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Jane Kya Bolta Hai Sannata

Kabhi Bhayanak, Kabhi Apna Sa

Lagta Hai Sannata........


Kabhi Jab Ijjat Roti Hai

Tab Hasta Hai Sannata

Kabhi Jab Maut Hasti Hai

Tab Rota Hai Sannata..........


Kahi Zindagi Beet Jati Hai

Khamosh Rehta Hai Sannata

Kabhi Jeevan Khamosh Ho Jata Hai

Cheekhta Rehta Hai Sannata.........



Kabhi Mandir Ki Ghantiyo Me

Gunjta Hai Sannata

Kabhi Mantro Ke Uchcharan Me

Sunai Deta Hai Sannata.........


Bebas Ho Chuki Nigaho Me

Dikhai Deta Hai Sannata

Chehre Ki Jhurriyo Se Bhi

Lipta Hua Hai Sannata...............



" Mann " Bole To Bhi Kaise Bole Sach

Zuba Per Haat Rakh Deta Hai Sannata

Aao Ham Sab Mil Ker Moun Rakhta Hai

Shor Hai Galiyo Me , Thora Ho Jaye Sannata................


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Ja raha tha yu he..
Dikhayi pada 'sannata'

kya likha hai aapne.. Wow..
Kya title hai 'sannata'

thanx for sharing,
ur nice poem 'sannata'

but i dnt undrstand,
"yaha itna kyu hai 'sannata'"

means , noone replied yet...
On the thread 'sannata'

bye n tc manvinder ji..
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thanks for reading and understanding it..........................

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Ja raha tha yu he..
Dikhayi pada 'sannata'

kya likha hai aapne.. Wow..
Kya title hai 'sannata'

thanx for sharing,
ur nice poem 'sannata'

but i dnt undrstand,
"yaha itna kyu hai 'sannata'"

means , noone replied yet...
On the thread 'sannata'

bye n tc manvinder ji..
Njoy beautiful 'sannata'

thanks for reading and understanding it...................

be in touch.............................................


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Manvinder Ji...Sat Shree Akaal...kaise hai aap.....aapki poem ke khayal aur jazbaat ache rahe...fikR ko thoda aur badhane ki zarurat hai.....aapne achi koshish ki hai.....aise hi likhte rahiye....khush rahiye....

duaaon ke saath...




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Manvinder Ji...Sat Shree Akaal...kaise hai aap.....aapki poem ke khayal aur jazbaat ache rahe...fikR ko thoda aur badhane ki zarurat hai.....aapne achi koshish ki hai.....aise hi likhte rahiye....khush rahiye....

duaaon ke saath...


dhanyawad naresh ji , mere jazbaat aapko ache lage.............. koshish karunga aur acha likhne ki ................ apna saath u hi banae rakhiye..........................


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31st October 2009, 12:28 AM

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Jane Kya Bolta Hai Sannata

Kabhi Bhayanak, Kabhi Apna Sa

Lagta Hai Sannata........


Kabhi Jab Ijjat Roti Hai

Tab Hasta Hai Sannata

Kabhi Jab Maut Hasti Hai

Tab Rota Hai Sannata..........


Kahi Zindagi Beet Jati Hai

Khamosh Rehta Hai Sannata

Kabhi Jeevan Khamosh Ho Jata Hai

Cheekhta Rehta Hai Sannata.........



Kabhi Mandir Ki Ghantiyo Me

Gunjta Hai Sannata

Kabhi Mantro Ke Uchcharan Me

Sunai Deta Hai Sannata.........


Bebas Ho Chuki Nigaho Me

Dikhai Deta Hai Sannata

Chehre Ki Jhurriyo Se Bhi

Lipta Hua Hai Sannata...............



