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gazal..on order.3nd kisht - 26th December 2008, 12:17 PM

chaandni si khili khili hoon main
aaj phir chaand se mili hoon main.1

aa-ine mein bhi tu nazar aaye
loag kahte hain,baawli hoon main.2

Ek sapne ki ungliyaan tha-ame
Kya pata kis taraf chali hoon main.3

Tu wo thandi hava ka jhonka hai
Jis ki khaatir bahut jail hoon main.4

Kal ke waadon pe mat mujhe taalo
VASL ki shab ki be-kali hoon main.5

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26th December 2008, 09:58 PM

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chaandni si khili khili hoon main
aaj phir chaand se mili hoon main.1

aa-ine mein bhi tu nazar aaye
loag kahte hain,baawli hoon main.2

Ek sapne ki ungliyaan tha-ame
Kya pata kis taraf chali hoon main.3

Tu wo thandi hava ka jhonka hai
Jis ki khaatir bahut jail hoon main.4

Kal ke waadon pe mat mujhe taalo
VASL ki shab ki be-kali hoon main.5

Byrashant vasl
(from MAIN BHI AKELA under publication)


bhaiya es gazal ki tareef to jitni bhi karuN kum hogi....kya khoob ahsaas hain har sher dil ke kareeb raha.....kisi ek sher ko khaas nahi kah sakti, sabhi sher....wah wah

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