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meri tanhai - 17th July 2006, 06:02 PM

raat ke is andhiyare main
jab yaad kisi ki aati hai
sankdon dipak jaal uthte hain
aur tasveer tumhari nazar aati hai;
* kehene ko to saab kehete hain
kami hai kis baat ki, lekin
jab har shab sochti hun to
jholi khali hi nazar aati hai;
* mar gayi hun fhir bhi
har kam jindadili se karti hun
dekhte hain aye jindgi
is hansi ke peechee kitnon ko
meri mut nazar aati hai.
   
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18th July 2006, 11:17 AM

lovely aapke dard badi gahare hain.
esa lagta hai. dard me apni kalam ko dubaker aapne ye baat likhi hai.
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Re: meri tanhai - 18th July 2006, 03:06 PM

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raat ke is andhiyare main
jab yaad kisi ki aati hai
sankdon dipak jaal uthte hain
aur tasveer tumhari nazar aati hai;
* kehene ko to saab kehete hain
kami hai kis baat ki, lekin
jab har shab sochti hun to
jholi khali hi nazar aati hai;
* mar gayi hun fhir bhi
har kam jindadili se karti hun
dekhte hain aye jindgi
is hansi ke peechee kitnon ko
meri mut nazar aati hai.

hello lovely

tumarey last share ka reply karti hu:

"mere hastey chehrey par na janna dosto,
pad kar dekhogey to dard ki ek kitaab hu mai"


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Re: Re: meri tanhai - 20th August 2006, 10:25 AM

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hello lovely

tumarey last share ka reply karti hu:

"mere hastey chehrey par na janna dosto,
pad kar dekhogey to dard ki ek kitaab hu mai"


didi aapne bahut accha reply diya hai.
"
jhakm ithne seene me dabaye hue hunnm main
dard khud sochta hai kahan kahn se uthun. "


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Re: Re: meri tanhai - 23rd August 2006, 05:10 PM

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hello lovely

tumarey last share ka reply karti hu:

"mere hastey chehrey par na janna dosto,
pad kar dekhogey to dard ki ek kitaab hu mai"
namaste sunita ji,

appka reply aaya bahut acha laga. appka prohotsahan milta rahega to aage badne ka hosla milta rahega.

app agar dost banayen to appki dost
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