazar tujhe aayenge.. Kar ek baar tu koshishen,mujhe khud mein tu mahsoos kar. Hum ban ke chitra "Vichitra"sa,tere dil mein hi nazaraayenge..

vchitra saahab,

aap ke matle aur maqte ka andaaz behad pasand aaya..... daad qubool keejiyegaa... yuu.n hi likhte rahe.n.....

Mayank

[vichiter]

Originally Posted by Mayank

vchitra saahab,

aap ke matle aur maqte ka andaaz behad pasand aaya..... daad qubool keejiyegaa... yuu.n hi likhte rahe.n.....

Mayank

mayank bhai ko aadaab
kaise hain aap are bhai jaan jab tak aapki aur say jawaab nahin aata to lagta hai kuch adhura hai aur jab aap apna senh bhrha ashivaad daitay hai to man bagh bagh ho jata hai aise hi protsahit kijeyega
aapka
vichitra

[vichiter]

app sabhi ka hoslaaffzai ka shukriya
aapka vichitra

[vichiter]

app sabhi ka hoslaaffzai ka shukriya
aapka vichitra

[naresh_mehra110]

Na talaash kar hamen ashkon mein,tere dil mein hum bus jaayenge.
Tu bulayegi hamein baaraha,kabhi laut kar nahin aayenge..

Jo talaashne ki ho justajoo,zara aankh apni tu band kar.
Tera ishq sachcha hua agar,hameen-hum nazar tujhe aayenge..

Gaye waqt mein na talaash kar,main basaa hoon teri nigaah mein.
Tere ashk ban kar aaina,mera aqs tujh ko dikhaayenge..

Hain jo chand lamhe bache huye,mujhe yaad kar le tu toot kar.
Kya pataa ki kal koi aur bhi,teri zeest mein chale aayenge..

Tum paas kitna bhi ho mere,mujhe door lagte ho kyon sanam.
Hum kal bhi tanhaa thay raah mein,aur tanhaa hi rah jaayenge..

Hai jo dard dil mein nihaan mere,ye diya hai kisne bataa zaraa.
Kya khabar thi mujhko ki dost bhi,mujhe zakhm de ke sataayenge..

Mujhe waqt sa kyon bhula diya,mere humsafar mere humnavaa..
Hum ban ke khushboo-e-gul sanam,teri zindagi mahkaayenge..

Kar ek baar tu koshishen,mujhe khud mein tu mahsoos kar.
Hum ban ke chitra "Vichitra"sa,tere dil mein hi nazaraayenge..

Vichitra ji.......aap ne bahut khub likha hai.....aapki rachna ke ehsaas aur khayaal bahut khubsurat lage mujhe....sabhi sher ache bane hai.....aur nayapan liye hai....naazuk panktiyon mai gehri soch dekhai deti hai aapki ghazal mai....jo ek achi baat hai......aise hi likhte rahiye.......khush rahiye.....

bas post karte waqt ghazal ke har sher ke baad thoda antar dene se prastuti aur aakarshak lagegi......iska dhiyaan rakha karo.......jaise maine aapko karke dikhaya hai........

ache kehne ke liye main tahe dil se daad detaa hu....kabul famaaye......

[Hassan]

Vichitra Ji,
Boht khoob likha aap ne,
Phar kar maza aa gaya...
Naresh Ji ne oper aap ko sahi mashwara dia hai,
Is tarah khobsurti bhi aaye gi aur pharne wala ziyada
aasani se phar sake ga....
Aisay hi likhtay rahiye ga...

GOD BLESS YOU,

Take care,

[vichiter]

[quote=naresh_mehra110;366080]Na talaash kar hamen ashkon mein,tere dil mein hum bus jaayenge.
Tu bulayegi hamein baaraha,kabhi laut kar nahin aayenge..

Jo talaashne ki ho justajoo,zara aankh apni tu band kar.
Tera ishq sachcha hua agar,hameen-hum nazar tujhe aayenge..

Gaye waqt mein na talaash kar,main basaa hoon teri nigaah mein.
Tere ashk ban kar aaina,mera aqs tujh ko dikhaayenge..

Hain jo chand lamhe bache huye,mujhe yaad kar le tu toot kar.
Kya pataa ki kal koi aur bhi,teri zeest mein chale aayenge..

Tum paas kitna bhi ho mere,mujhe door lagte ho kyon sanam.
Hum kal bhi tanhaa thay raah mein,aur tanhaa hi rah jaayenge..

Hai jo dard dil mein nihaan mere,ye diya hai kisne bataa zaraa.
Kya khabar thi mujhko ki dost bhi,mujhe zakhm de ke sataayenge..

