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canteen - 11th October 2008, 07:33 PM

yaar beli door hoye badle haalat.
aje v a yad aaundi college di baat.
chete aaundi a var-2 rutt oh rangeen.
kise mele vargi lagdi c mere college di canteen....

pehla lecture hai kaahda.
mauke te bania bunk da irada.
chak fridge vicho coke,
paise khaate vich thokk.
bda fit c udhaar wala scene.
kise mele vargi.....

kite chaldi debate,
kite hunda celebrate.
jehda banda c smarty,
onu deni paindi party.
lagdiyaan c shartaa vekh kudi koi haseen.
kise mele......

khabre ki c jadoo us surgaa jehi tha vich.
jive aaunda hai nzaara kise kudi di haan vich.
pair college ch pauunde
bas khiche turre aaunde.
jive khich liaundihai been.
kise mele....

ethe hundia ldaaiyaan,
ethe dil v c jud de.
khaan peen picho
kyi vari paise v c thud de.
"deep" ta budget vekh k mangaunda,
pr jdo koi teeza aa janda.
odo hunda c masla sangeen.
kise mele vargi lagdi c mere college di canteen..
   
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13th October 2008, 11:46 AM

Deep ji ajj kaafi chir baad oh saaraa manzar akhaaN aggiyoN guzar gaya. College atey canteen do ajehey shabd ne jo zindagi wich ik hi waar saarthak hundey ne. Par man hamesha ehnaa nu bhaaldaa renhdaa hai. Eh mud dubaaraa khareedey nahi jaa sakdey. Ki din si oh. Canteen ch bethnaa , te kadi kadi kisey kudi ne vi aa jaanaa. Aur os din saariaaN ne hi payment aap den di zid karni. Oh canteen da contractor, ohdey kamm karan waaley mundey, oh tables, oh chairs. bas eh samajh lao ki addiction si oh canteen.

Shaayad kaafi lambaa bol gaya maiN. Bahut sohnaa likhiaa hai Deep ji. Kujh na kujh eho jehey topics te vi likhiaa karo.

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14th October 2008, 04:09 PM

thanx jiiiiiiiiiiiii..i always try to write on different topics....
   
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17th October 2008, 05:17 AM

deep ji sachi bahut changa lgaa pad ke.apne college di canteen de din yaad aa gaye.ki smaa si oh wi.
na koi fikar te na koi faka,
bus aan diyo jo changa
kyon ki yara da
canteen de wich khata.
par problem tan odo hundi si jado exams kol aa ke roll number laina hunda si te clearence layi canteen wale de signature jaruri hunde si.fir khata pura karan layi ghar koi bhana.
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thanx ji...........................
   
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18th October 2008, 09:38 PM

o deep maharj e ki yad kara dita tusi......... bahut dil de nere lagi thodi rachna...... jive mera apna ki kal hove ....... likde raho te thank u so much for leeting me meet with those lovely memories of canteen , college n freinds ........ tc ....hasde raho, wasde raho.....
   
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19th October 2008, 01:18 AM

Deep jee namaskaar...............beetey pala.n vicho.n guzarna kis nu changa nahi lagda, par jad zindgi de jameley vad jaunde ne taan ensaan chah ke v aine fursat nahi jutta sakda ki ona pala.n vich ek baar pher jaya jaye.....par aaj tuhadi es rachna ne oh kar dita....te menu ek baar oh pal yaad dilla dite....jina pala.n nu yaad karke aakha num ho gayea.n, kuj unha pala.n nu yaad karke dil nu sakoon miliya te vichdey hoye saathiya.n nu yaad karke dil bhar aaya....!

ek punjabi di kahawat bhi hai ki..............

"bedi da poor te tarinjan diya kudiya,
kade mud ke ekthiya.n nahi hundiya.n"



aida hi likhtey raho
kush raho


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19th October 2008, 05:55 PM

thank u...sunita ji and akaash ji....................
   
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