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ek baar main tujh se phir milna chahata hu...... |
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5th July 2009, 12:15 PM
ek baar main tujh se phir milna chahata hu...... main ab teri yaadon ke ghar mai rehna chahata hu tanahayi ke aandhero mai tere chehre ki roshni chahata hu... aate hai bahut baar aansu meri aankho jaane kiyon teri gunguni ungliyon ka palkon pe woh ehsaas chahata hu.... hoti hai jab kabhi barsaat mere aas-paas itni jor se uss pal tere saath ek baar bheegna chahata hu...... dil mai rakhi hai muddaton se jo mohabbat ki kitaab woh tere saath baith ke baar-baar padhna chahata hu..... chhod ke gai thi tu jis gali ke khambe ke paas mujhe tanaha uss jagha ek baar main tujh se phir milna chahata hu......  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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5th July 2009, 12:28 PM
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एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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Anshumali
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5th July 2009, 07:49 PM
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Arvind ji....aapne meri nazm ko padha aur yaha tak pasand kiya ki aapke beete huye pal yaad aa gaye.....is kadar meri nazm ko sarahne ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya........... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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5th July 2009, 07:52 PM
bohat beautiful hai nareshji................ aap sach mei bohat pyaara likhte hai
u hi likhte rahiye and mujhe tareef ka mauka dijiye luv..... |
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6th July 2009, 10:23 PM
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Khanak ji.....aapse tarif mile....aisa mauka mujhe baar baar mile....iske liye mujhe aur jiyada achi koshish karte rehni hogi...yeh hausla aap dosto se toh milta hai....sarahana ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya............ YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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7th July 2009, 02:55 PM
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Regards  _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
 Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota Ananthpak |
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7th July 2009, 03:09 PM
Nice work Naresh Jee..............
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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7th July 2009, 08:23 PM
Naresh jee,
ehesaas bahot achha laga ,mujhe SDC ki vo pahla pahla din yaad aagayi isse padhkar (Jab main new join ki thi ), main aise hi bina soche sirf ehesaas ko bayaaN karti thi .......yeh masoomiyat ko younhi barkrar rakhna akshar radeef qaafia meter ki khayal meiN yeh ehesaas kahin na kahin dam tod deta hai ......yeh sachai hai bas youn share karne ka mann hua aaj so kah diya ..bura na manna apna khayal rakhna Youn hi likhte rahna Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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8th July 2009, 01:11 PM
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Diya ji....aapko yaha dekhkar mujhe bahut khushi hui....aapne meri nazm ko padhkar jo apne vichar likhe woh bhi hame aziz hai....vaise bhi lekhan mai hamesha student hi rehte hai....kabhi kuch acha ban jata hai....kabhi kamzor bhi reh jaata hai....phir har ek ka apna nazariya alag hota hai.....vise ye nazam itni bhi bachkani nahi bani hai.....ye ek ehsaas hai....pata nahi aapko kaise laga ki dam tod rahi hai....ehsaas toh kabhi marte nahi hai....woh toh hamesha saath rehte hai....sadiyon tak.... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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8th July 2009, 01:14 PM
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Sajid bhai....meri nazm ki sarahana karne ke liye ....aapka tahe dil se shukriya.................. YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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10th July 2009, 06:13 PM
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Praneeta Ji..... aapko meri nazm pasand aai ........iske liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya.... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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11th July 2009, 01:06 PM
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Naresh jee, sayad aap meri baat ko thik se samjh nahi paye .........main vo baat aapki ghazal keliye nahi .....apni hi baat aapse share kar rahi thi .........aapko bura laga toh muaaf kijiye aapki tahrer bahot achha hai apna khayal rakhiye Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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11th July 2009, 01:35 PM
Narseh jii
aapke ahsaas hume acche lage. yeh sher to mausam ko dekhtey hue hume behad apsand aaya, barsaat ho aur opper se aisa sher padne ko miley to kya kehna hoti hai jab kabhi barsaat mere aas-paas itni jor se uss pal tere saath ek baar bheegna chahata hu...... yeh 2 sher dil ke kareeb rahe.....daad hazir hai. dil mai rakhi hai muddaton se jo mohabbat ki kitaab woh tere saath baith ke baar-baar padhna chahata hu..... chhod ke gai thi tu jis gali ke khambe ke paas mujhe tanaha uss jagha ek baar main tujh se phir milna chahata hu kush rahiye god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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12th July 2009, 09:07 AM
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Sunita ji.......aap ko meri koshish pasand aai aur itni pasand aai.....mujhe bahut acha laga......aise hi mujhe himmat aur hausla dete rahiyega..... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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19th July 2009, 10:08 AM
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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19th July 2009, 10:21 PM
HI Naresh jiii
kaise hain aap? ghazal pasand aayii ... dua karti hu aapko aapki chahate kabool hon ese hi ehsaas nazar karte rahye take care mandeep ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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20th July 2009, 08:04 PM
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Mandeep ji.........main theek hu........aap kaisi hai..........aapko meri nazm pasand aai......mujhe acha laga.......aap aise hi meri koshish ko hausla dete rahiyega........aap hamesha khush rahiye...aur hamse milte rahiyeg........ YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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21st July 2009, 02:25 PM
Acche ehsaas hain... padhkar accha laga... yun hi likhte rahiye...
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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22nd July 2009, 05:28 PM
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Pulkit ji......aap ne meri koshish ko pasand kiya .......iske liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya............ YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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1st August 2009, 04:17 PM
tumhaare aane talak ham ko hosh rahataa hai phir usake baad hame.n kuchh Khabar nahii.n hotii ----sahir---- YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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31st October 2009, 09:40 AM
" ishq ka koi jaha mai paimana nahi hota
judai mai ashk ka sirf beh jana nahi hota takdeer mai likhaa ho dard jab itnaa saara chaha ke bhi insaan ke vash mai kuch nahi hota....." YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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1st November 2009, 12:23 AM
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Tera saath jaane kiyon khuda ko manzoor nahi thaa... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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