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29th September 2007, 10:24 AM
Aise naa apne pyar ko tu bhula mere humdum,
Hone ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum....... Samet kar bhar le mujhe apni baahon mein kahin, Sang le chal muhabbat se bhari raahon mein kahin...... Baarish mein bheeg jaaye, aa ek baar phir se hum, Shararaton ke saath meri, aankhon mein ho ja gum...... Bhar le nigaah mein, Naa nigaah hata mere humdum, Hone ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum....... Ek baar to aa Ghar mere, Kabhi naa jaane ke liye Aa rok dein yeh waqt yahin, Dil diewaane ke liye..... Kar de armaan poora ki teri baahon mein nikle dum, Yeh aakhiri ho lafz mere, ki Tum Hi Ho Mere Sanam........ Bikhra mujhe, Mera Khwaab na bikhra mere humdum.... Hone ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum..... Koi kissa chedd ke pyaar ka, mujhe jaga tu raat bhar, Khud ko naa rok aaj, Naa koi pehra laga zazbaat par..... Guzar naa jaaye raat kahin, Kar ke humey gumsum, Rehne de abhi kuch aur deir yunhi pyaar ka Bharam.... Aur zara si deir theher, Abhi naa jaa mere humdum.... HOne ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum.... Aabhi Na Jaa Mere Humdum............. |
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29th September 2007, 10:43 AM
Hi sandhya ji
kese ho aap??? ummid hai khariyat se hi honge...... sandhya ji ab mein kya kahu aapki is rachna ke baare mein, aapne jo yaha bayan kiya hai wo daad-e-kabil hai...........daad hazir hai janab kabuliyega... sandhya ji jis khubsurati se, jis pyaar se, jis tadap se aapne apne jazbaaton ko sabdo mein bayan kiya hai ..wah janab wah, yaar koi alfaaz nahi hai aaj hamare pas aapke is sabdoN ke aage.... Dil is kadar khush hua hai aaj aapki is rachna ko padhke ki lagta hai aaj mein bhi kho jau pyaar ke wo jahan mein jahan bas pyaar hi pyaar ho aur sang mera yaar ho......... Hamensa yuhi likhte rahiyega aapka dost Merul  Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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29th September 2007, 06:17 PM
nice poem sandhya g..
kp it up..tc  
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30th September 2007, 03:21 PM
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kaise ho aap? MASHA ALLAH ,kya baat hai, itne dino ke baad hi sahi,,per kitni pyari nazm ke saath wapsi ki hai, aapki ye nazm padh kar dil khush hogaya, bas ab aate rehna. or apna bohot sara khayal rakhna, khush raho, ALLAH HAFIZ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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30th September 2007, 04:24 PM
Dear chhoTi behanaa :
maine tumhaari kavviSh kal hi paDh lii thi jab tumne taazaah taazaah bazm meiN post ki thi..  aur achchhaa kiYa tumne meri baat maanii.aur bazm meiN apnii naYi teHreer peSh kii... kyuuN kii tumne baRa hi laMbaa break le liyaa thaa..  usskey liYe ShuKriyaaH..!bahot hi pyaar bharaa liKhaa hay tumne.. har baar ki taraH kosiSh bahot hi achchhii ki haii.. aur meHnat bhee..tumhaari kosiSh meiN aik line yuuN hai : Ek baar to aa Ghar mere, Kabhi naa jaane ke liye Aa rok dein yeh waqt yahin, Dil diewaane ke liye yahaaN Shuruaat meiN tumne jo liKhaa hay "ek baar aa Ghar mere " usski jaGah tum yuuN bhee liKh sakti thii " ek baar bas ja tu dil meiN mere " .. kabhee na jaane ke liYe... chhoTi behanaa yeH merii neeji raa'ey hai .. dil meiN Khayaal aaYa to apni behanaa ko bataa diYaa..  pasaNd na aayeN to mwaaf kar denaa.. mujHe yeH kosiSh be-had pasand aaYii.. dil sey niklii hu'ii daad ko qabuul karnaa.. aur YuuNhi liKhati raho.. abki baar itanaa laMbaa sa break nahiiN ok? duaa hay Zor-e-qalaam aur baRheN zeyaadaaH.. KhuSh raho.. apnaa Khayaal raKhanaa..duaaoN ke saath ijaazat jai Shree kriShnaa, tumhaara BHaa'ii ~ Dhaval |
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30th September 2007, 09:18 PM
superbbbbbb sandhya ji just superbbb awesome.loved yr lovely poem really.bahut bahut zabardast likhahai aapne.itna pyaar bhar diya hai is nazm mai ke bas padhte hi chalejaayen.
