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2chidiyo ki 1prem kahani - 27th November 2010, 09:33 AM

2chidiyo ko ek prem kahani
Ek din male chidiya ne bola:ki
mujhe chod kr kahi tum udd to
nhi jaoge.
Female chidiya:udd jaungi to tum
pakad lena.
Male chidiya:bola main tumhe
pakad sakta hu pr fir pa nhi
skta.Female chidiya ki ankho me
ansu aa gye or uss ne apne pankh
tod diye or boli,'ab hum humesha
sath rahenge.Ek din jor se tufaan
aane wala tha to male chidiya udd
ne lga.Tabhi female chidiya ne
kaha tum udd jao main udd nhi
sakti.Male chidiya bola :apna
khayal rakhna keg kr udd gya.Jb
tufaan thama to male chidiya
vapas uss ped pr aya to dekha ki
female chidiya mar chuki hai or
dali pr likha tha,'kaash woh 1bar
to kehta ki main tumhe nhi chod
sakta. To shayad main tufaan se
pehle na marti.
Moral:love exists till the
cercumtances are good,otherwise
nobody carer.Do not lov sum1 too
much it hurts:-(


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...................good one..........




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sunder...bahut sunder...........


anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi,
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thanks for your Appreciation.


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30th November 2010, 03:17 PM

nice story, touchy

but
Moral:love exists till the
cercumtances are good,otherwise
nobody carer.Do not lov sum1 too
much it hurts:-(

ye moral nahi ho saktaa,

kahani ka matlaab seekh honi chahiye, galat ko sahi ki ....
yaah to sahi ko galat ki seekh hai,

jisne chiriyaa ko chhod diyaa, woh galat hai, aur moral wahi karne ko kah raha hai,

usne bhi to yahi kiyaa, time pe badal gaya ....
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2chidiyo ko ek prem kahani
Ek din male chidiya ne bola:ki
mujhe chod kr kahi tum udd to
nhi jaoge.
Female chidiya:udd jaungi to tum
pakad lena.
Male chidiya:bola main tumhe
pakad sakta hu pr fir pa nhi
skta.Female chidiya ki ankho me
ansu aa gye or uss ne apne pankh
tod diye or boli,'ab hum humesha
sath rahenge.Ek din jor se tufaan
aane wala tha to male chidiya udd
ne lga.Tabhi female chidiya ne
kaha tum udd jao main udd nhi
sakti.Male chidiya bola :apna
khayal rakhna keg kr udd gya.Jb
tufaan thama to male chidiya
vapas uss ped pr aya to dekha ki
female chidiya mar chuki hai or
dali pr likha tha,'kaash woh 1bar
to kehta ki main tumhe nhi chod
sakta. To shayad main tufaan se
pehle na marti.
Moral:love exists till the
cercumtances are good,otherwise
nobody carer.Do not lov sum1 too
much it hurts:-(
bahut hi achi story hai

bahut badi sikh dety hai yah kahani

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30th November 2010, 09:31 PM

Baat sahi kahi hai aap ne ki moral galat hai, par aap batayo koi itna jayada payar kr k piche hat jaye or akela tanha chor jaye,to kya karoge,jindagi niras or narak c lagni lagti hai.


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2chidiyo ko ek prem kahani
Ek din male chidiya ne bola:ki
mujhe chod kr kahi tum udd to
nhi jaoge.
Female chidiya:udd jaungi to tum
pakad lena.
Male chidiya:bola main tumhe
pakad sakta hu pr fir pa nhi
skta.Female chidiya ki ankho me
ansu aa gye or uss ne apne pankh
tod diye or boli,'ab hum humesha
sath rahenge.Ek din jor se tufaan
aane wala tha to male chidiya udd
ne lga.Tabhi female chidiya ne
kaha tum udd jao main udd nhi
sakti.Male chidiya bola :apna
khayal rakhna keg kr udd gya.Jb
tufaan thama to male chidiya
vapas uss ped pr aya to dekha ki
female chidiya mar chuki hai or
dali pr likha tha,'kaash woh 1bar
to kehta ki main tumhe nhi chod
sakta. To shayad main tufaan se
pehle na marti.
Moral:love exists till the
cercumtances are good,otherwise
nobody carer.Do not lov sum1 too
much it hurts:-(
Hello ... Ji dil chhoo liya in baaton ne ... kayi rishton ki sachchaai bhi hai ye ... is sachchaai ko kitane achchhe se bayaan kar diya aap ne ...


Par ek baat kahena chaahenge aap se .... jo Moral aap ne diya hai .. wo shaayad apni jagaah sahi hai .. ki kaise Male chidiyaa apne sar pe musibat ko dekh .. apne pyaar ko jinhone uss ke liye itana kiya usse musibat mai chhod ke bhaag gaye ... Tab uss Female chidiyaa ka dil kaisa toota hoga ... uss dard ka ehsaas to shaayad koi lagaa hi naa sake ...


