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Aur barish ruk gayi hai... - 21st June 2016, 08:55 PM

kahte the hamse kabhi vo
dil me ek hasrat jagi hai
aao hai mausam gazab ka
aur barish ruk gayi hai..

khatm apna ye safar ab
door jane ki ghadi hai
chal diye vo itna kahkar
aur barish ruk gayi hai

abra sare boondon wale
koi aandhi le udi hai
chup sa hai har ek nazara
aur barish ruk gayi hai..

dard itna badh gaya ab
khushk aNkhoN ki nadi hai
seene me kuch chan se toota
aur barish ruk gayi hai..

yun lage pairoN ke neeche
part sholoN ki bichhi hai
Kano me chubhte haiN nashtar
aur barish ruk gayi hai..

chal madhu kab tak rukegi
door tak koi nahi hai
lauTne ka vaqt bhi hai
aur barish ruk gai hai...

Madhu...



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आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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21st June 2016, 11:46 PM

Bohat khoob madhu sahiba

Kitni saadgi hai kalaam mai
Mujhe bohat achha laga

Nazm ka unwaan bohat suit kiya

Iss mubarak mahine mai zor-e-kalaam aur

Duaao mai yaad rakhey hamey bhi
   
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22nd June 2016, 02:12 AM

bahut bahut haseen peshkash thii madhu ji.... yaqeen maaniye bahut acchaa lagaa aapka kalaam dekhna....

tahe dil se daad pesh karta hoon aati rahiyegaa.... shukriyaa

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22nd June 2016, 09:16 AM

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Kahte the hamse kabhi vo
Dil me ek hasrat jagi hai
aao hai mausam gazab ka
Aur barish ruk gayi hai..

Khatm apna ye safar ab
Door jane ki ghadi hai
Chal diye vo itna kahkar
Aur barish ruk gayi hai

Abra sare boondon wale
Koi aandhi le udi hai
Chup sa hai har ek nazara
Aur barish ruk gayi hai..

Dard itna badh gaya ab
Khushk ankhon ki nadi hai
seene me kuch chan se toota
Aur barish ruk gayi hai..

Yun lage pairon ke neeche
part sholon ki bichhi hai
Kano me chubhte hain nashtar
Aur barish ruk gayi hai..

Chal madhu kab tak rukegi
Door tak koi nahi hai
Lautne ka vaqt bhi hai
Aur barish ruk gai hai...

Madhu...
Bahut hi khoobsurat nazm hui hai is baar, dheeron daad aapko Madhu aur aise ki ehsaas aur rawaangi badhti rahe yahi dua rahegi



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Aor baarish ruk gaeyi buhet buhet khoob nazm paish ki hey aap ney madhu jii
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Bohat khoob madhu sahiba

Kitni saadgi hai kalaam mai
Mujhe bohat achha laga

Nazm ka unwaan bohat suit kiya

Iss mubarak mahine mai zor-e-kalaam aur

Duaao mai yaad rakhey hamey bhi
aapka behad shukriya mujahid sahab....

duayein hamesha doston ke sath hain..

salamat rahein...



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bahut bahut haseen peshkash thii madhu ji.... yaqeen maaniye bahut acchaa lagaa aapka kalaam dekhna....

tahe dil se daad pesh karta hoon aati rahiyegaa.... shukriyaa

Shaad....
Hame bhi bahot achvha laga aapko bazm me dekhkar shaad sahab..inayat banaye rakhiyega...

Behad shukriya..
Salamat rahein..

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Bahut hi khoobsurat nazm hui hai is baar, dheeron daad aapko Madhu aur aise ki ehsaas aur rawaangi badhti rahe yahi dua rahegi
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Aor baarish ruk gaeyi buhet buhet khoob nazm paish ki hey aap ney madhu jii
Daad qoobul kariye ������������
bahut bahut shukriya saba ji...

aage bhi sath deti rahiyega...

khush rahein...



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Bhot Khub Madhu Sahiba.. Kafi Zordaar Kalaam Raha.. Aur aakhri Makte Ka Sher Mujhe Bhot Hi Pasand Aaya.. BHOT Hi Khubsoorat.. . Likhte rahiye..
Bahot maufi chahti hun azaz sahab..aapko reply nahi kar payi...Aaj barish ne is nazm ki yaad dilayi tab apni bhool ka ehsaas hua...

Bahot shukriya aapka...age bhi hausla afzai ki ummeed rakhti hun

Aate rahiyega...
Salamat rahein..



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chal madhu kab tak rukegi
door tak koi nahi hai
lauTne ka vaqt bhi hai
aur barish ruk gai hai...


Madhu Bala.....poori nazm bahut acchi bani hai, par yeh ehsaas dil fareb rhe


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