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16th March 2005, 02:06 PM
dostoN ...
maiN kunal aaj hazir huN shayri ke us sectioN maiN jisko sab.. shari-e-ishq naam se jante haiN... bohat pehle kabhi yahaN ek shayri likhi thi ... par dard ke sathiyoN ka sath yuN bhaya.. ki wahaN se kahin jane ka dil hi nahi kiya ... par aaj na jane jo likha socha yahan post kiya jaye .. ek choti si koshish kar raha huN ... umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi ... apne anmol alfaz aap is par lutayeNge umeed hai .... pesh e nazar hai ye nazrana .... -------------------------------------------------------------- Gunguni subah maiN yuN tera deedaar karte hai… khaayaloN maiN bhi hum tumhi se pyar karte hai… bikharti jab jab har kiran, us aaftaab ki jameen par… sajda khuda ka kar, sadka tera hi sarkar karte hai… rageeN hai wo galiyaaN, tere husN ke charchoN se… hoga na humsa koi, deewanoN se takraar karte hai… mile yar maikade mai, har sawal ka jawab dhundhte… teri yaadoN mai madhosh, har jam se inkar karte hai.. hontoN pe hansi saza, chupate rahe raaz-e-dil kitne… tujh bin ashq rukte nahi, ye aaj hum ikraar karte hai… ye hawa ruhani kahegi tujhse halat-e-“saccha_pyar”… degi paigaam mera, har pal wo tera intzar karte hai… Gunguni subah maiN yuN tera deedaar karte hai… khaayaloN maiN bhi hum tumhi se pyar karte hai… kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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16th March 2005, 02:25 PM
Gunguni subah maiN yuN tera deedaar karte hai…
khaayaloN maiN bhi hum tumhi se pyar karte hai… bikharti jab jab har kiran, us aaftaab ki jameen par… sajda khuda ka kar, sadka tera hi sarkar karte hai… WaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaH! IShq ka suroor zoron par hai huzoor!! rangeeN hai wo galiyaaN, tere husN ke charchoN se… hoga na humsa koi, deewanoN se takraar karte hai… mile yar maikade mai, har sawal ka jawab dhundhte… teri yaadoN mai madhosh, har jam se inkar karte hai.. Kya baat hai sarkaara! Mohabbat ke jaam ka nasha zabardast hai  hontoN pe hansi saza, chupate rahe raaz-e-dil kitne… tujh bin ashq rukte nahi, ye aaj hum ikraar karte hai… ye hawa ruhani kahegi tujhse halat-e-“saccha_pyar”… degi paigaam mera, har pal wo tera intzar karte hai… Yeh Sher.. Dil me utar gaya hai mere bhai.. bahut khoobsurat.. Tumhare yeh ehsaas...Tum Humesha aise hi raho!! Dearest Kunaal! Pehle to meri taraf se Swagat Ishq section me bhaiya... accha laga yahan dekhkar tumhe....Humesha ishq par hi likhte raho dua rahegi Kalaam ka kya kahoon.. Ek Ek Sher nagina hai... Har shabd me pyaar chhalak raha hai... Aur jisse pyaar karte ho, woh itni pyaari hai ke tumhara yuun khushi se jhoomna laazmi hai!! Dua Rahegi ke Humesha yun hi Khush Raho.. aur itne anmol nageeno se Ishq ki mehfil bhi sajate raho!! Apna khayal Rakhna.. Meri dher saari daad tumhare naama hai... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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16th March 2005, 02:48 PM
Kunal!!!
Ye kalaam to tumne zabardast likha hai!! Sach.. kaii baar paRa ise.. aur har baar pehle se zyada pasand aaya. Itna pyaar khud me sameTe hai har lafz.. yun lagta hai jaise rachna apne aap ko gunguna rahi hai.. pyaar ke maasoom ehsaas se bharpoor.. sachchaayi ki mehek hai isme.. kya kahein hum, tareef karte alfaaz kum paR rahe hain.. Simply beautiful!! Tumhe ye haseen ehsaas bohat bohat mubaarak ho! Yunhi likhte rehna.. aur muskuraate rehna! |
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16th March 2005, 04:03 PM
Pyare Kunal,
Subhanallah, ek behtereen kalaam jo bas parhte hi reh gaye. Hmmmmm, Chote miya, junoon e ishq kuch ziyaada hi sawaar ho gaya hai!!!! Chaliye, kamaskam issi bahane hume aise aur bhi haseen kalaam parhne ko to mile. Lage raho, humari duaein humesha tumhare saath. To chalo, tumhari 96.6 grams daad qabool kar lo.Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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16th March 2005, 05:41 PM
Bahut Khoob Kunal Sahaab,
Bahut dino baad acha kalaam padne ko mila hai Issi khoobsurti ke saath likhte rahiyega Khaksaar :"A Smile can change your World so KEEP SMILING": |
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hi! -
16th March 2005, 05:53 PM
Kunaal ji..ist so gud 2 see U in Ishq sectn...well roshan ho gaaya ishq sec...bahot hi payar likha hai aapne...! Ek Narmi..meine apke kallaam mein mehsoos ki hai aj...bahot achha laga padh ke!
