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14th November 2009, 01:21 AM
Aik Paaghal Nazm Paaghal SmaajoN Ke Naam
Raakh barseygi aasmaanoN se
Fiza meiN bhar jaigi qabaroN ki haddiaN
Apna hi lahu bahyga dariya dariya
NiklyaNgay naNgay-jism murdoN ke juloos
Kuttay roiNgay muNh aflaaq pe dhar kar
Aur raqs karaNygee siyaaroN ki hookeiN
AaNkh barsa karEygi naalioN ke keeRay
Shab peetee phiraygi sooraj ki kai
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Aflaaq- Skies, Kai-vomit
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Aik Paaghal Nazm Paaghal SmaajoN Ke Naam
Raakh barseygi aasmaanoN se
Fiza meiN bhar jaigi qabaroN ki haddiaN
Apna hi lahu bahyga dariya dariya
NiklyaNgay naNgay-jism murdoN ke juloos
Kuttay roiNgay muNh aflaaq pe dhar kar
Aur raqs karaNygee siyaaroN ki hookeiN
AaNkh barsa karEygi naalioN ke keeRay
Shab peetee phiraygi sooraj ki kai
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Aflaaq- Skies, Kai-vomit
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Baljinder sahab aadaaB......
Mudat bad aapke khayaloN ke ruberu hua.... Aur yakiN janiye... Rongte khade kar diye aapke is khayal ne.... But aapne bahut tez wards use kiye hai.... Narm dil wale to bardasht hi nahi kar payenge aapke yeh words...
Keep it up.... Exxcelent thought....
Khuda Hafez..
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23rd November 2009, 03:22 AM
Thanks for the beautiful words of appreciation.well!what you said was what my intension was-ki rangtay kharay ho jaiN.Seems i have been succesful.The society is undergoing such hypocritical mode that it needs such strong words for an individual to wake up.
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4th December 2009, 12:39 AM
Bayzaar
Tujh tak nahiN pahuNchati ab meray dard ki sadaa
Dil hai badhawaas ki aakhir kya hua
Tu hi mujhay bataa yeh insaaf kya hua
Kiska tha gunaah aur kisko mili saza
Bahut roya,tarpa,hua bahut bayzaar dil
Toonay magar kaha ab gham maiN din guzaar dil
Makhsoos meray liayay thay woh teray jo ahsaas
Halaat ki aaNdhi maiN shayad rehay na teray paas
Ab kisi umeed pay "Sagar" na tu thahar
Is aNdhayri raat ki shayad na ho sehar
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23rd December 2009, 12:46 AM
Dard-e-tanhai
Aao lay jao meray dil kay khazanay
SeeNch daalo yeh apnay gulshan veeranay
TanhaaioN ka zehar piya hai is amrit kay liyay
TaNz-o-fiQroN maiN jiya hai is amrit kay liyay
Barti gayi,barti gayi aur talaash tab junoon ho gayi
Meri deewanagi mehfiloN maiN haNsi ka majmoon ho gayi
Ukta kay uth gaya har aashna kareeb say
Aur ziNdagi ruk gayi us maNzar ajeeb pay
Ik taraf urnay ki lalak
Ik taraf zameeN ki pakar
Ik taraf nai duniya ka shouq
Ik taraf ajnabiyat ka khauf
Magar phit khudi nay behoshi ki aakhri zaNzeer bhi tor di
ParoN maiN apnay hosh ka dum bhar,aasmanoN say hor li
Nigaah phir uth gayi jeet haar kay sawaal say
Ufaq dar ufaq barta gaya noor hosh kay jamaal say
Phir dil dil lay kar gaya yeh wusat-e-ahsaas
Behosh sab hujoom thay laut aayaa maiN udaas
TanhaaioN maiN magar ab bhi
Umeed ki lau jalti hai.
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Ashna-parichit,known,Ufaq-khistij,horizon,Noor-raushni,light,wusat-e-ahsaas-ahssasoN ki vishalta
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3rd January 2010, 01:15 AM
Baarish
Swaab si lagi mujhay
Us din baarish ki woh phuaar
Jab
Meray chayray ka usnay
Apnay aaNchal say poNcha paani
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3rd January 2010, 01:34 AM
brijinder ji,
aapki kuch rachnaye phadi....
kuch ne rongte khade kar diye aur kuch fir se masooom kar diya....
aapki lekhni ka jadoo sar chad ke bol raha hai.....
