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29th September 2007, 03:47 AM
Adaab arz hei, Ehle bazm , bauahat darte darte is section mein aye hein Maham eik pakistani hei jiska passport Canadian hie ......... Ham kabhi pak mein nahi rahe , hamesha bahar ke mumalik mein rahe , convents mein parha aur bas urdu speaking family se talu q tha to kuc h mazhab ki wajhe se aur kuch riwayat sej urhe rehne ki koshish mein baba aur mama ne hamae urdu ghar mein thori bauath sikha dee thee warna hamaree to urdu bhi iti achi nai hie Us pe sone pe suhaga yeh ke hamae HINDI ka shouq ho gaaya Najnae kyun ye language iski lingo iti pure itee jaan jaisi pyaree see lagtee hei ke acha lagta hei isko bolna aur sun'na , aur ye jo ap sab ke india ke gaoun ki lingos hotee hien na ye hamae buahat hee inspire kartee hein Aap sab ne vo geet suna ho ga na AJA PIYA TUHE PIYAR DON uffffffffff i just am in luv wid it like hell , kita pure kita pyara sa geet ......... to bass hum ne koshish ki ke hum bhi kuch hindi mein likhein Na kisi se islaah ki na kisi se poocha aur darte darte yahan chale ayae agar hum ne buahat hee apki language ka court marshal kar dya ho to aap sab hamae achi tarha dant sakte hein )-: hum chup kar ke sun len ge cuz hamae nai pata hum ne ye kaisi likhee hie Here is another trivial creation of Maham s in HINDI .......... Let s see aa psab kiya kehte hien Plz be frank and be honest , jo ghaltiyan hon keh dijiyega hamae islaah achi lagtee hie Here u go :  ur gayee chundree mori gagan talae aj ye kaisi tan maa more agan jale jhuki jhukie mori madhbhari nazariya yun na nihaaro hum ka sanwariyaa gore ang pe chunar reh reh sarsaraye dhak dhak kare jiya man thartharayae torae milan ki laagi humka lagan piya barkha maa jal uthaa tori yaad ka diya nainon se chum chum madhura barse torae seene ma samane ko hum tarsae kaali ghata chayi,sawan ruth jhum ke ayee bijuriyaa aise chamkae, larza man hai duhayi toot ke barkha barsi aisee chalee beri pawan sandes layee tumhraa pur na ayae zulmi sajan aja piya man mandir ma tumka poojae hum tumhre bazoun ma jeevan rusta khojen hum moond ke nainaan beth rahee daasi tumhree tum pa arpan kar den tan ki chaandi hamree kajal ban palak maa ajaa sajan sajeelae ghol jaa phir man ma tu woh geete raaseele bijuriya damake,badli karke,jiya larz larz jaye tumhri yaad mein nainaa baras baras jaaiy tan ko choti pawan layi unka sandes le chal mohe bhi to sang sajan ke des janae ka karte hon gaye saajan iss pal ka pata hotee ho unke man maa bhi halchal pooch ke bata aiy chandaa tou mohae mori yaad ma ka woh bhi niharen ek tik tohe MAHAM AZMI |
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29th September 2007, 01:03 PM
maham jee: namaste: hame pata nahii.n thaa kii aap traditional hindi me.n bhii likh letii hai.n... waise aam bol-chaal me.n is tarah kii hindi kam sun,ne ko hii miltii hai! hindi ke taraf aap ka jo prem hai woh sach me.n qaabil-e-taariif aur qaabil-e-daad hai! tah-e-dil se shukraguzaar huu.n jo aap ne hame paRhne ka mauqa diya.. yuu.n hii likhti rahe.n.. ham paRhte rahe.nge.. aap ne apne baare me.n is bazm ko bataaya, is ke liye aap ko alag se shukriyah adaa to nahii.n kahuu.nga, lekin aap hii ke andaaz me kahuu.ngaa.. hazaaro.n gulsitaa.n aap ke naam  apna khayaal rakhiye, mayank |
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29th September 2007, 01:30 PM
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Maynak ji , Is adnaa see kaavish ko 'bardasht' karne ke liye shukriya Hum jante hien hamaree tehreerain aap jaise sukhanwar aur sukhan shanaas ke shaayaan e shaan nai hien phir bhi aap nazr e karam karte hien ye apke ache dilki nishani hie U re really chiverlous wid ur comments ......... Aapke 'hazaroun gulistan' walee baat pe muskura paree Maham Hamae adat hei aise kehne kee pata nai kyun pur hum kehte hien waise aap zindagi mein bhi .........mmmmmmm dekhiye phir likhne ja rahe the to end my note but ab nai kahain ge phir sahee Due Respects MahamAzmi |
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29th September 2007, 02:23 PM
