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ek dam true...

dosti khuda ki wo nemat hai jo anmol hai
lakh ho daulat tere pass per har kisi ko hasil nahi
doston ki dastaan jab waqt sunata hai
doston sang bitaya waqt yaad aata hai
bhool jate hai hum duniya ki gamon ko
jab hume aap jaisa dost yaad aata hai


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doston ki dastaan jab waqt sunata hai

doston sang bitaya waqt yaad aata hai
bhool jate hai hum duniya ki gamon ko

jab hume aap jaisa dost yaad aata hai
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to keep the beauty & meaning of the thread 'sher ka jawaab sher me.n deejiye', it is requested to all member that, please give reply to 'sher' with a 'sher' only (not with four liners, qitaa, Ghazal, nazm etc etc). I hope all members will cooperate me to maintain beauty and dignity of the site in all level.

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Thanks a lot di...aap mere kehne per yahan aayi....thanks for this post.......




Mera har raaz tumhain hawa hi bata jatee hai

Kya ab bhi khushbu mere paigham sunatee hai ..
Haan, har roz guzarti meri shaam ab bhi waesi,
jaise humjoli mein me guzra karti thi kabhi......!


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Haan, har roz guzarti meri shaam ab bhi waesi,
jaise humjoli mein me guzra karti thi kabhi......!


is raah-e-muhabbat me.n tuu saath agar hotaa
har ghum pe gul khilate Khushbuu kaa safar hotaa
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is raah-e-muhabbat me.n tuu saath agar hotaa
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Yoon mohabbat na bada mujhse, main bikhar jaoonga,
pehle se hi toota hoon, jo chua tune to bikhar jaoonga...!!!!


yun khoye teri yaad mein ki khud ko bhula dia
jaise ke hum ko khud say koi waastaa na ho



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yun khoye teri yaad mein ki khud ko bhula dia
jaise ke hum ko khud say koi waastaa na ho



"jab te teri bahho.n ka sahara milla hai,
khuda ko sajda karna hum bhool gaye"

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aye khuda aankhon ko kuch aisi khudai de,
jidher daikhu udher wohee dikhai de,
kaash aisa asar ho jaye aaj hawa main,
ki unn ko pukaru aur sirf unhi ko dikhai de.....
   
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Hey.........................Rinksssss....

You just have to write Two lines......

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aye khuda aankhon ko kuch aisi khudai de,
jidher daikhu udher wohee dikhai de,
kaash aisa asar ho jaye aaj hawa main,
ki unn ko pukaru aur sirf unhi ko sunaai de.....
i m sorry rinkss ji aapki galti sahi ker raha hu,mujhe muaaf kerna agar meri baat apko galat lagi ho to. first line mein KHUDAI word nahi beendaai word hai jiska matlab aankho ki roshni hota hai. jaise

E-KHUDA aaj ankho ko kuchh aisi BEENDAAI de....


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Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
   
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yuh toh milta hai kai kuch apni kismat se

kyu tolte ho tum khuda ki rehmaten kimat se
hasil kar loge tum bahot kuch shahorat se

par dost pyar na kharid sakonge daulat se


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Mera jeena,mera mera,her SAANS uski bandagi hai,

woh aur honge jo pyaar ko farokhtt kerte hai,
mein hu ishq uska woh meri tishnagi hai................................kkkhantahir


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khuda hai mera DOST aur usi ki di hui zindagi hai,
Mera jeena,mera mera,her SAANS uski bandagi hai,

woh aur honge jo pyaar ko farokhtt kerte hai,
mein hu ishq uska woh meri tishnagi hai................................kkkhantahir

dost toh kai mil jate hai tanha zindagi mein
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dost toh kai mil jate hai tanha zindagi mein


mang kar dekhenge ik rafeeb bandagi mein

Tu badalta hai to yu be sabab meri ankhain
mere hathon ki lakeeron se ulajh jati hain ....


nm





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Tu meri dost mera armaan hai, shayad apni ehmiyat se anjaan hai,
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Tu meri dost mera armaan hai, shayad apni ehmiyat se anjaan hai,
mujhse kabhi rooth kar mat jana, kyunki meri duniya tere bina veeran hai..... !


Zindagi se bas yahi gilla hai mujhe ae dost
tu bohaat dair se mila hai mujhe ae dost....

lamha


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Awesome........

Yun shikwe shikayat na kar e mere dost,
Ki hum mile to sahi, ye kya kam hai.....!