Mujhe waqt sa kyon bhula diya,mere humsafar mere humnavaa..
Hum ban ke khushboo-e-gul sanam,teri zindagi mahkaayenge..

Kar ek baar tu koshishen,mujhe khud mein tu mahsoos kar.
Hum ban ke chitra "Vichitra"sa,tere dil mein hi nazaraayenge..

Vichitra ji.......aap ne bahut khub likha hai.....aapki rachna ke ehsaas aur khayaal bahut khubsurat lage mujhe....sabhi sher ache bane hai.....aur nayapan liye hai....naazuk panktiyon mai gehri soch dekhai deti hai aapki ghazal mai....jo ek achi baat hai......aise hi likhte rahiye.......khush rahiye.....

bas post karte waqt ghazal ke har sher ke baad thoda antar dene se prastuti aur aakarshak lagegi......iska dhiyaan rakha karo.......jaise maine aapko karke dikhaya hai........

ache kehne ke liye main tahe dil se daad detaa hu....kabul famaaye......

Naresh bhai ko aadaab

appka hoslaaffzai ka shukriya bhai

aur jo bhi aapnay keha hai main

uska aghay say dhyaan rakhunga

aapka vichitra

[vichiter]

Originally Posted by Hassan Rasheed

Vichitra Ji,
Boht khoob likha aap ne,
Phar kar maza aa gaya...
Naresh Ji ne oper aap ko sahi mashwara dia hai,
Is tarah khobsurti bhi aaye gi aur pharne wala ziyada
aasani se phar sake ga....
Aisay hi likhtay rahiye ga...

GOD BLESS YOU,

Take care,

Hassan sahaab aadaab

aapki aur naresh bhai jaan ka mashwara yaad rakhunga main

aapka pyaar aisay hi milta rahayga aisi hi kaamna karta hoon

aapka

vichitra

[matwala chatak]

aap ki is mehfil mai VICHITRA KA SALAAM
kuch kehna aur ruk jana,batoon ka yeh tana bana,
kaise bana yeh main naa jana.............................:confus ed:
DOSTON DIL KI BAAT HAI JUBAAN PER AANAY MAIN TIME TO LAGTA HI HAI FIR HANSKAR BOLO YAA ROKAR.....DIL KI BAAT TO DIL HI JAANTA HAI .........................
Na talaash kar hamen ashkon mein,tere dil mein hum bus jaayenge.

Tu bulayegi hamein baaraha,kabhi laut kar nahin aayenge..

Jo talaashne ki ho justajoo,zara aankh apni tu band kar.

Tera ishq sachcha hua agar,hameen-hum nazar tujhe aayenge..

Gaye waqt mein na talaash kar,main basaa hoon teri nigaah mein.

Tere ashk ban kar aaina,mera aqs tujh ko dikhaayenge..

Hain jo chand lamhe bache huye,mujhe yaad kar le tu toot kar.

Kya pataa ki kal koi aur bhi,teri zeest mein chale aayenge..

Tum paas kitna bhi ho mere,mujhe door lagte ho kyon sanam.

Hum kal bhi tanhaa thay raah mein,aur tanhaa hi rah jaayenge..

Hai jo dard dil mein nihaan mere,ye diya hai kisne bataa zaraa.

Kya khabar thi mujhko ki dost bhi,mujhe zakhm de ke sataayenge..

Mujhe waqt sa kyon bhula diya,mere humsafar mere humnavaa..

Hum ban ke khushboo-e-gul sanam,teri zindagi mahkaayenge..

Kar ek baar tu koshishen,mujhe khud mein tu mahsoos kar.

Hum ban ke chitra "Vichitra"sa,tere dil mein hi nazaraayenge..

[/quote]


VICHITRA JI

AADAAB ARZ HAI JANAAB

AAPKI YEH GAZAL MERE DIL KO BHATI HAI............HAR SHAYR KA APNA EK

ANDAAZ HOTA HAI .........WAISAY AAPKA YEH LIKHNAY KAA ANDAAZ

MUJHKO PASAND AAYA DIL DADD DAITA HOON KABOOL KIJIYEGA


MATWALA CHATAK

[Chota Sa Dil]

hi

this was very nice, i enjoyed it. keep writitng .