Sir, accha laga phad ke....ek choti si guzarish hai ki....apni sab kavitao ko alag alag threads me jodiye...phadne mai assani rehti hai.....
aapki agli panktiyo ka intizar hai...................
amit7600
Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me
Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me
Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo
Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me
(When i received You in my heart everything changed for me)
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3rd January 2010, 02:34 PM
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Originally Posted by Brijinder
Aik Paaghal Nazm Paaghal SmaajoN Ke Naam
Raakh barseygi aasmaanoN se
Fiza meiN bhar jaigi qabaroN ki haddiaN
Apna hi lahu bahyga dariya dariya
NiklyaNgay naNgay-jism murdoN ke juloos
Kuttay roiNgay muNh aflaaq pe dhar kar
Aur raqs karaNygee siyaaroN ki hookeiN
AaNkh barsa karEygi naalioN ke keeRay
Shab peetee phiraygi sooraj ki kai
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brijinder saheb,
bahut hi dard hai aapke is kalaam meiN, mere khayal se aapne duniya bahut dekhi hai aur dekh dekh kar rote rahe haiN...is kalaam ka marm bahut bahut gehra hai...aapko aaj pehli baar padha hai....ab intzaar raha karega...
ek dost,
vikram...
P.S: amit bhai aapka bahut bahut shukriya jo aapne mujhe i's kalaam se ru-ba-ru karvaya......
aapka....
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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4th January 2010, 01:01 AM
Amit saheb and Vikram saheb,
Thanks a lot for the words of appreciation.I was moved by such expression of open appreciation.I hope these poems linger in your minds for some time.In fact,I was keeping all my poems in one thread so that,if some one wants to read my works,they can have it at one place.What do you say?
I too am from Chandigarh originally but presently settled in New Zealand so was pleased to know that Vikram saheb too is from there.
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4th January 2010, 10:28 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Brijinder
Amit saheb and Vikram saheb,
Thanks a lot for the words of appreciation.I was moved by such expression of open appreciation.I hope these poems linger in your minds for some time.In fact,I was keeping all my poems in one thread so that,if some one wants to read my works,they can have it at one place.What do you say?
I too am from Chandigarh originally but presently settled in New Zealand so was pleased to know that Vikram saheb too is from there.
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Brijinder saheb,
Your poem is worth drawing appreciation...its about realization...
its about the naked truth...I really liked the vigor of your words...most of the times, the theme of my creations is also truth...read some whenever you have time...
As far as keeping poems in one thread, in my opinion, is not a good idea...because here, there is so much to read that one simply does not want to check with all the replies, so much of your work would go unnoticed...this is just the way I think and it is not essentially the best way...
Good to learn that you too are from Chandigarh...its simply the best place...these days I am working at Gurgaon, and I miss Chandigarh a lot...don't you...?
Take Care...
Vikram...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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10th February 2010, 04:30 AM
Hi Vikram,Thanks a lot for the appreciation.Yes!I do miss chandigarh but lately when i visited,the traffic chaos,the rush of people was a bit too much,but I have so many friends n relatives there that these things do not make any difference.We are planning to go there again in October.
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10th February 2010, 08:47 PM
Birjinder ji saari to nahi lekin kai rachnai pari behad psand aaee.lekin sabse adhik
BUS AUR NAHI, bahut pasand hai.iswar aap ko or zyada takat de.main aap ko rating de raha hoon.
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11th February 2010, 05:40 AM
Rajinder saheb,Thanks a lot for the kind words of appreciation.I hope these poems lingers in your mind for some time and stimulate you to think.I request you to share the poems with your near n dears if you really like these as for me,sitting here in NZ, literary magazine are out of reach and only internet is the medium.
Thanks once again.
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12th February 2010, 10:12 AM
TalkhiaN-3
Meray wajood pay phailee haiN taqdeer ki nadeedaa lakeeraiN
Nijaat jin say shayud main na pa sakuNga kabhi
Muqaddar bun kay milay hain gumnaamioN kay aNdhairay mujhay
Tasleem-e-fun ki apnay shayud un maiN lau na jalaa sakuNga kabi
Lahu-lahu jiya hai maiNnay har takhleek ko apni
Likha hai inhaiN shub ki taarikiaN laykar
Aur alfaaz kay paikar main utaaraa hai inhaiN
TanhaaioN main afkaar ki baarikaiN laykar
Umr bhar ka dard jinkay liayay paalaa
Aur duniya bhar kay rutbay choray
Akaylaa hi takraataa raha waqt ki aaNdhi say
Aur kitnay shokh paighaam moray
Magar aayaa na koi deedaawar apnaa
Aur tasvvur mera khlaaon main bhatkataa hai ab talak
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Nadeeda-blind, Tasleem-e-fun- recognition of art, takhleeq-rachna( creation)taarikiaN-blackness,afkaar-thoughts
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14th February 2010, 03:13 PM
Saheb...bahut khoob ehsaas.... pasand aaye
dhnyavad aapka.....
amit7600
Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me
Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me
Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo
Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me
(When i received You in my heart everything changed for me)
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30th April 2010, 01:08 AM
Thanks a lot for the kind words.I am sorry for replying so late though as i had gone to india for about a month.
