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Achcha lagta hai. - 21st September 2003, 12:24 PM

doston
fatima hasan ki ek nazm "achcha lagta hai"
usi zameen per mein ne bhi kuch kehne ki koshish ki hai.
aap doston ki aaraa ka muntazir rahoon gaa.

mujhe baarish kaa mausam aur baadal
achcha lagta hai
uski haseen aankhon mein phela kaajal
achcha lagta hai

ajab ek sirkhushi aane se uske
mujh ko milti hai
voh choori ki khanak aur paaoon mein uske voh paayel
achcha lagta hai

churaana haath mujh se
aur jaana ghair ki jaanib
haseen saajan mer dil ker ke ghayel
achcha lagta hai

meri yeh sab kahani be asar
aur be samar si hai
voh meri chah hai aur bas mein saayel
achcha lagta hai

mushi yeh zindagi meri
sanwar jaaye nikhar jaaye
agar voh meri jaanib ko maayel
achcha lagta hai.

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22nd September 2003, 04:32 PM

mushi dost,
sabse pahlaey to yah kahungi k aap kuchh likho yahi baat sirf soon ne mile to achha lagta hai
fir padhhne milae to aur bhi achha lagta hai...
mujhe baarish kaa mausam aur baadal
achcha lagta hai
uski haseen aankhon mein phela kaajal
achcha lagta hai

ajab ek sirkhushi aane se uske
mujh ko milti hai
voh choori ki khanak aur paaoon mein uske voh paayel
achcha lagta hai

yaha tak to dost baat samaj maie aayi par yah kya k isqh k darwaaje par dard ne kyun dastak di.....

churaana haath mujh se
aur jaana ghair ki jaanib
haseen saajan mer dil ker ke ghayel
achcha lagta hai

meri yeh sab kahani be asar
aur be samar si hai
voh meri chah hai aur bas mein saayel
achcha lagta hai

mushi yeh zindagi meri
sanwar jaaye nikhar jaaye
agar voh meri jaanib ko maayel
achcha lagta hai.

shayed isi ka naam zindgi hai... hai na?
   
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bahot khub - 22nd September 2003, 08:15 PM

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aap ka yu sirf shayri likhna bahot acha lagta hai bahot khubsurat hai .sadgi se bahri hui ye gazal padh ne ka acha lagta hai. keep writing 4 us.


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23rd September 2003, 02:09 AM

meena dost.

izzat afzaaee ke liye behad mashkoor hoon aap ka.

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23rd September 2003, 02:11 AM

mita dost

bohat shukriyaa.
mashkoor hoon aap kaa.
wishing you all the best

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wah sir
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aj itnay din bad yahan say guzar howa
or ap ki poem ko find kia
lakin mayusi nahe hoee
hamesha ki tara aik bohat he haseen poem


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Musharrafh Jee, wah bohot achha hein. Ha, hamesha ki tarha hi aapka kalam hume bara achha lagta hein.
Sukriya. Likhte rahiyega. Aapna khayal rakhiyega.
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5th October 2003, 07:19 PM

anas dost

kahan ho itne din se.
bhai kabhi kabhi shayri forum par bhi aa jaya karo.
bari kami mehsoos karta hoon mein aap ki yahan.

kalam pasand karne ka shukriya.

bas bhai jahan bhi raho khush raho aur apna khayal rakha karo.

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5th October 2003, 07:21 PM

shimul dost

aap ka behad shukriya izzat afzaayeeke liye.

khushi huee ke aap ne meri is naacheez kaawish ko pasand kiya.
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mujhe baarish kaa mausam aur baadal
achcha lagta hai
uski haseen aankhon mein phela kaajal
achcha lagta hai

churaana haath mujh se
aur jaana ghair ki jaanib
haseen saajan mer dil ker ke ghayel
achcha lagta hai

BOHAT KHOOB MUSHARRAF HUSSAIN SAHEB.....................waise yeh radeef hameiN bhi behad pasand aaya, is radeef per kisi din hum bhi zarur kuch likhenge....

aapki nayi peshkash ka besabri se intezaar hai....




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24th March 2010, 01:32 AM

Well Nice work..................Musharraf Husain saheb, waise Zainy jee thanks to u also kafi purane kalam par dad di hai aapne.


Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...

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mujhe baarish kaa mausam aur baadal
achcha lagta hai
uski haseen aankhon mein phela kaajal
achcha lagta hai


Bahut hi romantic khayal....bahut khoob....Musharrafh Saheb.....!




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