[vichiter]

Originally Posted by matwala chatak

aap ki is mehfil mai VICHITRA KA SALAAM
kuch kehna aur ruk jana,batoon ka yeh tana bana,
kaise bana yeh main naa jana.............................:confus ed:
DOSTON DIL KI BAAT HAI JUBAAN PER AANAY MAIN TIME TO LAGTA HI HAI FIR HANSKAR BOLO YAA ROKAR.....DIL KI BAAT TO DIL HI JAANTA HAI .........................
Na talaash kar hamen ashkon mein,tere dil mein hum bus jaayenge.

Tu bulayegi hamein baaraha,kabhi laut kar nahin aayenge..

Jo talaashne ki ho justajoo,zara aankh apni tu band kar.

Tera ishq sachcha hua agar,hameen-hum nazar tujhe aayenge..

Gaye waqt mein na talaash kar,main basaa hoon teri nigaah mein.

Tere ashk ban kar aaina,mera aqs tujh ko dikhaayenge..

Hain jo chand lamhe bache huye,mujhe yaad kar le tu toot kar.

Kya pataa ki kal koi aur bhi,teri zeest mein chale aayenge..

Tum paas kitna bhi ho mere,mujhe door lagte ho kyon sanam.

Hum kal bhi tanhaa thay raah mein,aur tanhaa hi rah jaayenge..

Hai jo dard dil mein nihaan mere,ye diya hai kisne bataa zaraa.

Kya khabar thi mujhko ki dost bhi,mujhe zakhm de ke sataayenge..

Mujhe waqt sa kyon bhula diya,mere humsafar mere humnavaa..

Hum ban ke khushboo-e-gul sanam,teri zindagi mahkaayenge..

Kar ek baar tu koshishen,mujhe khud mein tu mahsoos kar.

Hum ban ke chitra "Vichitra"sa,tere dil mein hi nazaraayenge..

VICHITRA JI

AADAAB ARZ HAI JANAAB

AAPKI YEH GAZAL MERE DIL KO BHATI HAI............HAR SHAYR KA APNA EK

ANDAAZ HOTA HAI .........WAISAY AAPKA YEH LIKHNAY KAA ANDAAZ

MUJHKO PASAND AAYA DIL DADD DAITA HOON KABOOL KIJIYEGA


MATWALA CHATAK[/quote]


janaab matwala ji
aadaab
aur aapnay jo meri rachna ko saraha hai uskay liye aapka bhout bhout shukriya.........
bas aap aisay hi apna pyaar banaye rakhiyega ....
main aap ki seva main aur kuch bhi likhta rahounga............

aapka

vichitra

[vichiter]

Originally Posted by Chota Sa Dil

hi

this was very nice, i enjoyed it. keep writitng .

aadaab
AAP KOUN HAI KRPYA BATAYEGA
aur aapnay jo meri rachna ko saraha hai uskay liye aapka bhout bhout shukriya.........
bas aap aisay hi apna pyaar banaye rakhiyega ....
main aap ki seva main aur kuch bhi likhta rahounga............
aapka

vichitra

[vichiter]

Originally Posted by vichiter

VICHITRA JI

AADAAB ARZ HAI JANAAB

AAPKI YEH GAZAL MERE DIL KO BHATI HAI............HAR SHAYR KA APNA EK

ANDAAZ HOTA HAI .........WAISAY AAPKA YEH LIKHNAY KAA ANDAAZ

MUJHKO PASAND AAYA DIL DADD DAITA HOON KABOOL KIJIYEGA


MATWALA CHATAK

janaab matwala ji
aadaab
aur aapnay jo meri rachna ko saraha hai uskay liye aapka bhout bhout shukriya.........
bas aap aisay hi apna pyaar banaye rakhiyega ....
main aap ki seva main aur kuch bhi likhta rahounga............

aapka

vichitra[/quote]

Aap sabhi gazal kay shokeeno ka dhanyavaad

aapka vichitra

[vichiter]

App sabhi ka hoslaaffzai ka shukriya

Aapka vichitra

[matwala chatak]

Originally Posted by vichiter

VICHITRA JI

AADAAB ARZ HAI JANAAB

AAPKI YEH GAZAL MERE DIL KO BHATI HAI............HAR SHAYR KA APNA EK

ANDAAZ HOTA HAI .........WAISAY AAPKA YEH LIKHNAY KAA ANDAAZ

MUJHKO PASAND AAYA DIL DADD DAITA HOON KABOOL KIJIYEGA


MATWALA CHATAK

janaab matwala ji
aadaab
aur aapnay jo meri rachna ko saraha hai uskay liye aapka bhout bhout shukriya.........
bas aap aisay hi apna pyaar banaye rakhiyega ....
main aap ki seva main aur kuch bhi likhta rahounga............