Gunguni subah maiN yuN tera deedaar karte hai… khaayaloN maiN bhi hum tumhi se pyar karte hai…sweet! tc komal |
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16th March 2005, 09:11 PM
subah yunh teri yaad sath ho chali
aaftaab bhi narm sa paaya humne..... kunal khush raho tumhari .............. |
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17th March 2005, 12:03 AM
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aapne yuN swagat kiya mera yahaN dil khush ho gaya ... aur umeed hum bhi yahi karte hai ki ishq se nata kabhi na toote... aur bhai sach aaj jo kalaam yahaN likha hai .. uspar yahaN sathiyon ne jo pyar lutaya .. dil bagh ban ho gaya .. bohat se kalaam likhe .. bohat baar daad mili ... par aaj jis tarah logoN ne saraha hai is kalaam ko... aisa ehsaas mere kisi kalaam ko na mile ,,.... bhai sach asar usi ka hai .. jo bohat pyara hai ... aur aapki dua ka sada talabgaar huN .. ye duayeN bhi sir aNkhoN pe ... aapka sath to rahega hi ... aur mehfil sajti hi rahegi ... aap bhi apna khayal rakhna ... aapki daad humne bhi teh dil se kabool ki... aapka bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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17th March 2005, 11:16 AM
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aapne to bande ki kuch jyada hi tareef kar di .. bohat bohat shukriya ... aapne mere alfazoN ko padha aur saraha... kya kahuN aapke jawabi reply ke bare maiN ... yuN laga ki bas shikhar par hun main...aap aayi bas aapka shukriya ... aur kuch nahi keh sakta ... main aapka dost kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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17th March 2005, 01:56 PM
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wallah aapki tareef ke liye ... sach aapka pyar to mujhe tab hi mil jata hai jab aap mujhe kehte ho "pyare kunal" ... bhai ishq to sawar hona lazmi hi hai ,.... kya kare aap sabkta sath jo hai  well aise kalaam aapke khidmat maiN aate raheNge ... ye wada hai ...aap ki daad sir aaNkhoN pe ...aapka bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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17th March 2005, 08:26 PM
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aap meri post pe pehli baar aaye hain ... boliye kya leNge chai ya coffee bohat bohat shukriya aap yahaN aaye ...aur yuN is tareeke se tareef ki ... aap sath dete rahenge to wakai kalam se nata banayeN rakhen main hume koi takleef na hogi ... aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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18th March 2005, 03:42 AM
Wah Kunal ji... Kitni gehri baat ki hai, aap ke baate dil ko chhu leti hai, tumhari yeh rachna parhkar dil khush ho gaya, humhari daad kubul karna aur aaise hi likhte rehan...
Gunguni subah maiN yuN tera deedaar karte hai… KhaayaloN maiN bhi hum tumhi se pyar karte hai… |
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18th March 2005, 12:26 PM
Beautiful My sweet little brother
Subah Subah itna pyara nagma dekhney ko mil gaya issey badiya subah kya hogi.........Di ki daad kabul karna..........beautiful imaginations.........Har ek Lafz bahut khuubsurat hay. Gunguni subah maiN yuN tera deedaar karte hai… khaayaloN maiN bhi hum tumhi se pyar karte hai… bikharti jab jab har kiran, us aaftaab ki jameen par… sajda khuda ka kar, sadka tera hi sarkar karte hai… rageeN hai wo galiyaaN, tere husN ke charchoN se… hoga na humsa koi, deewanoN se takraar karte hai… mile yar maikade mai, har sawal ka jawab dhundhte… teri yaadoN mai madhosh, har jam se inkar karte hai.. hontoN pe hansi saza, chupate rahe raaz-e-dil kitne… tujh bin ashq rukte nahi, ye aaj hum ikraar karte hai… ye hawa ruhani kahegi tujhse halat-e-“saccha_pyar”… degi paigaam mera, har pal wo tera intzar karte hai… Waah.One of ur beautiful compositions.......Bahut achii lagi mughey ek baar phir daad kabul karna. Apna khyal rakhna Take Care Di |
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Re: har pal wo tera INTZAAR karte hai… -
18th March 2005, 12:58 PM
maiN kunal aaj hazir huN shayri ke us sectioN maiN jisko sab.. shari-e-ishq naam se jante haiN... bohat pehle kabhi yahaN ek shayri likhi thi ... par dard ke sathiyoN ka sath yuN bhaya.. ki wahaN se kahin jane ka dil hi nahi kiya ... par aaj na jane jo likha socha yahan post kiya jaye .. ek choti si koshish kar raha huN ... umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi ... apne anmol alfaz aap is par lutayeNge umeed hai .... pesh e nazar hai ye nazrana ....