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Ishq -
14th May 2010, 02:11 AM
Ishq
Ishq junooN bhi hai sanjeedgi bhi hai
Yeh hawis bhi hai pakeezgi bhi hai
Shokhi bhi hai ishq-
Baanki adaaoN pe lutnay ka naam bhi hai
Rooh-e-irtqa-e-dil-o-dimagh bhi-
Zindagi ko samjhnay ka naam bhi hai
Ishq masroofiat bhi fursat bhi hai
Ishq qurbat bhi aur furqat bhi hai
Ishq rif_at bhi aur wus_at bhi hai
Aur ishq kabhi faqt chahat bhi hai
Yeh masoomiyat bhi rikhshandgi bhi hai
Bosa hai to kabhi bandgi bhi hai
ZamiN bhi hai aur aasmaN bhi hai
Magar ufaq ka ismay nishaN bhi hai
Kabhi bistar ki salwaton sa-
To kabhi mandir ki moortoN sa
Kabhi uryaanioN ka shaida
To kabhi Meera-o-Mariam ki soortoN sa
Ishq rog bhi magar mudawa bhi hai
Ishq parastish bhi magar da_awa bhi hai
RishtoN say sada juda hai ishq
Isliyay hi bana khuda hai ishq
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Meaning:
Rooh-e-irtqa-e-dil-o-dimagh -ehsaas aur khyaaolon ki tarakki ki aatma
furqat-Judai
rif_at -uNchai
wus_at -vishaalta
rikhshandgi- masti
ufaq -Horizon
uryaanioN-nudity
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15th May 2010, 09:59 AM
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Wasl kay woh lamhay
Meray kaandhay pay apna sar rakhay
Band aankhoN maiN kai khwaab liayay
Larazaty huyay lub aaNchal maiN chupayay
Aur jazboN kay sad-sailaab liayay
Meri kameez kay buttonoN say khailti ungliaN teri
Chayar rahi ho jaisay kisi raag ki dhun
Teray aarizoN pay har dum badlatay taassur
Rahi ho kudrat jaisay koi jaadu sa bun
Khaloos itna ki paimaana-e-shakhsiyat jayay chalak
Saadhgi aisi ki milay usmaiN Mariam ki jhalak
Lutaanay lago jab tum apni adaaiN nasheeli
Utar aayay Menaka jaisay chor kar apna falak
Khusboo teray badan ki lagay sharaab mujhay
TujhmaiN mil jayay har swaal ka jwaab mujhay
Aur jab pyaar say bulao tum mujhko "Sonu"
koi Mil jayay jaisay azeem khitaab mujhay
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Meanings: Taassur--Bhaav,Khaloos-warmth,paimana-e-shakhsiyat-personality ka jaam,Menka-Mytholigical charactor known for her seductive powers,Falak-sky, azeem-bahut bara,Khitaab-upadhi like padam shri etc.
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Bohat khoob Brijinder Saheb......Daad kabool kare.
Khusboo teray badan ki lagay sharaab mujhay
TujhmaiN mil jayay har swaal ka jwaab mujhay
Aur jab pyaar say bulao tum mujhko "Sonu"
koi Mil jayay jaisay azeem khitaab mujhay
Wah kya baat hai......
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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15th May 2010, 10:02 AM
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Hadd-e-fikr say aagay
Swaal haiN jwaab haiN
Khwaab khwaab khwaab haiN
Halaal na haraam hai
Afqaar kay saraab haiN
Hyaat la-jwaab hai
Aur sabko na-gwaar hai
Hyaat la-hadood hai
Par rooh girftaar hai
Hyaat khud maqaam hai
Aur aadmi khwaar hai
Khwaab bhi yaqeen haiN
Yaqeen bhi to khwaab haiN
Swaal haiN jwaab haiN
Khwaab khwaab khwaab haiN
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Brijinder “Sagar”
Auckland, New Zealand
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Meanings:
Halaal—religiously approved
Haraam—anathema,religiousely not sanctioned
Saraab- Mirage
Afqaar—thoughts
Hyaat—life
La-hadood- without limits(boundaries)
Maqaam—Manzil
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Bohat bohat khoob raha andaaz_e_bayaa.N Brijinder Jee......daad kabool kare.
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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15th May 2010, 10:23 AM
Thanks a lot for the beautiful words of appreciation,Sajid saheb.