aapka

vichitra[/quote]

bhai vichitra ji

mera pyaar aisay hi bana rahayga ager aap bhi mujh say aisa hi reshta bana kar rakhogay to


matwala chatak

[vichiter]

Originally Posted by matwala chatak

janaab matwala ji
aadaab
aur aapnay jo meri rachna ko saraha hai uskay liye aapka bhout bhout shukriya.........
bas aap aisay hi apna pyaar banaye rakhiyega ....
main aap ki seva main aur kuch bhi likhta rahounga............

aapka

vichitra

bhai vichitra ji

mera pyaar aisay hi bana rahayga ager aap bhi mujh say aisa hi reshta bana kar rakhogay to


matwala chatak[/quote]

appkay is pyaar kay liye dhnyavaad

aapka vichitra

[vichiter]

[quote=vichiter;367064]bhai vichitra ji

mera pyaar aisay hi bana rahayga ager aap bhi mujh say aisa hi reshta bana kar rakhogay to


matwala chatak

appkay is pyaar kay liye dhnyavaad

aapka vichitra

[kwahish]

Originally Posted by vichiter

Na talaash kar hamen ashkon mein,tere dil mein hum bus jaayenge.
Tu bulayegi hamein baaraha,kabhi laut kar nahin aayenge..

Jo talaashne ki ho justajoo,zara aankh apni tu band kar.
Tera ishq sachcha hua agar,hameen-hum nazar tujhe aayenge..

Tum paas kitna bhi ho mere,mujhe door lagte ho kyon sanam.
Hum kal bhi tanhaa thay raah mein,aur tanhaa hi rah jaayenge..

Hai jo dard dil mein nihaan mere,ye diya hai kisne bataa zaraa.
Kya khabar thi mujhko ki dost bhi,mujhe zakhm de ke sataayenge..

Mujhe waqt sa kyon bhula diya,mere humsafar mere humnavaa..
Hum ban ke khushboo-e-gul sanam,teri zindagi mahkaayenge..

Vichitra Sahab ...

Ek achchi koshish per dil se daad kabool kijiye..
Achche sher lage ... aapki pakad ishq per achchi hai but dard jhalak raha hai ishq mein bhi... Keep it up bro keep smiling..

Aate rahiye,
Khush Rahiye,
Khuda Hafez..

[matwala chatak]

baday bhai ko aadaab

kaisay hain bhai

kuch naya sunaiye na aapki shayri main maza aata hai ........jaldi say kuch suna dijiye na plz,,,,,,,,aapki naye gazal ka intzaar hai .........?

matwala chatak

[matwala chatak]

bhaiya ji ko namshkaar

bhaiya aapki shayri main bada dard hai

kehtay hai ki yeh dard jab hota hai shayri main jab khood koi dil par dard kha

chuka hota hai to kya aapnay bhi koi dard apnay dil main chipaya hua hai

jaldi say jawaab dena

matwala chatak

[vichiter]

Originally Posted by kwahish

Vichitra Sahab ...

Ek achchi koshish per dil se daad kabool kijiye..
Achche sher lage ... aapki pakad ishq per achchi hai but dard jhalak raha hai ishq mein bhi... Keep it up bro keep smiling..

Aate rahiye,
Khush Rahiye,
Khuda Hafez..

bhai jaan aadaab
App ka hoslaaffzai ka shukriya

Aapka vichitra

[vichiter]

Originally Posted by matwala chatak

bhaiya ji ko namshkaar

bhaiya aapki shayri main bada dard hai

kehtay hai ki yeh dard jab hota hai shayri main jab khood koi dil par dard kha

chuka hota hai to kya aapnay bhi koi dard apnay dil main chipaya hua hai

jaldi say jawaab dena

matwala chatak

bhai matwala ji namshkaar

Aise koi baat nahin hai .....par jo dil main aata hai wahi

kagaz par utar liya karta hoonb bas itna hi hai
aapka vichitra

[vichiter]

App sabhi ka hoslaaffzai ka shukriya

Aapka vichitra

[matwala chatak]

Originally Posted by vichiter

bhai matwala ji namshkaar

Aise koi baat nahin hai .....par jo dil main aata hai wahi

kagaz par utar liya karta hoonb bas itna hi hai
aapka vichitra

bhaiya ji ko pranaam

chalo maan leta hoon bhai par yeh sach hai ki aapki shayri main kafi dard hai ab wo sach hai yaa kya hai yeh to aap hi jaantay hai...........

matwala chatak

[vichiter]