Par .. is sachchaai ka ek aur pahelu hai ... ki pyaar ka matlab hi ye hai ki aap jis se pyaar karte hai .. usski khushi .. usaki salaamati ki chaah ... har pal aap ki saanson mai .. basati hai ... aur labon pe yahi duaa aur dil mai yahi khayaal rahete hai ...


Jaise ki is kahaani ki Female Chidiyaa ne Toofaan aane par Male Chidiyaa se kaha ... ki "aap udd jaaiye hum to udd nahi sakate"... woh udd nahi sakti thi .. par unke mann mai .. apne pyaar ki khushi aur unn ki salaamati .. khud apni khushi se jyaada maayne rakhati thi .. jiske rahete .. unhone toofaan ke uss pal mai bhi ... apne pyaar ko salaamat dekhanaa chaaha ...


so humaare liye the Moral of the story is .... Love will last till the last breath of your life... no matter what are the circumstances . ...Don't claim to love someone if you are more concern about your happiness then your beloved... Love someone in way where you are ready to die every single day within yourself just to see or bring a smile on your beloved's face.


And .. Love someone too much may hurt ... but you ..yourself Hurting the person you love .. will hurt the most ... because if your beloved hurts you . ... the love still forgives the beloved .. but if you hurt your beloved ... your heart has no forgivenss for you ...


Itani pyaari si story ka moral .. kuchh gadbad ho gaya hai .. ye humaari soch hai ...ho sake to .. fix karwaa lijiyega .. yahi request hai ..


Humaari baat buri lage to i am sorry ... hum maafi chaahte hai ...


Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,


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Puri Hoke Bhi Jo Puri Na Ho Hoon Zindagi Ki Wo Ankahi Kahaani......
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Ek Aaina Jiski Tasveer Dhundhla Gai,
Ek Dil Jiski Dhadkan Ruksi Gai,
Ek Zindagi Jiski Manzil Ka Koi Pata Hi Nahi,
Ek Daaman Jahaan Se Khushi
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Ji ..might had a typo in last reply.. and just want to correct it ... .... Don't claim to love someone if you are more concern about your happiness then the person you love ...


Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,

Aapki Dost: Gudia

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Puri Hoke Bhi Jo Puri Na Ho Hoon Zindagi Ki Wo Ankahi Kahaani......
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Ek Aaina Jiski Tasveer Dhundhla Gai,
Ek Dil Jiski Dhadkan Ruksi Gai,
Ek Zindagi Jiski Manzil Ka Koi Pata Hi Nahi,
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Ji ..might had a typo in last reply.. and just want to correct it ... .... Don't claim to love someone if you are more concern about your happiness then the person you love ...




Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,

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fine it, kopi baat nahi, ji , ess me sorry kehne wali koi baat nahi.

har ek insaan ka apna apna sochne ka dhang hai, so welcome.

i like ki mujhe kaye logo ne moral ke liye suggest kiya ki, acha hona chahiye .


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Hello ... Ji dil chhoo liya in baaton ne ... kayi rishton ki sachchaai bhi hai ye ... is sachchaai ko kitane achchhe se bayaan kar diya aap ne ...


Par ek baat kahena chaahenge aap se .... jo Moral aap ne diya hai .. wo shaayad apni jagaah sahi hai .. ki kaise Male chidiyaa apne sar pe musibat ko dekh .. apne pyaar ko jinhone uss ke liye itana kiya usse musibat mai chhod ke bhaag gaye ... Tab uss Female chidiyaa ka dil kaisa toota hoga ... uss dard ka ehsaas to shaayad koi lagaa hi naa sake ...


Par .. is sachchaai ka ek aur pahelu hai ... ki pyaar ka matlab hi ye hai ki aap jis se pyaar karte hai .. usski khushi .. usaki salaamati ki chaah ... har pal aap ki saanson mai .. basati hai ... aur labon pe yahi duaa aur dil mai yahi khayaal rahete hai ...


Jaise ki is kahaani ki Female Chidiyaa ne Toofaan aane par Male Chidiyaa se kaha ... ki "aap udd jaaiye hum to udd nahi sakate"... woh udd nahi sakti thi .. par unke mann mai .. apne pyaar ki khushi aur unn ki salaamati .. khud apni khushi se jyaada maayne rakhati thi .. jiske rahete .. unhone toofaan ke uss pal mai bhi ... apne pyaar ko salaamat dekhanaa chaaha ...


so humaare liye the Moral of the story is .... Love will last till the last breath of your life... no matter what are the circumstances . ...Don't claim to love someone if you are more concern about your happiness then your beloved... Love someone in way where you are ready to die every single day within yourself just to see or bring a smile on your beloved's face.