SK


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mahasuus kii hai terii zaruurat kabhii kabhii
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mang kar dekhenge ik rafeeb bandagi mein
RAFEEB word nahi hota RAQEEB hota hai.

koi dost hai na raqeeb hai,
tera shaher kitna ajeeb hai,

yaha kiska chehra padha karu,
yaha sabke sir pe saleeb hai...........nm


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RAFEEB word nahi hota RAQEEB hota hai.

koi dost hai na raqeeb hai,
tera shaher kitna ajeeb hai,

yaha kiska chehra padha karu,
yaha sabke sir pe saleeb hai...........nm


"mere hanste chehre par na jana dost,
pad kar dekhoge to dard ki ek kitaab hoon maiN"

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"mere hanste chehre par na jana dost,
pad kar dekhoge to dard ki ek kitaab hoon maiN"

-nm
DEKHNE wale meri muskurahat pe na ja ,
yeh toh ek parda hai gham e dil chhipane k liye..nm


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DEKHNE wale meri muskurahat pe na ja ,
yeh toh ek parda hai gham e dil chhipane k liye..nm


parde parde me.n aataab achchhe nahii.n
aise a.ndaaz-e-hijaab achchhe nahii.n

-Daag Dehlvi


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parda nasheeno se dil lagaya nahi jata
parde mein aksar dil fareb huwa karte hai


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mein itna bada ohda leker nahi jee sakta mein abhie chhota hu mujhe chhota hi rehne di jiye.
bade hone per jimme daari aa jaati hai.

waise naarazgi ki wajah samajh mein nahi aayi.


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parda nasheeno se dil lagaya nahi jata
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DIL farebi ka perde se koi ta'alluq hi nahi,
humne toh apno mein bhi RAQEEB paaye hai..........kkkhantahir


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DIL farebi ka perde se koi ta'alluq hi nahi,
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mein itna bada ohda leker nahi jee sakta mein abhie chhota hu mujhe chhota hi rehne di jiye.
bade hone per jimme daari aa jaati hai.

waise naarazgi ki wajah samajh mein nahi aayi.
naarazgi nahi ji............ur interpretation is not right
aap cool hai thnx 4 correction without it meaning wouldnt be clear in the sher
hum duffer hai typing error karte hai
pliz dont take it wrongly
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DIL farebi ka perde se koi ta'alluq hi nahi,
humne toh apno mein bhi RAQEEB paaye hai..........kkkhantahir


Dhunda karte hai jo apno mein hi RAQEEB
vo khud pardo mein chupe farebi huwa karte hai


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Dhunda karte hai jo apno mein hi RAQEEB

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naarazgi nahi ji............ur interpretation is not right
aap cool hai thnx 4 correction without it meaning wouldnt be clear in the sher
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DIL farebi ka perde se koi ta'alluq hi nahi,
humne toh apno mein bhi RAQEEB paaye hai..........kkkhantahir




Dhunda karte hai jo apno mein hi RAQEEB

vo khud pardo mein chupe farebi huwa karte hai

AAPKA dil dukha uske liye muaafi, aage se aisa nahi honga,mujhe theek laga isiliye meine aisa kiya.

JO doosro ko RAQEEB kaha kerte hai,woh bade badnseeb hua kerte hai,
HANS ker dikhate hai FARAAKH DILI, aur dil se gareeb hua kerte hai,

FAREB kerne wale toh Ankho se kaajal bhie chura lete hai,
jo keh sake kisi ko apna woh toh bade khushnaseeb hua kerte hai..
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Dhunda karte hai jo apno mein hi RAQEEB


vo khud pardo mein chupe farebi huwa karte hai




Pust Housle Wale Tera Saath Kya dange
ae 'dost' Idhar Aaja Hum Tujhe panaah denge[/quote]


theek hai sahab theek haisambhalo is sher ko


SEH savaar hi girte hai MAIDAAN-E-JUNG mein,
woh tifl kya ladenge jo ghutno k bal chale.............nm(yeh tha aapke sher ka jawaab)

aur yeh rahi humaari tareef


DAST toh DAST hai DARIYA bhie na chhode humne,
BEHR-E-ZULMAT mein dauda diye ghode humne........allama iqbaal sahab.

note:BEHER_SAMANDER/and ZULMAT_ANDHERA.
yeh meaning nahi batata toh sher sir pe se chala ja ta.




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AAPKA dil dukha uske liye muaafi, aage se aisa nahi honga,mujhe theek laga isiliye meine aisa kiya.

JO doosro ko RAQEEB kaha kerte hai,woh bade badnseeb hua kerte hai,
HANS ker dikhate hai FARAAKH DILI, aur dil se gareeb hua kerte hai,

FAREB kerne wale toh Ankho se kaajal bhie chura lete hai,
jo keh sake kisi ko apna woh toh bade khushnaseeb hua kerte hai..
kkkhantahir

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ehsaas bartari se khuda ho gaya hu main


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Pust Housle Wale Tera Saath Kya dange
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theek hai sahab theek haisambhalo is sher ko


SEH savaar hi girte hai MAIDAAN-E-JUNG mein,
woh tifl kya ladenge jo ghutno k bal chale.............nm(yeh tha aapke sher ka jawaab)

aur yeh rahi humaari tareef


DAST toh DAST hai DARIYA bhie na chhode humne,
BEHR-E-ZULMAT mein dauda diye ghode humne........allama iqbaal sahab.

note:BEHER_SAMANDER/and ZULMAT_ANDHERA.
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wafa hi ki hai bewafaai humne kabhie seekhi nahi,
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