Main...aur meri tanhai... -
27th January 2006, 11:50 AM
Dosto maaf karna bade dino baad idher aana ho paya...aur is masroofiyat me ham kisi k kalaam per bhi shirkat na kar paye...aaj thora likhne ki koshish ki hai...na jaane pasand aayega ya nahi...apne vichaar dijiyega pls...
Tanhai k maile hai...duniya me ham akele hai..
chahat unki badhti hi jaati hai..syah na-umeedi k ghere hai..
chhitakti sooraz ki roshni bhi..na hamko raas aati hai..
jalaati hai mere jakhmo ko...jab unki yaad aati hai..
na laati hai ye(roshni) koi umeed...na koi aas bandhati hai..
main niraashao k andhero main...aur ye mujh per hi muskurati hai...
mere masoom dil sambhal....na koi yaha tera saathi hai..
jaha.n ki berukhi ki daulat hi...kyu e dil tere pehlu me aati hai
khamosh lab kyu sisakte hai baar - baar, har baar...
rukhsaaro pe tere kyu udaasi khail jaati hai...
Re: Main...aur meri tanhai... -
27th January 2006, 12:02 PM
Tanhai k maile hai...duniya me ham akele hai..
chahat unki badhti hi jaati hai..syah na-umeedi k ghere hai..
khamosh lab kyu sisakte hai baar - baar, har baar...
rukhsaaro pe tere kyu udaasi khail jaati hai...
priye gam e lashkar ji
bahooot khooob,,,!!! yun to saari rachana hi kaabile tareeef hai,,magar in 2 sheron mein na jane kaisi maasusi jhalak rahi hai,,,jo dil ko chooo gayi.....meri daad kuboool kijiye
take care
-MANOJ
apne usoolon par ham apne andaaz se chalte hai
karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein.
thanks aap yaha aaye..hame lag raha tha ki aap yaha zaroor aayenge...vo kehte hai na...jo baate dil ko choo jati hai unhe aap chah kar b nazer-andaaz nahi kar sakte...aur hm bakhubi jaante hai ki aapka hamara taste milta julta hai...means aap bi isi type ka likhte hai..aur ham b kuch u hi likha karte hai..
bahaut hi accha likkha hai aapne...ise padhke mere zubaan se bhi bas yahi baat nikli hai ik aah ke saath ki "mein aur meri tanhaai...."
kaash yeh dard na hota ...yeh mayoosi na hoti...yeh ranj aur dard ki deeware toot ke bikhar gayi hoti...
kaash...!
apna khyaal rakhiyega.
"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."
kamal kar diya lashkar bhai aapne
Tanhai k maile hai...duniya me ham akele hai..
chahat unki badhti hi jaati hai..syah na-umeedi k ghere hai..
wah wah!!!!!!! maza aa gaya
keep coming and do posting like that
meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi
ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main
na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi