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Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga - 15th December 2009, 06:57 PM

Mehfil e Ishq ki bazm ko mera salam,

Bahut dino bad koi nazm kahi hai, aapki nazar pesh kar raha huN........




Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga
Tu dekhe aaina chehra mera dikha hoga
Chuke guzare tujhe hawa ka jhonka
Tujhe laga ho maine chuaa hoga

Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga

Ahsaas mere dil meiN rakha ker
Raah chalte ajnabi ko dekha ker
Ek waham dil mein to jaga hoga
Us shaks mein tujhe main laga hoga

Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga

Kisi gulaab ko tumne todaa hoga
Koi kanta phir tujhe chubha hoga
Ek sisak si uthi hogi badan mein tere
Mujhe yaad kar tune ungli ko chumaa hoga

Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga

kahan maza fakhat baatoN mein hai
Kya maza hijar ki raatoN mein hai
Din mein tujhe bhi khumaar chaya hoga
Palke mund tune din ko raat banaya hoga

Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga

Shiddat e mohobbat ki tasir to hai
zubaan bhi ek badi shamshir to hai
tune kisi aur ka naam lena chaha
Zubaan per mera naam aaya hoga

Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga
Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga



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15th December 2009, 10:10 PM

Sameer Ji...bahut khub ! aapne mohabbat ke ehsaason ko badi maasoomiyat ke saath nazm mai pesh kiya hai.....sabhi panktiya dil ko chhuti hai....yuhi likhte rahiye.....

aakhir ki sabhi panktiya mujhe bahut pasand aai.....

kahan maza fakhat baatoN mein hai
Kya maza hijar ki raatoN mein hai
Din mein tujhe bhi khumaar chaya hoga
Palke mund tune din ko raat banaya hoga

Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga

Shiddat e mohobbat ki tasir to hai
zubaan bhi ek badi shamshir to hai
tune kisi aur ka naam lena chaha
Zubaan per mera naam aaya hoga

Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga
Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga
dil se daad hazir hai....kabul farmaaye....

apna khayal rakhiye...
duaaon ke saath.....




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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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29th December 2009, 10:54 PM

" Dua Nahi To Gila Deta Koi
Meri Wafaon Ka Sila Deta Koi

Jab Muquddar Hi Nahi Tha Apna
Deta Bhi To Kya Deta Koi.... "




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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wah saheb wah...! Khoob likha hai...i's nazam ki baat hi juda hai, behad pasand aayee....khayal bahut hi umda haiN....

Khwahish saheb...daad haazir hai...qubuul farmaayeN...

aapka dost,
Vikram...


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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30th December 2009, 03:36 AM

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Mehfil e Ishq ki bazm ko mera salam,

Bahut dino bad koi nazm kahi hai, aapki nazar pesh kar raha huN........




Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga
Tu dekhe aaina chehra mera dikha hoga
Chuke guzare tujhe hawa ka jhonka
Tujhe laga ho maine chuaa hoga

Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga

Ahsaas mere dil meiN rakha ker
Raah chalte ajnabi ko dekha ker
Ek waham dil mein to jaga hoga
Us shaks mein tujhe main laga hoga

Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga

Kisi gulaab ko tumne todaa hoga
Koi kanta phir tujhe chubha hoga
Ek sisak si uthi hogi badan mein tere
Mujhe yaad kar tune ungli ko chumaa hoga

Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga

kahan maza fakhat baatoN mein hai
Kya maza hijar ki raatoN mein hai
Din mein tujhe bhi khumaar chaya hoga
Palke mund tune din ko raat banaya hoga

Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga

Shiddat e mohobbat ki tasir to hai
zubaan bhi ek badi shamshir to hai
tune kisi aur ka naam lena chaha
Zubaan per mera naam aaya hoga

Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga
Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga


waah sahab cha gaye zabardast nazm bhut hi achi lagi har band ke ehsaas lajawaab daad hazir hai aapki is dalfaraib paishkash par qubool keejiye


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30th December 2009, 08:59 AM

Sameer Bhai,,

Adaab! Wah janab,,, boht hi khoobsorati se aap ne
tamaam ghazal anjaam di,,,,,

Yeh lines jab jab bhi ayiN, boht khaas rahiN,

"Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga"

In lafzooN mein be-panah piyaar jhalak raha hai,

Likhte rahiye aur mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye,,

Regardz,
Bhai aap ka,,


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Sameer Ji...bahut khub ! aapne mohabbat ke ehsaason ko badi maasoomiyat ke saath nazm mai pesh kiya hai.....sabhi panktiya dil ko chhuti hai....yuhi likhte rahiye.....
aakhir ki sabhi panktiya mujhe bahut pasand aai.....
kahan maza fakhat baatoN mein hai
Kya maza hijar ki raatoN mein hai
Din mein tujhe bhi khumaar chaya hoga
Palke mund tune din ko raat banaya hoga

Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga

Shiddat e mohobbat ki tasir to hai
zubaan bhi ek badi shamshir to hai
tune kisi aur ka naam lena chaha
Zubaan per mera naam aaya hoga

Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga
Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga

dil se daad hazir hai....kabul farmaaye....
apna khayal rakhiye...
duaaon ke saath.....
Naresh jee Aadaab..........

Yeh to aapki chaha hai ke aapko humaa likha kuch bhi pasand aa jata hai........
Aur humare liye yeh khush kismati ki baa hai ke aapke jaise dost bhi humari kismat mein hai

Waise maine yeh pui kalam yahan baithe bahithe hi likhi hai isliye main khud isse jyada kareeb se padha nahi aur soch nahi ke kya likha maine.........

Per aapki zaa nawazi ne hume yahan jhakne ko majoor kar diyaa......


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" Dua Nahi To Gila Deta Koi

Meri Wafaon Ka Sila Deta Koi
Jab Muquddar Hi Nahi Tha Apna

Deta Bhi To Kya Deta Koi.... "
Main aapka tahe dil se shuka guzar huN......... Aur aapka yeh sher behad pyara laga mujhe aur beshak bahut sahin kaha hai is sher mein "Deta bhi to kya deta koi........"

ISi sher se juda mera aagazi kalam hai..........

Dil ke ghamoN ko tanhai ki khizaa naa dey
De mujhe saza magar tu bad-duaa naa dey


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31st December 2009, 04:13 PM

Sameer ji...bahut khoob har tarz har sher aapne aam mein muqamal....reps +++.. very nicely written...

mujhe ek gaana aapne yaad dilaaya

jhonka hawaa ka aaj bhi from hum dil de chuke sanam

daad kubool farmaayee aur yunhi likhte rahe

aapka apnaa



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very nice sameer ji, behtreen khayal h or aapne bakhoobi unhe lafjo me dhala h..
daad kubul keejiye....
   
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wah saheb wah...! Khoob likha hai...i's nazam ki baat hi juda hai, behad pasand aayee....khayal bahut hi umda haiN....

Khwahish saheb...daad haazir hai...qubuul farmaayeN...

aapka dost,
Vikram...
Vikram jee aadaab.............!

Aapki tarif aur hounsla afzai se dil bahut khush ho gaya...... Younhi apna saath banaye rkahiye...... Aapki daad sir ankhoN per sahab ......

Khush rhaiye,
Apna khayal rakhiye,
Khuda Hafez.......


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waah sahab cha gaye zabardast nazm bhut hi achi lagi har band ke ehsaas lajawaab daad hazir hai aapki is dalfaraib paishkash par qubool keejiye


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Aslam sahab , Aadaab!

sahab yeh to aapki zarra nawazi hia jo aapko khaak alfaaz bhi achche lage, Aapki daad to beshak dil se kabool kiye sahab, aate rahiye,
Khush rhaiye, Apna saath banaye rakhiye,
Khuda hafez.............


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Sameer Bhai,,

Adaab! Wah janab,,, boht hi khoobsorati se aap ne
tamaam ghazal anjaam di,,,,,

Yeh lines jab jab bhi ayiN, boht khaas rahiN,

"Aye jaan ! kabhi aisa bhi huaa hoga"

In lafzooN mein be-panah piyaar jhalak raha hai,

Likhte rahiye aur mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye,,

Regardz,
Bhai aap ka,,
Hassan Bhai Aadaab!

Yeh nazm younhi baithe baithe kisi ke khayaloN mein kah dii thi..... haan Woh Line mein mohobbat bhara woh lafz hia jise aashiq bahut hi khubsurat andaaz mein use karte hai...

Koshish to jari hia per ab aise ahsaas nahi isliye kuch naya nahi likh paa raha huN....... SDC se apna wajood kho na dun isliye in purani nazmo aur gazaloN per reply kar raha huN

Hounsla afzai ka behad shukra guzar huN...
Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye,
Khush rhaiye,
Khuda Hafez,...


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