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Sad Aik Diwana si Khwahish - 10th July 2014, 02:50 PM

Kabhi jo aisa ho
Hum us nagri ko nikl chalen
Jahan ik tum ho
Aur ik mn hun
Ankhon ke aayene hn
Khamoshion ki zuban ho
Wafaon ke jazeeron peh
Hawaon ke saaz hon
Un peh rqs karti
Dilon ki dharknen hn
Dharkanon mn chupe
Machlte raaz o niaz hn
Mohabbaten lafzon ki muhtaj na hon
Har pal Zindagi ka ihsaas ho
Hr ihsaas mn zindagi nachti ho

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Aisa sochne to diwana pan hey
Aisa hona bhala kb mumkin hey
Yahan to dilon k gadle aaene hn
Toote, chankte aabgeene hn
Jazbon mn milawaten
Chahten na payadaar
Khaloos h na yab
Freb o ria kaarion ke jaal
Roohen shikasta o nidhal
Insan aur insaniat dono hi bd haal
…….
Chalo waqt k pahey ko ulta ghumate hn
Un janglon ko lot chalte hn
Phir se qadeem insan mn dhal jate hn
Jb adam khor tehzeeb k libade nahi ohrte thei
Na hi frishta pan k taj sajae Iblees k ham rakkab thei
…….
Pr aisa hona kb mumkin h
Ye to soch ka diwana pan h!
   
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10th July 2014, 02:55 PM

Bohat khoob surat nazm hai!...

Dil se dheron daad qubool kijiye

yuhi likhte rahiye


( aapne isay ghalat section me post kiya hai....main isay shayri.e.dard section me move kar rahi huun)




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10th July 2014, 09:21 PM

Aadaab Yasmine Saheba,
Ahlan Wa Sahlan! Buhat umda nazm se ru a ru kerwaya haye aapnay! Bayhad mutaassir huay aaapkay is kalaam say! Ommeed haye aainda bhee aap aysay he aalatareen kalaam say mahfil ko purnoor kartee rahayngee! Dua haye Rab say... ho zor e qalam aur bhi zyaadaa!!


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10th July 2014, 11:47 PM

Yasmine Saheba,

Adaab,

Khoobsorat alfazaooN se bharpoor aik mukamal nazm k
liye dil se nikli dherooN daad qabool kijiye,

Aise hi mehfil sajatay rahiye,

DuaooN k saath ijazat,,


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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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11th July 2014, 09:31 AM

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Kabhi jo aisa ho
Hum us nagri ko nikl chalen
Jahan ik tum ho
Aur ik mn hun
Ankhon ke aayene hn
Khamoshion ki zuban ho
Wafaon ke jazeeron peh
Hawaon ke saaz hon
Un peh rqs karti
Dilon ki dharknen hn
Dharkanon mn chupe
Machlte raaz o niaz hn
Mohabbaten lafzon ki muhtaj na hon
Har pal Zindagi ka ihsaas ho
Hr ihsaas mn zindagi nachti ho

Per........

Aisa sochne to diwana pan hey
Aisa hona bhala kb mumkin hey
Yahan to dilon k gadle aaene hn
Toote, chankte aabgeene hn
Jazbon mn milawaten
Chahten na payadaar
Khaloos h na yab
Freb o ria kaarion ke jaal
Roohen shikasta o nidhal
Insan aur insaniat dono hi bd haal
…….
Chalo waqt k pahey ko ulta ghumate hn
Un janglon ko lot chalte hn
Phir se qadeem insan mn dhal jate hn
Jb adam khor tehzeeb k libade nahi ohrte thei
Na hi frishta pan k taj sajae Iblees k ham rakkab thei
…….
Pr aisa hona kb mumkin h
Ye to soch ka diwana pan h!
Salam Masnoon.
Muje maloom nai tha k ye itne pyare aur nafees mizaj logon ki mehfil h jis se muje aik shayer dost ne mutarif karaya. Mn aap sb ki boht shukr guzar hn. Mn buniadi tor p English poetry likhti hn lkn Urdu se muje pyar h. Meri Roman itni achi nai is lye agr koi taseeh krna chahe to usey welcome kia jae ga. Mn is nazm ko apni aik English poem k saath hi ghalti se post kr dya, Rehnumai ka shukria
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Red face Shukria! - 11th July 2014, 09:38 AM

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Yasmine Saheba,

Adaab,

Khoobsorat alfazaooN se bharpoor aik mukamal nazm k
liye dil se nikli dherooN daad qabool kijiye,

Aise hi mehfil sajatay rahiye,

DuaooN k saath ijazat,,
Boht nawazish, Hassan Sahib, aapke raie mere lya boht hosla afza h, khush raheye
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Aadaab Yasmine Saheba,
Ahlan Wa Sahlan! Buhat umda nazm se ru a ru kerwaya haye aapnay! Bayhad mutaassir huay aaapkay is kalaam say! Ommeed haye aainda bhee aap aysay he aalatareen kalaam say mahfil ko purnoor kartee rahayngee! Dua haye Rab say... ho zor e qalam aur bhi zyaadaa!!
Boht nawazish, aapke khoobsoort lafzon ne hosla afzai ki,
   
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Salam Masnoon.
Muje maloom nai tha k ye itne pyare aur nafees mizaj logon ki mehfil h jis se muje aik shayer dost ne mutarif karaya. Mn aap sb ki boht shukr guzar hn. Mn buniadi tor p English poetry likhti hn lkn Urdu se muje pyar h. Meri Roman itni achi nai is lye agr koi taseeh krna chahe to usey welcome kia jae ga. Mn is nazm ko apni aik English poem k saath hi ghalti se post kr dya, Rehnumai ka shukria
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