And .. Love someone too much may hurt ... but you ..yourself Hurting the person you love .. will hurt the most ... because if your beloved hurts you . ... the love still forgives the beloved .. but if you hurt your beloved ... your heart has no forgivenss for you ...


Itani pyaari si story ka moral .. kuchh gadbad ho gaya hai .. ye humaari soch hai ...ho sake to .. fix karwaa lijiyega .. yahi request hai ..


Humaari baat buri lage to i am sorry ... hum maafi chaahte hai ...


Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,


Aapki Dost: Gudia


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maloom jaan padta hai yeh story aap ko jayda heart touching lagi hai,or mehsus hota haui ki ishq me gehri hurt hue hai


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2chidiyo ko ek prem kahani
Ek din male chidiya ne bola:ki
mujhe chod kr kahi tum udd to
nhi jaoge.
Female chidiya:udd jaungi to tum
pakad lena.
Male chidiya:bola main tumhe
pakad sakta hu pr fir pa nhi
skta.Female chidiya ki ankho me
ansu aa gye or uss ne apne pankh
tod diye or boli,'ab hum humesha
sath rahenge.Ek din jor se tufaan
aane wala tha to male chidiya udd
ne lga.Tabhi female chidiya ne
kaha tum udd jao main udd nhi
sakti.Male chidiya bola :apna
khayal rakhna keg kr udd gya.Jb
tufaan thama to male chidiya
vapas uss ped pr aya to dekha ki
female chidiya mar chuki hai or
dali pr likha tha,'kaash woh 1bar
to kehta ki main tumhe nhi chod
sakta. To shayad main tufaan se
pehle na marti.
Moral:love exists till the
cercumtances are good,otherwise
nobody carer.Do not lov sum1 too
much it hurts:-(
dil ko chu le gayi ye kahani

love exists till the
cercumtances are good,otherwise
nobody carer.Do not lov sum1 too
much it hurts


very true

kisi ko itna pyar kabhi nhi karna chahiye
par agar karo to use apni antim saans tak nibaahana chahiye

jo pyar karte hai vo apne pyar ki khushi k liye apna har sukh tyag dete hai khushi se
jo female chidhiya ne kiya

par agar apka pyar sirf apni hi khushiyo tak seemeet ho to ko use pyar ka naam na de
kyuki vo pyar nhi hota
jo male chidya ne kiya
chala jata par ek bar jhute muh hi kah deta us female chidiya ko
to use apni akhiri chand sanson me bhi ek sukun nasib hota

par ye male chidiya nhi samajti
har vo insaan kabhi nhi samjhta jo kisi ko sirf uske khushiyo me sath deta hai
aur ghum me chod k chala jaata hai

ye kahani do chidiyo k pyar ki story nhi hai
ye hai us female chidiya k pyar aur uske samarpan ki kahani

may god bless you




na rok saka maalik ki ibadat se use koi
ye banda hai us parwar digaar ka
dafan har riwaj ab us kabra me hai
jis par chada hai kafan us pahredar ka..
   
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dil ko chu le gayi ye kahani

love exists till the
cercumtances are good,otherwise
nobody carer.Do not lov sum1 too
much it hurts


very true

kisi ko itna pyar kabhi nhi karna chahiye
par agar karo to use apni antim saans tak nibaahana chahiye

jo pyar karte hai vo apne pyar ki khushi k liye apna har sukh tyag dete hai khushi se
jo female chidhiya ne kiya

par agar apka pyar sirf apni hi khushiyo tak seemeet ho to ko use pyar ka naam na de
kyuki vo pyar nhi hota
jo male chidya ne kiya
chala jata par ek bar jhute muh hi kah deta us female chidiya ko
to use apni akhiri chand sanson me bhi ek sukun nasib hota

par ye male chidiya nhi samajti
har vo insaan kabhi nhi samjhta jo kisi ko sirf uske khushiyo me sath deta hai
aur ghum me chod k chala jaata hai

ye kahani do chidiyo k pyar ki story nhi hai
ye hai us female chidiya k pyar aur uske samarpan ki kahani

may god bless you
thanks u,mujhe bhut ess baat se achraj me hu ki sab ka itna badiya response aa rha hai,aap k sath ek or baat share karta hu ki ess 11dec ko meri shaddi hone ja rahi hai.


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thanks u,mujhe bhut ess baat se achraj me hu ki sab ka itna badiya response aa rha hai,aap k sath ek or baat share karta hu ki ess 11dec ko meri shaddi hone ja rahi hai.
shadi ki dher sari shubhkamnaayein apko

wish you happy married life
may god bless you




na rok saka maalik ki ibadat se use koi
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shadi ki dher sari shubhkamnaayein apko

wish you happy married life
may god bless you
Bhut bhut dhanayawad aap ka ji.


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10th February 2011, 10:37 AM

it's a nice story. thanks for sharing............


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