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Jee raha hai koi - 27th September 2004, 01:23 AM

Doston ek arsa ho gaya maine kuchh likha hi nahi hai shayri.com par . Aaj mann kiya kuch likhne ko to bus likh diya
Umeed karta hun ke aapko mere khayaal pasand aayenge

tujhse milne ki aas mein jee raha hai koi
itna bhi zaalim na bun zaher pi raha hai koi

mohabbat karke na nibhaana bewafaai hoti hai
teri bewafaai ka ilzaam apne sar le raha hai koi

gar bhulna hi tha to mere pyar ko na azmaate
tujhko paane ke liye har imtihaan se guzar gaya hai koi

na aur sitam karna tu ke jaga nahi ab zakhmo ke liye
ek kona bacha tha dil mein teri tasveer liye baitha hai koi

aye sangdil ek nazar dekh le tujhse bichhde pyaar ki taraf
apni laash ko tere pyaar mein aaj kaandha de raha hai koi

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27th September 2004, 02:53 PM

HI Pyaasa Ji,

Bohot khoob yaar. Bohot hi pyaara laga aap ka likha hua. Umeed hai agay say aur bhi post karenge.


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Thanks - 27th September 2004, 05:41 PM

SALIM JI,

Shukriyaa Salimji to aapne hamari post ko padha aur reply diya . Likhte rehne ki umeed hai tabhi to ek koshish kar li humne . Ek baar fir se aapka shukriyaa.

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Re: Jee raha hai koi - 27th September 2004, 05:49 PM

na aur sitam karna tu ke jaga nahi ab zakhmo ke liye
ek kona bacha tha dil mein teri tasveer liye baitha hai koi

aye sangdil ek nazar dekh le tujhse bichhde pyaar ki taraf
apni laash ko tere pyaar mein aaj kaandha de raha hai koi

PYASA BHAI
bahoot ache jazbaat hai jinhe aapne jubaan di hai,,,khaas kar yeh aashar behad pasand aaye,,,,dua hai aap pyase na rahe,,,meri daad kubool kijiye...khush rahiye,,aur isi khubsurati se dil ke gaagon ko kaagaz par sajate jaiye...
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28th September 2004, 12:33 AM

tujhse milne ki aas mein jee raha hai koi
itna bhi zaalim na bun zaher pi raha hai koi

mohabbat karke na nibhaana bewafaai hoti hai
teri bewafaai ka ilzaam apne sar le raha hai koi

gar bhulna hi tha to mere pyar ko na azmaate
tujhko paane ke liye har imtihaan se guzar gaya hai koi

na aur sitam karna tu ke jaga nahi ab zakhmo ke liye
ek kona bacha tha dil mein teri tasveer liye baitha hai koi

aye sangdil ek nazar dekh le tujhse bichhde pyaar ki taraf
apni laash ko tere pyaar mein aaj kaandha de raha hai koi

waah waah kya likha hai apne .....lagta hai bahot hi gahera zakhm hai ....jiski vajah se dil ki baat zuban pe ate ate kagaz pe aa gai......apka khyal bahot hi achha laga.....app yuhi likhte rahe aur hum yuhi padhte rahe .....

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Shukriyaa - 28th September 2004, 10:35 AM

MANOJ JI ,

Shukriyaa jo aapne hamara likha padha aur reply kiya . Rahi baat aapki dua ki ke hum pyaase na rahe to zaroor aapki dua rang laayegi aur hum hamesha hi khush rahenge. Ek baar fir dil se shukriyaa karta hun aapka . Ab ijaazat dijiye

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THANKS - 28th September 2004, 04:42 PM

MIRA JI.
Shukriyaa aapke reply ke liye. Waise agar zakhm ki baat kare to mein yeh kehna chahunga ke aisi koi zakhm vaali baat nahi hai. MATAJI ki krupa se humein koi zakhm nahi hai. Hum hamesha hi khush rehte hain , bus shayri ka shaukh hai to kabhi kabhi likh deta hun aur aisi koi dusri baat nahi hai. Anyways thanks for ur reply

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29th September 2004, 12:22 AM

tujhse milne ki aas mein jee raha hai koi
itna bhi zaalim na bun zaher pi raha hai koi

mohabbat karke na nibhaana bewafaai hoti hai
teri bewafaai ka ilzaam apne sar le raha hai koi

gar bhulna hi tha to mere pyar ko na azmaate
tujhko paane ke liye har imtihaan se guzar gaya hai koi

na aur sitam karna tu ke jaga nahi ab zakhmo ke liye
ek kona bacha tha dil mein teri tasveer liye baitha hai koi

aye sangdil ek nazar dekh le tujhse bichhde pyaar ki taraf
apni laash ko tere pyaar mein aaj kaandha de raha hai koi

vaah..............bahot hi khub khyal hai apka..........
sach me dil ko chu gai apki ye nazm.........sabse khub hai ye ...muje bahot hi pasand ayi...... likhte rahiyega.......