bhaut khoob,dil se di daad kabool karen,likhti rahen yunhin Quote:
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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30th September 2007, 10:19 PM
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Lagta hai Gudiya badi ho rahi hai!!!!! Bahut hi khoobsoorati se ehsaas pesh kiye meri Gudiya ne!!! Daad kubool karo! Humesha khush raho! ~Priya` "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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1st October 2007, 01:05 PM
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 agar hum ek ansu hote, to apki ankhon se hokar apke hothon par marna pasand karte. agar ap meri ankhon ke ansu hote, to vaada he jaan hum zindgi bhar N rote... Merii subah terii muriid hai merii shaam tere hii naam se Tere dar se nahii main jaau.Ngaa ye Khayaal dil se nikal de --------------------------------------- ****allah hafiz**** **aadi9935458083** ***take care*** (¨`·.·´¨) Always `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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9th October 2007, 04:34 AM
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9th October 2007, 04:36 AM
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aapka tahe dil se shukriya meri is choti se koshish ko padhne aur pasand kar ne ke liya....aapka saath mila bahut aacha laga....shukriya.... aapki dost, sandhya........ |
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9th October 2007, 04:39 AM
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i m gud...aap kesi ho...aapki ise choti behan ko maaf karna leat reply ke liya... humesha ki tarah mera saath dene ke liya bahut bahut shukriya...bahut dino baad kuch post kiya aaur aap sabka saath mila ye hi bahut badi baat hai...di aapka tahe dilse shukriya... aapki dost, sandhya |
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9th October 2007, 04:47 AM
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bhaiya aapka saath mila bahut hi aacha laga...aur haa chhote behan hu bhai ke baat to man ni pade gi na....yakeen nahi tha itne dino baad bhi aap sabka ish tarah se saath mile ga...aur haa muje bura nahi laga...par bahut hi aacha laga ke aapne muje aapki socha bata ye...aur aapne jo kaha vo sahi bhi he...aur sach me muje bahut aacha laga ke aapne aapni socha muje bataye...aur meri galti bhi hui he isme bahut...par phire bhi aap logo ka saath mila ye mere liya bahut he...aur koshish ye hi rahe gi ke aage aapko sikayat ka moka na du...aur aacha likhne ki koshish karungi...bahut bahut shukriya meri ise choti se koshish ko padhne ke liye aur pasand karne ke liya....aapni behan ka aise hi saath dete rehna.... Jai shree krishan aapki chhoti behan, sandhya |
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9th October 2007, 04:58 AM
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akelijaan ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya aapne hume padha aur pasand kiya...mera saath dene ke liya bahut bahut shukriya...thanx a lot for ur saport....umid hai ke aage bhi aapka saath milta rahe ga....n sorry for the late reply....thank you ones again..... aapki dost, sandhya |
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9th October 2007, 05:08 AM
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di aapka bahut bahut shukriya...par ye galat he aapki gudiya aabhi bhi gudiya he hai...agar koi bhul hui ho to aapni ise gudiya ko jarur daat na....aap sabke jitne badi kabhi nahi ban sakti ye gudiya...aur muje bhi gudiya hi rahe ne do...aap ki jaada daat to nahi pade gi.....hahaha....di aap ka bahut bahut shukriya ke aapne mera saath diya...aur der se reply ke liya maffi cahti hu...aapni ise gudiya ko maaf karna...... aapki gudiya |
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9th October 2007, 05:18 AM
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9th October 2007, 04:49 PM
बहोत खुब लिखा है आपने...
आपके शायरी को मेरा सलाम. |
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10th October 2007, 12:07 PM
[QUOTE=Sandhya1;250983]Aise naa apne pyar ko tu bhula mere humdum,
Hone ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum....... Samet kar bhar le mujhe apni baahon mein kahin, Sang le chal muhabbat se bhari raahon mein kahin...... Baarish mein bheeg jaaye, aa ek baar phir se hum, Shararaton ke saath meri, aankhon mein ho ja gum...... Bhar le nigaah mein, Naa nigaah hata mere humdum, Hone ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum....... Ek baar to aa Ghar mere, Kabhi naa jaane ke liye Aa rok dein yeh waqt yahin, Dil diewaane ke liye..... Kar de armaan poora ki teri baahon mein nikle dum, Yeh aakhiri ho lafz mere, ki Tum Hi Ho Mere Sanam........ Bikhra mujhe, Mera Khwaab na bikhra mere humdum.... Hone ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum..... Koi kissa chedd ke pyaar ka, mujhe jaga tu raat bhar, Khud ko naa rok aaj, Naa koi pehra laga zazbaat par..... Guzar naa jaaye raat kahin, Kar ke humey gumsum, Rehne de abhi kuch aur deir yunhi pyaar ka Bharam.... Aur zara si deir theher, Abhi naa jaa mere humdum.... HOne ko hai subah, Ab naa rula mere humdum.... Aabhi Na Jaa Mere Humdum.............[/QUOT mubarak ho yeh aasmatumko mubarak ho yeh sama tumko mubarak ho is andheri duniyamein dil mein raushan muhobbat ki shama tumko har khushiyon se daman bhare khuda tumhara rahe har gham tumse door banirahe phulon ki mehfil aap ke aaspaas aur rahe tanhaiyon ka aalam tumse door. mubarak ho yeh gulshan ka baharon ka jahan alvida sandhyaji kaynat |
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11th October 2007, 07:55 AM
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11th October 2007, 07:56 AM
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kaynat ji aapka shukriya reply karne ke liye aur ise hamre saath sahre karne ke liya... aapki dost, sandhya |
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12th October 2007, 11:58 AM
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Jisne likhi hai dil se likhi hai shayad... Waise original yaha par hai... http://www.*******.com/forums/abhi-n...--vt24869.html  Please Dont Copy Other's Work. That's Really Sad. |
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