urdu..english aur ab hindi..mashaallah aap ne to sabpe apna hunar azmaya hain..daad.....meri hindi bhi kuch khaas acchi nahin to main kya commment karu ki sahi hain ya galat..par padhne mein ehsaas dil ko chu gaye....waise hindi poetry main aap urdu ka ek word istemmal kar gayi..larz......  ...lekin koi baat nahin isse koi marks nahin katenge..aise hi is bazm ki ronak badhati rehna... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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29th September 2007, 07:20 PM
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chaliye shukar hei aise ne parhee jiski HINDI KUCH KHAS NAI heheehehe ab agayae allah haafiz  thanx hazaroun gulistan for all ur wordz buddy Urs Maham |
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haaaaaaaaaaaaay -
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nainon se chum chum madhura barse torae seene ma samane ko hum tarsae ...  haaaaaaaaaaaaay kuch ho jaayega aapki ye kavitaayen yuhi padhti rahi to di aap to thik ho na??? kabhi piya g heheh kabhi saanwariya kher mai kuch nah kar rahi hun ab...pitaai kar doge aap  likhte raho ese hi romantic shomantic..maine to kuch nahi kaha  hehehe love u 
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29th September 2007, 11:04 PM
Hahaaa buahaaaaaaaaat zor se hans pare hum eik dum
bauahaaaaaaaaaaaaat shararatee ho tum I just sat here blushed and smiling deeply Wat do i say now Haan hum to theek hein achi see larkee hamae kiya hona hei shhhhhhh ok me going gonig gone nai pata abhi kiya hum aur kahein Thanx for all ur lovely wordz here which just added at bit of ac olor to my life for a while Dher sara pyar Apki Maham |
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25th October 2007, 08:41 PM
Maham jee :
aadaab-o-taSleemaat aapko aaj aik naYe hi roop meiN paRhne kaa mauqaa milaa hay mujHe.. baRii KhuShii hu'ii aapko paRh ke.. aapki kavviSh ke aSh'aar be-Had pasaNd aaYeN..mere dil sey sey niklii hu'ii daad-o-tahseen ko qabUl farmaaYeN..aur YuuNhi bazm kii raunaq baRhaate raheN..! KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN,, duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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31st October 2007, 02:47 AM
bahut hi achcha likha hai aapne MahamAzmi jee,
it was a great composition.... thanks for sharing it... regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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3rd November 2007, 01:24 AM
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Muskura diye apki baat parh ke hum Maham ke buahat azeez dostj ante hien ke maham ke kayee rang hien , aur ye un dhanak rangon mein se eik rang trha jo aj ap ne dekha ye rang apko bhaya aur ap ne is ke liye kuch lafz ata kiye Shukrguzar thehree Maham apki , Hum to soch rahe the HINDI SPEAKING log hamara court marshal na kar den is jurrat pe ke hum HINDI mein kuch tuk bandi kar rahe hein magar shukr hei ab tak to kisi ne buahat burayee kee nahi , lagta hei buahat ache hein log yahan jo hamaree kavita ko vo bhi hindi ki kavita ko bardasht kar gaye |
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4th November 2007, 05:40 PM
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wow thanx for loving it ma'am! It makes me so proud when a hindi speaking person appriciates this trivial creation of mine meri hindi aisi hee hei jaisi GEORGE BUSH ki URDU ho gee hehehhee |
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1st December 2007, 12:49 PM
Namaste Maham Azmi
Aap hindi me kya khub lekthain hai.bahut kabela tariff hai .kabhi aap se milna ki chata hai. Quote:
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10th April 2008, 07:51 AM
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apko maham ki kavita pasand ayee , shukriya , magar humse milne ko ji chahanae wali baat kuch samjh se bahar hei mohtaram hazrat , anyways apki daad ke lye shukrguzar hein hum , Due Respects ! |
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8th August 2009, 05:42 PM
any more HINDI SPEAKING critics ?!
kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana _____________________________________ eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka |
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8th August 2009, 05:57 PM
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hindi ki badi behen braj bhasa me hai..........jaisa aap hindi likhti hai.....mota moti vo braj hindi hai...... regards |
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8th August 2009, 07:14 PM
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Aapki rachna aaj pehli baar dekhi, chuNkii maiN abhi SDC par naya huN. Bahot hi achha aur ehsaaso.N se labrez hai aapka kalaam. Mujhey kuch zyaada hi pasand aaya kyunki maiN Azamgarh ka huN (aur shaayad aap bhi "Azmi"), aur meri maadari zubaan bhojpuri hai, jis mein aapne likha hai. Awadhi se zara hat kar hai magar kaafi milti julti zubaaneN haiN ye. Aap ki rachna meiN kuch bhi raddo badal karne ki gunjaaish nahi hai (na mai karna chaahtu huN) par ek shabd aapko batana chaahta huN. Hamare yehaN Baazu nahi kehtey. BaNh kehte haiN. Tumhre "bahiyaN" ma jeevan rusta khojen hum, mein bilkul gaoN waali baat aa jaati hai. Aur chuNki ye zubaan aapko achhi lagti hai to aap Bhojpuri folk music suneN visheshkar "kajari" aur "birha". Aap ki jo rachna hai poorntaya kajari hai, which is basically the longing for one's beloved in the monsoon season and is sung by females predominantly. Noted exponents of this classical & semi-classical form are, Pandit Channulal Mishra, Girija Devi, Rajan and Sajan Mishra, Siddheshwari Devi, Shobha Gurtu etc. Birha as the name suggests are songs of pining too but sung by males!! (Guys have feelings too ladies!) But it is very loud and generally sung by cowherds or farmers to regale others with the beauty of their loved ones. Last but not the least since you like the song "aaja piya..." I am sure your emotions will go through a tsunami if you hear the song "ab ke baras bhej bhaiya ko babul" from the film Bandini. Invariably I cry every time when I hear it, (I don't mean to make you cry, but listen to the language and the composition) so here's the link http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f8Lp2A9ErAc Take a look whenever time permits at the humorous shayri for a bhojpuri hasya kavita I had posted and as a parting shot a regular blessing to girls in Bhojpuri "Ganga maiya karaiN ke Maham "Sugga" jaisey chahkaiN, aur jahaN jaiN ratraniiya jaise mahkaiN" (Sugga=Parrot, Ratraniya=Rajanigandha phool = white tuberose) Disclaimer: Any information overload is purely Intentional. Love and Peace to you, Shyam HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai." -Anand Narayan Mulla. वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत, हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है. -आनंद नारायण मुल्ला |
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10th August 2009, 03:39 PM
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Thanx hazaroun gulistan sir, for all the time u took out for my trivial creation here ...I m really touched and obliged Every word u jotted down here revealed the fact that u r a very sensetive guy wid a great asthetic /poetic sense and u drown in words n music and truely acknowledge every single couplet that comes ur way, Such people alwayz intrigue me and I d luv to see u on my creations not cuz i want praises from u but cuz I need people to understand and feel my poetry rather than just WAH WAH on it for the sake of "I scratch ur b ack and u scratch mine" kindaa stratagy... I ll surely listen to ur reccomanded songz n geets , It wz a pleasure reading all that u had to write here, Due respects, MahamAzmi kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana _____________________________________ eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka |
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15th September 2009, 06:04 PM
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kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana _____________________________________ eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka |
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17th November 2009, 01:54 AM
mahamji.....