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29th September 2004, 12:42 AM

dear pyaasa ji kaafi wat baad aap mile
hamari khush klismati hai..

apne bahut acha likha hai....par dil se aaaaaaahh! nikalta hai..
aapjke har nagme me ajeeb se dard ki chaap dekhi hai..nicely writtenn...with depth in feelings...

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Pyaasa Ji - 29th September 2004, 05:08 AM

Pyaasa Ji,
Aapnai bohot khoob likha hai.Khaas kar aakhri lines:
[QUOTE]aye sangdil ek nazar dekh le tujhse bichhde pyaar ki taraf
apni laash ko tere pyaar mein aaj kaandha de raha hai koi [QUOTE].

Bohot hi khoob.Ab aur kya keh sakti hoon siwai dua hai hamesha yun hi likhtai rahain aur sada khush rahain.
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Toota hua dil aur hoton pai hassi.

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Pyaar wo nahi tha jo kisi nai kiya
Pyaar woh hai jo koi nibha raha hai.

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Maana ki woh log badnaseeb hotai hai
Jinhai pyaar milta to hai
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29th September 2004, 05:27 PM

pyasa bhai...

aapne to wakai main pyas jaga di hume....aapne khoob likha hai har ek sher iska ... dil se daad kabool kare ....waqt lage to humari ek rachna "marne wale" jaroor padhe umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi.....

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Shukriyaa - 29th September 2004, 08:38 PM

Piya Ji,

Shukriyaa jo aapne is nacheez ki post ko padhakar saraha. Replies bahot maayne rakhte hain har likhne vaale ke liye. Aapki tareef ke liye itna hi kahunga ke

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Thanks - 30th September 2004, 12:26 AM

LUV PRIYAJI,

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KAVITAJI,

Thanks mere khayaal padhne ke liye aur reply dene ke liye. Dil ko ek ajeeb sa sukoon milta hai jab kioi reply deta hai to. Aisa lagta hai jaise kuch to log hain abhi to padhne ki zehmat uthaate hain aur hausla bhi dete hain ke likhte raho.Ab ijaazat dijiye

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Pyaasa Ji - 1st October 2004, 06:33 AM

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Yakeenan shayri.com kai sabhi sadaysai yehi dua kartai hain ki yahan ka har likhnai wala likhtai rahai. Aur hauslai ko badanai ki yahan koi kami nahi
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Pyaar wo nahi tha jo kisi nai kiya
Pyaar woh hai jo koi nibha raha hai.

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Maana ki woh log badnaseeb hotai hai
Jinhai pyaar milta to hai
par woh usai paichaan nahi paatai
par woh log aur bhi badnaseeb hotai hai jinhai pyaar milta hai,woh usai paichaaan bhi jaatai hai par paa nahi saktai.

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KUNALJI,

Shukriyaa jo aapne hamari rachna ko padh kar pasand kiya aur reply bhi diya . Lekin ek baat zaroor hai yeh tumhara haathi dekh kar mujhe bahot hansi aati hai itna serious likhte ho aur aisa khush mizaaz haathi dekhkar hamara bhi dard ek baar to gayab ho jaata hai . Khair ab ijaazat dijiye.

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THANKS - 1st October 2004, 11:44 PM

MEENAJI,

Shu vaat che ek dum blank reply ? Amaru lakhyu na gamyu ke ? chaalo kai nahi biji vaar fari saaru lakhvani koshish karshu .

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CHAANDNI JI,

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Re: THANKS - 3rd October 2004, 09:58 AM

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Shu vaat che ek dum blank reply ? Amaru lakhyu na gamyu ke ? chaalo kai nahi biji vaar fari saaru lakhvani koshish karshu .

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Pyasa jigar bhulna hi tha to mere pyar ko na azmaate
tujhko paane ke liye har imtihaan se guzar gaya hai koi

na aur sitam karna tu ke jaga nahi ab zakhmo ke liye
ek kona bacha tha dil mein teri tasveer liye baitha hai koi

aye sangdil ek nazar dekh le tujhse bichhde pyaar ki taraf
apni laash ko tere pyaar mein aaj kaandha de raha hai koi

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3rd October 2004, 10:26 PM

Pyasha jee
Bohot accha likha hai appne. Lagta bohot pyar kiya hai appne ussey. Mera dua hai ki wo apko ek din zarror milegi.

Ek Deewana
Wo kya gaye ki neend bhi aakhon se le gaye
Yani ke khuab me bhi nahi aaya tamam raath

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Thanks - 4th October 2004, 08:54 PM

Meeta ji,

Thanks MEETAJI tame reply aapyo ee mate .