Originally Posted by matwala chatak

bhaiya ji ko pranaam

chalo maan leta hoon bhai par yeh sach hai ki aapki shayri main kafi dard hai ab wo sach hai yaa kya hai yeh to aap hi jaantay hai...........

matwala chatak

jai ram ji ki

bhai bataya na jo dil main hota hai usi ko kagaz par utaar daita hoon

aapka vichitra

[Taish]

Originally Posted by vichiter

aap ki is mehfil mai VICHITRA KA SALAAM
kuch kehna aur ruk jana,batoon ka yeh tana bana,
kaise bana yeh main naa jana.............................:confus ed:
DOSTON DIL KI BAAT HAI JUBAAN PER AANAY MAIN TIME TO LAGTA HI HAI FIR HANSKAR BOLO YAA ROKAR.....DIL KI BAAT TO DIL HI JAANTA HAI .........................
Na talaash kar hamen ashkon mein,tere dil mein hum bus jaayenge.
Tu bulayegi hamein baaraha,kabhi laut kar nahin aayenge..
Jo talaashne ki ho justajoo,zara aankh apni tu band kar.
Tera ishq sachcha hua agar,hameen-hum nazar tujhe aayenge..
Gaye waqt mein na talaash kar,main basaa hoon teri nigaah mein.
Tere ashk ban kar aaina,mera aqs tujh ko dikhaayenge..
Hain jo chand lamhe bache huye,mujhe yaad kar le tu toot kar.
Kya pataa ki kal koi aur bhi,teri zeest mein chale aayenge..
Tum paas kitna bhi ho mere,mujhe door lagte ho kyon sanam.
Hum kal bhi tanhaa thay raah mein,aur tanhaa hi rah jaayenge..
Hai jo dard dil mein nihaan mere,ye diya hai kisne bataa zaraa.
Kya khabar thi mujhko ki dost bhi,mujhe zakhm de ke sataayenge..
Mujhe waqt sa kyon bhula diya,mere humsafar mere humnavaa..
Hum ban ke khushboo-e-gul sanam,teri zindagi mahkaayenge..
Kar ek baar tu koshishen,mujhe khud mein tu mahsoos kar.
Hum ban ke chitra "Vichitra"sa,tere dil mein hi nazaraayenge..

Ek baar fir se nacheez ka salaam janaab,


ghazal ki shuruat asardaar thi par beech me kahiN thodi kamzor si lagi, par maqta haasil-e-ghazal raha, umeed karta huN ki aage v aapko padhne ka mauka milta rahega bas yuNhi likhte rahiye...!!

Aapka GHAYAL...!!

[vichiter]

Originally Posted by ghayal_shayar

Ek baar fir se nacheez ka salaam janaab,


ghazal ki shuruat asardaar thi par beech me kahiN thodi kamzor si lagi, par maqta haasil-e-ghazal raha, umeed karta huN ki aage v aapko padhne ka mauka milta rahega bas yuNhi likhte rahiye...!!

Aapka GHAYAL...!!

janaab ghayal ji

shukriya aapnay jo meri rachna ko sarha ...........aaghay bhi aapka pyaar

youhin milta rahayga.aisi aasha hai mujhko

aapka vichitra

[matwala chatak]

Originally Posted by vichiter

jai ram ji ki

bhai bataya na jo dil main hota hai usi ko kagaz par utaar daita hoon

aapka vichitra

namshkaar bahiya ji

kaisay hai aap...........bas mujhko aisae hi koi ada sikhla dijiyena

matwala chatak

[vichiter]

Originally Posted by matwala chatak

namshkaar bahiya ji

kaisay hai aap...........bas mujhko aisae hi koi ada sikhla dijiyena

matwala chatak

namshkar ji

main to achcha hoon ji ......aap apni sunaiye .............bhai yeh koi ada nahin

hai....ab aap isko ada samjho yaa kuch aur ..........

aapka vichitra

[matwala chatak]

Originally Posted by vichiter

namshkar ji

main to achcha hoon ji ......aap apni sunaiye .............bhai yeh koi ada nahin

hai....ab aap isko ada samjho yaa kuch aur ..........

aapka vichitra

bhiya ji ko parnaam

main bhi achcha hoon bhiya ji

maine jo samjha hai aapko wo yahi ki aapki har kavita har gazal main ek

naya eahsaas aur ek alag terha ka dard hota hai

aapsay kuch na kuch naya sikhnay ko milta hai ....humesha khush rahiyega

matwala chatak

[sajid_ghayel]

Bohat khooob Vichitre saheb kya khoob dard aur mohabbat ka tana bana boona hain aapne.........padhte padhte yu laga mano koi geet gunguna raha hu.