Regards
brijinder
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17th May 2010, 07:47 PM
Quote:
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Ishq
Ishq junooN bhi hai sanjeedgi bhi hai
Yeh hawis bhi hai pakeezgi bhi hai
Shokhi bhi hai ishq-
Baanki adaaoN pe lutnay ka naam bhi hai
Rooh-e-irtqa-e-dil-o-dimagh bhi-
Zindagi ko samjhnay ka naam bhi hai
Ishq masroofiat bhi fursat bhi hai
Ishq qurbat bhi aur furqat bhi hai
Ishq rif_at bhi aur wus_at bhi hai
Aur ishq kabhi faqt chahat bhi hai
Yeh masoomiyat bhi rikhshandgi bhi hai
Bosa hai to kabhi bandgi bhi hai
ZamiN bhi hai aur aasmaN bhi hai
Magar ufaq ka ismay nishaN bhi hai
Kabhi bistar ki salwaton sa-
To kabhi mandir ki moortoN sa
Kabhi uryaanioN ka shaida
To kabhi Meera-o-Mariam ki soortoN sa
Ishq rog bhi magar mudawa bhi hai
Ishq parastish bhi magar da_awa bhi hai
RishtoN say sada juda hai ishq
Isliyay hi bana khuda hai ishq
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Meaning:
Rooh-e-irtqa-e-dil-o-dimagh -ehsaas aur khyaaolon ki tarakki ki aatma
furqat-Judai
rif_at -uNchai
wus_at -vishaalta
rikhshandgi- masti
ufaq -Horizon
uryaanioN-nudity
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Brijinder jee:
Pranaam!
kaise hai.N aap? koShiSh bahot hi umdaa'h rahiiN.. ehsaas mujhe be-had pasaNd aayeN.. yuuNhi bazm ki Shaan ko baRhaate raheN aap yahee KhaahiSh hay!
dil se daad-o-mubaaraQbaad..!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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27th June 2010, 05:13 AM
Dhaval,I am very sorry for not replying you earlier.Thanks a lot for the kind words of appreciation.Are you on face book?
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1st July 2010, 01:59 AM
Waqt ki aankh se dekho to yeh bahut puraanii lagti hai
Teray meray ishq ki baat ab faqt kahani lagti hai
Ban ke lahu takhleeq mirii kii ragh ragh men woh behti hai
Larki jo naadaan kabhii ,kabhii bahut siyaanii lagti hai
Ek ahad par maiN ne guzaarii tanha apnii umr tamaam
Aaj koyii soche to shaayad bahut hairaanii lagti hai
Kehnay ko gar kuchh na ho to bas pachheedah kar daalo
Baat samajh aaye na yahaan woh hii ruuhaanii lagti hai
Aur haseeN hoNgay dunyaa men us se bhii baR kar lekin
Achi itni phir kyuN mujhko woh mar-jaani lagti hai
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Waqt ki aankh se dekho to yeh bahut puraanii lagti hai
Teray meray ishq ki baat ab faqt kahani lagti hai
Ban ke lahu takhleeq mirii kii ragh ragh men woh behti hai
Larki jo naadaan kabhii ,kabhii bahut siyaanii lagti hai
Ek ahad par maiN ne guzaarii tanha apnii umr tamaam
Aaj koyii soche to shaayad bahut hairaanii lagti hai
Kehnay ko gar kuchh na ho to bas pachheedah kar daalo
Baat samajh aaye na yahaan woh hii ruuhaanii lagti hai
Aur haseeN hoNgay dunyaa men us se bhii baR kar lekin
Achi itni phir kyuN mujhko woh mar-jaani lagti hai
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Brijinder sagar sahab AadaaB!
Bahut khoob gazal pesh ki hia aapne...... Dil se daad hazir hai.....
Lagta hai sona kunadan ki prakriyaa meiN aa gaya hai..... Jo aise umdaa kalaam aapki kalam se nikal rahe haiN......
Aise hi ek se ek khoob kalaamoN se bazm meiN aate rahiye......
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez.........
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2nd July 2010, 06:17 AM
I am thankful to all of you for the kind words of appreciation.
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8th August 2010, 08:59 AM
wo mujh se yoon daaman chuRaane lage
ki guzre huwe din fasaane lagay
jo kal tak muhabbat ka izhaar the
wahi ab hawas ke bahaane lagay
lagaa`o na pehre yooN khushbu`oN par
haiN haasil meN jin kay zamaane lagay
pighal jaate baahoN maiN jo thay kabhii
bahut faasle ab banaane lagay
guzishta jo shab ka hai aayaa khayaal
vo sharma ke ankheiN jhukaane lagay
jo poochhaa to keh daalii hai dil kii baat
na kehna tujhe ab rulaane lagay
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