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4th October 2004, 08:58 PM

pyasa bhai

pata nahi kya bat hai .... sab mere chote se hathi ke peeche pade hai... ab aap hi bataiye kya badal doun itne pyare se hathi ko le jaoun aap logon ki mehfil se bhai ye be juban hai par na jane kya kuch kar deta hai jo aap sab hans padte hai... aap hi bataye change kar doun kya


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thanks meenaji - 4th October 2004, 10:56 PM

MEENA JI,

joi mari vyatha tamari aankho bharai gai
shu vityu hashe mara par jyaare ee paraai thai

ek aj janam no saath maangyo hato me eno
malva na badle maari saamej eni vidaai thai

dil che nadaan nathi jaanto aa duniya na niyam
ena virah ma sapno ni duniya maari lutaai gai

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5th October 2004, 01:17 AM

tujhse milne ki aas mein jee raha hai koi
itna bhi zaalim na bun zaher pi raha hai koi

mohabbat karke na nibhaana bewafaai hoti hai
teri bewafaai ka ilzaam apne sar le raha hai koi

gar bhulna hi tha to mere pyar ko na azmaate
tujhko paane ke liye har imtihaan se guzar gaya hai koi

na aur sitam karna tu ke jaga nahi ab zakhmo ke liye
ek kona bacha tha dil mein teri tasveer liye baitha hai koi

aye sangdil ek nazar dekh le tujhse bichhde pyaar ki taraf
apni laash ko tere pyaar mein aaj kaandha de raha hai koi

kis sher ki tarif karu , kya kahu ki kaun sa sher bahut achha laga bus yahi kahungi ki jab aapki yeh kavita padhna start ki to 1 sans mai sari padhti gayi , ruk nahi payi bich mai .

meri dad kabul kijiye is khubsurat nagme ke liye

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THANKS - 5th October 2004, 11:31 PM

EK DEEWANA JI,

DEEWANO SE YEH MAT PUCHO DEEWANO PE KYA GUZRI HAI HAN UNKE DILO SE YEH PUCHO ARMANO PE KYA GUZRI HAI

MAALIK NE BANAYA INSAN KO INSAN MOHABBAT KAR BAITHA
WOH UPAR BAITHA KYA JAANE INSAANO PE KYA GUZRI HAI

Aapka naam to nahi jaanta lekin aapne meri shayri pasand ki aur reply kiya uska mein dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hun. Aur rahi baat us sey pyaar karne ki to dost pyaar hamari kismat mein kahan naam hi PYAASA hai to pyaar kahan se mil jaayega humein . Yeh to bus hamare khayaal hain jo dil mein ubhar kar aate hain to pesh kar dete hai aap sabke saamne. Aur aapne jo hamare liye dua ki is ke liye ek baar fir se aapka dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hun . Aur haan apna naam zaroor batana dost . Ab ijaazat dijiye.

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Hello pyaasa ji

bhaote hi aacha likha hia dil ko chu gaya. dil ko laga ki use ki bate kise ne labzo maie keh di hia nice work keep it up. hume intezare rahiga agae padne ka

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thanks - 6th October 2004, 03:45 PM

MAYURI JI,

Aapka shukriyaa adaa karta hun jo aapne hamare naghme par daad di . Hausla badhta hai replies dekh kar aage bhi likte rehne ka . Ab ijaazat dijiye

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Re: Jee raha hai koi - 6th October 2004, 04:09 PM

Quote:
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Doston ek arsa ho gaya maine kuchh likha hi nahi hai shayri.com par . Aaj mann kiya kuch likhne ko to bus likh diya
Umeed karta hun ke aapko mere khayaal pasand aayenge

tujhse milne ki aas mein jee raha hai koi
itna bhi zaalim na bun zaher pi raha hai koi

mohabbat karke na nibhaana bewafaai hoti hai
teri bewafaai ka ilzaam apne sar le raha hai koi

gar bhulna hi tha to mere pyar ko na azmaate
tujhko paane ke liye har imtihaan se guzar gaya hai koi

na aur sitam karna tu ke jaga nahi ab zakhmo ke liye
ek kona bacha tha dil mein teri tasveer liye baitha hai koi

aye sangdil ek nazar dekh le tujhse bichhde pyaar ki taraf
apni laash ko tere pyaar mein aaj kaandha de raha hai koi

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pyasa sahab...namaskaar

hairan hu ki aap tak abhi tak main kyu na pahuchi....

jo likha shayad is se jyada aur koi lafz nahi baki reh jata ki is dard per kuchh aur likha jaye...bilkul la-jawab kar diya aapke is kalaam ne...bahut khoob meri maun daad kabool kare..pls....kyuki itna dard hai is kalaam me ki main us se ubher nahi pa rahi..pls is baar maun me hi saath de...

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thanks - 6th October 2004, 11:25 PM

MUSHKAN JI,

Shukriyaa aapke reply ke liye jo aapne is nacheez ki shayri pasand ki. Waise ek baat kahen ? aapki muskaan badi achhi hai , kya aap naya close up karte hain ? lollllllllll dont take it seriously just joking . Anyways thanks for the reply ab ijaazat dijiye.

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THANKS - 7th October 2004, 03:18 PM

UDAS JI ,

Aapka naam hum nahi jaante par aapka shukriyaa adaa karte hain aapke reply ke liye . Aapne reply diya pasand kiya hamare khayaalon ko yehi bahot hai hamare liye.Rahi baat dard ki to yehi kahunga ke

IS DARD KO HI TERA SAATH SAMAJH KAR JEE RAHA HAI KOI

Waise aap bhi bahot hi achha likhte hain . Apna naam zaroor bataiyega. Thanks once again.

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