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Kagaz...Kalam...aur mein - 24th April 2014, 11:08 PM
Abhi kalam uthai hi thi
k,kagaz puchnay laga
kya likhogay....?
mein bola..
pata nahi
Tou aaj fir
tum bina sochay hi chlay aay ho
tou aaj fir tum
mera bazood aur apne waqt khraab karogay
be parvahi tumahri se
mera jeena dushvaar karogay.

kyuN nahi kuch soch kar kalam uthatay ho
likh detay ho kuch bhi
baad meiN
pachtatay ho.
fir bhi khud ko budhi jeevi kehlaatay ho.

Jantay ho pichlii baar tumne
tha kya likh daala...
khfa thay sab tumse
par mujhay faarh [ torn ] daala.

Bina sochay samjhay yuN hi
kuch mat likh diya karo.
samjh liya karo soch liya karo.
likhnay se pehlay kuch Rab se dar liya karo.

Idhar tum kuch likhtay ho
udhar durghatnaeiN ghat jaati heiN
kat jaateiN heiN Insaan
insaniat mar jaati hai.

Isi liay kehta huN yuN hi
kuch mat likh diya karo
likhnay se pehlay
usay khud jee liya karo.

Aaj pehli baar
mainay kagaz ko
kora hii chorha hai
Aaj pehli baar mainay
khud ko jhinjora hai.

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25th April 2014, 01:40 PM
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Abhi kalam uthai hi thi
k,kagaz puchnay laga
kya likhogay....?
mein bola..
pata nahi
Tou aaj fir
tum bina sochay hi chlay aay ho
tou aaj fir tum
mera bazood aur apne waqt khraab karogay
be parvahi tumahri se
mera jeena dushvaar karogay.

kyuN nahi kuch soch kar kalam uthatay ho
likh detay ho kuch bhi
baad meiN
pachtatay ho.
fir bhi khud ko budhi jeevi kehlaatay ho.

Jantay ho pichlii baar tumne
tha kya likh daala...
khfa thay sab tumse
par mujhay faarh [ torn ] daala.

Bina sochay samjhay yuN hi
kuch mat likh diya karo.
samjh liya karo soch liya karo.
likhnay se pehlay kuch Rab se dar liya karo.

Idhar tum kuch likhtay ho
udhar durghatnaeiN ghat jaati heiN
kat jaateiN heiN Insaan
insaniat mar jaati hai.

Isi liay kehta huN yuN hi
kuch mat likh diya karo
likhnay se pehlay
usay khud jee liya karo.

Aaj pehli baar
mainay kagaz ko
kora hii chorha hai
Aaj pehli baar mainay
khud ko jhinjora hai.

Rajinderseep.
Rajinderjee,
bahot hi sundar kavita likhi hai aapne...............
bas yuN hi aate rahiye........................


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waah rajinder jee .....kya ehsaason se bhari kavita hai aapki.........


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7th July 2014, 10:19 AM
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Abhi kalam uthai hi thi
k,kagaz puchnay laga
kya likhogay....?
mein bola..
pata nahi
Tou aaj fir
tum bina sochay hi chlay aay ho
tou aaj fir tum
mera bazood aur apne waqt khraab karogay
be parvahi tumahri se
mera jeena dushvaar karogay.

kyuN nahi kuch soch kar kalam uthatay ho
likh detay ho kuch bhi
baad meiN
pachtatay ho.
fir bhi khud ko budhi jeevi kehlaatay ho.

Jantay ho pichlii baar tumne
tha kya likh daala...
khfa thay sab tumse
par mujhay faarh [ torn ] daala.

Bina sochay samjhay yuN hi
kuch mat likh diya karo.
samjh liya karo soch liya karo.
likhnay se pehlay kuch Rab se dar liya karo.

Idhar tum kuch likhtay ho
udhar durghatnaeiN ghat jaati heiN
kat jaateiN heiN Insaan
insaniat mar jaati hai.

Isi liay kehta huN yuN hi
kuch mat likh diya karo
likhnay se pehlay
usay khud jee liya karo.

Aaj pehli baar
mainay kagaz ko
kora hii chorha hai
Aaj pehli baar mainay
khud ko jhinjora hai.

Rajinderseep.

Rajinderseep ji..... uffff kitnaa dard bayaan kiyaa hai aaapki is kavitaa me aapne.... mere paas shaayad lafzon ki kamii pad jaaegii iskii tareef me gar kuch likhnaa chahungaa to.... wese bahot hi acchi peshkash hai aapki ek sach jhinjhod daalne waalaa sach... chup rah jaane ka sach... kuch na kah paane ka sach.....

beshumaar daaad pesh karta hoon aapke is khoobsurat kalaam kke liye... likhte rahen

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Bahut hee achchi kavita rajinderdeep jee..
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