accha laga aapki is rachna se rubaru hoke........aisa laga aap hume aaina deekha rahi hai.......... dil ki gahriyo se daad hazir hai.... likhte rahiye......ehsaas kabhi bhi bhasha ke mohtaaz nahi hote...ye aapne hume shikhya hai.....itne hi sundar ehsaaso ke saath aap phir se aaynge aur is zameen ka husn badhanynge aaisi meri kamna hai!!! Allha hafiz Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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Mohtaram Amit sahab,
behud navaazish apki hazrat, buahat shukriya... kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana _____________________________________ eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka |
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5th December 2009, 06:23 PM
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Maham jii, Aadaab!!! Kaisi haiN aap? Bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne, hme behad pasand aaya. Halanki maine aapki rachna Pehle bhi padhi thi, lekin aaj aapse baat karne ki wajeh aapke likhe ki tareef karna bilkul bhi nahi hai balki aapse shikayat karne ka man hai, aapko bura lage to muaf kijiyega.... Aap ne likha hai ki aap behad dari hui aayee haiN iss forum meiN KyoNki aap Pakistan se haiN.... Yeh baat to hme pasand nahi aayee...insaan to kewal Khuda ka hota hai...Pakistan, Hindustan ya Canada ka nahi...aur woh insaan jab kavi ya shayar ya koi bhi artist ho to woh kewal Khuda ka bhi nahi rehta...woh to sabka ho jaata hai....ussi tarha koi bhi bhasha ya boli bhi kisi ki nahi hogi...bhasha ya boli ke janam peechhe sirf aur sirf ek wajeh hoti hai woh ye ke ek khaas jagah ke log jab apne ehsaas sirf ishaaroN se bayaN nahi kar sakte to woh ek zariya khojte haiN apne ehsaas vyakt karne ke liye aur iss tarha boli ya bhasha ka janam hota hai..... Pakistan, Hindustan ya koi bhi jagah ho ehsaas to sabke ek se hi hote haiN...to baat hi kahaN se aayee aap ki boli ya aapke desh ki....aap Khud ko sirf insaan hi samajhiye....... Bahut zyada likh diya hai, aapko bura bhi lagega ki na jaan na pehchaan muNh uthaya aur naseehat dene chale aaye....lekin shayad pehli baar main pure vishwaas ke saath keh sakta hooN ki maine bilkul bhi galat nahi kaha....sochiyega meri baat.... Shukriya... Vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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26th December 2009, 09:49 AM
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aap sabhi kuch ghalat samjh bethe Hamara kehne ka maqsad ye tha ke hum INTERNATIONAL hien, paida pak mein hoay rahe kabhi nai wahna canada mein rehna hoa kabhi UAE mein ,Hindustaan se bauhat gehra link hie kyunke mere grandparents wahan ke the aur hum UP ke hein bascially , DAR ka taluq is lye nai ke PAKISTAN se hein kyunke ye forum kaheen ye nai keh raha ke ye bas HINDUSTANIYON ka hei Hum dare is lye the ke hindi language mashallah yahan sab ki iti achi hei tou hum ne tou kabhi likha nai tha is language mein , zyada tar angrezi schools mein parhe aur rahe hein wahan aise mumalik mein ...aur dar ye tha ke hamare nazm shayed iti achi na ho aur us language ka haq ada na kar sake...ishee tarha jab kisi buahat behtreen urdu forum mein jate hein tou bhi dare hoay hote hein ke urdu bhi iti achi nai hamaree , Umeed hei ap tamheed samjh gaye hong e hamare lye koi mulk ALIEN nai hei kyun ke hum dunia ghoome hoay hein aur najanae kitne mumalik mein rahe hein aur phir fun /ART kisi mulk ki jaageer nai hota ye sab hum jante hein shukriya apke khat ka ....... due respects Maham Azmi kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana _____________________________________ eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka |
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