" Mann " Bole To Bhi Kaise Bole Sach

Zuba Per Haat Rakh Deta Hai Sannata

Aao Ham Sab Mil Ker Moun Rakhta Hai

Shor Hai Galiyo Me , Thora Ho Jaye Sannata................
Mann ji,

Yeh line kaafi behtreen hai

" Mann " Bole To Bhi Kaise Bole Sach
Zuba Per Haat Rakh Deta Hai Sannata


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Yeh line kaafi behtreen hai

" Mann " Bole To Bhi Kaise Bole Sach
Zuba Per Haat Rakh Deta Hai Sannata



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Manvinder ji

apne bhot acha lika hai muze apki ye post achi lagi, sanata sachi mein bhot gehra lafz hai, aur apne bhot ache se discreibe kiya usku... daad le meri..


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apne bhot acha lika hai muze apki ye post achi lagi, sanata sachi mein bhot gehra lafz hai, aur apne bhot ache se discreibe kiya usku... daad le meri..


dhanyawad sir ji ........aapko meri ye post achi kagi .................... koshish karunga aur sudhar karke likh saku.............. shukriya............. yu hi milte rahiye...................

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Mann Jii SSK

Kaise hai aap?

Aapki yeh koshish behad khoob lagi what a subject nice, behad khoobi se aapne sannate ko bayan kiya hai.... sabhi lines achchi lagi I like it....

Keep writting, Keep Up......

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wow kain da dil nahin kita par likay bagair vi nai rah saki. my congrats!


SSA ankita ji ............. thanks .......... be connected ..............

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Kaise hai aap?

Aapki yeh koshish behad khoob lagi what a subject nice, behad khoobi se aapne sannate ko bayan kiya hai.... sabhi lines achchi lagi I like it....

Keep writting, Keep Up......

Likhate rahiye, Bazm mein aate rahiye...
Apna khayal rakhiye,
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Khuda Hafez.....

dhanyawad ji............... bahut dino baad aapse mulakat hui bahut acha laga...............


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Dekhte Hai Kaun Si Zuba Bolti Hai Pehle........

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Jane Kya Bolta Hai Sannata

Kabhi Bhayanak, Kabhi Apna Sa

Lagta Hai Sannata........


Kabhi Jab Ijjat Roti Hai

Tab Hasta Hai Sannata

Kabhi Jab Maut Hasti Hai

Tab Rota Hai Sannata..........


Kahi Zindagi Beet Jati Hai

Khamosh Rehta Hai Sannata

Kabhi Jeevan Khamosh Ho Jata Hai

Cheekhta Rehta Hai Sannata.........



Kabhi Mandir Ki Ghantiyo Me

Gunjta Hai Sannata

Kabhi Mantro Ke Uchcharan Me

Sunai Deta Hai Sannata.........


Bebas Ho Chuki Nigaho Me

Dikhai Deta Hai Sannata

Chehre Ki Jhurriyo Se Bhi

Lipta Hua Hai Sannata...............



" Mann " Bole To Bhi Kaise Bole Sach

Zuba Per Haat Rakh Deta Hai Sannata

Aao Ham Sab Mil Ker Moun Rakhta Hai

Shor Hai Galiyo Me , Thora Ho Jaye Sannata................

Maan sahab,
Satsriakaal!!!

Bahut khoob likha hai, iss tehreer ka mazameen bhi zara hat ke hai, bahut achha laga... Adaygi bhi achhi hai....
Mujhe khoob pasand aaya...
Aise hi likhte rahiye......

Chalte chalte haath pakad liya, ruka to achha laga iss mehfil ka sannaataa

MehfileN to sajjaii haiN bahut lekin aaj bana hai yaar, iss gaafil ka, sannaataa

Duaon ke saath ijaazat...

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Maan sahab,
Satsriakaal!!!

Bahut khoob likha hai, iss tehreer ka mazameen bhi zara hat ke hai, bahut achha laga... Adaygi bhi achhi hai....
Mujhe khoob pasand aaya...
Aise hi likhte rahiye......

Chalte chalte haath pakad liya, ruka to achha laga iss mehfil ka sannaataa

MehfileN to sajjaii haiN bahut lekin aaj bana hai yaar, iss gaafil ka, sannaataa

Duaon ke saath ijaazat...

Aapka dost
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