-------------------------------------------------------------- Gunguni subah maiN yuN tera deedaar karte hai… khaayaloN maiN bhi hum tumhi se pyar karte hai… bikharti jab jab har kiran, us aaftaab ki jameen par… sajda khuda ka kar, sadka tera hi sarkar karte hai… rageeN hai wo galiyaaN, tere husN ke charchoN se… hoga na humsa koi, deewanoN se takraar karte hai… mile yar maikade mai, har sawal ka jawab dhundhte… teri yaadoN mai madhosh, har jam se inkar karte hai.. hontoN pe hansi saza, chupate rahe raaz-e-dil kitne… tujh bin ashq rukte nahi, ye aaj hum ikraar karte hai… ye hawa ruhani kahegi tujhse halat-e-“saccha_pyar”… degi paigaam mera, har pal wo tera intzar karte hai… Gunguni subah maiN yuN tera deedaar karte hai… khaayaloN maiN bhi hum tumhi se pyar karte hai… Hmmm....hota hai hota hai!!!!.....subke saath hota hai.... Aaj unke chaman ke har phool muskura rahen hain.... Dekho... gammon pe likhne wale aaj nagma-e -isaq suna rahen hain!!! Waah waah waah waah!!! LOL!!! Kuch nagme gaa kar chale gaye kuch aahe bhar kar laut gaye, Wo bhi ek pal ka kissa the mein bhi ek pal ka kissa hoon, Kal tumse juda ho jaaonga jo aaj tumhara hisa hoon[/color] |
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18th March 2005, 02:10 PM
Chote Bhai..
kamaal ka likha hai...bahut hee khuubsurat laga...khaskar yeh lines tau bus dil chura le gayin Gunguni subah maiN yuN tera deedaar karte hai… khaayaloN maiN bhi hum tumhi se pyar karte hai… bikharti jab jab har kiran, us aaftaab ki jameen par… sajda khuda ka kar, sadka tera hi sarkar karte hai… rageeN hai wo galiyaaN, tere husN ke charchoN se… hoga na humsa koi, deewanoN se takraar karte hai… khayalon mein bhi hum tumhi se pyaar karte hain...beshaq...dil fareyb...! paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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18th March 2005, 07:39 PM
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shayad apni kehni aati hai bas tumhe .. meri bhi to mani hoti jara  yaar phir se ji laga hi diya na ... umeed karta huN aage aisa nahi hoga ... khair ishq sectioN humare noor se roshan hua ho na hua ho ... tumhare aane se meri ye post jaroor roshan ho gayi hai ...bohat bohat shukriya mere ... khak alfazoN ko yuN apne dil maiN jagah dene ke liye ... aap ka sath yuN hi milta rahega ... umeed hai apna khayal bohat acche se rakhiyega .. aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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18th March 2005, 07:41 PM
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khushi aankhOn se baras jaye to kya... lafz aapki sunhari kalam se nikal jaye to kya aapka beta aapki khushi maiN khush hai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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18th March 2005, 07:44 PM
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aapne mere kalaam ko padha aur saraha .. aur khushi hai ki aapne mere jazbaton ko dil se pehchana ... aapki daad sir aankhoN par ,,, kalam ka safar yuN hi chalta raheg ... umeed hai aapka sath bhi yuN hi bana rahega ... aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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18th March 2005, 07:46 PM
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subah subah aapki shuruwat acchi hui ... khushnaseebi hai mere kalaam ki ki aapne ye alfaz rakh diye iske liye ... bohat shukriya... aapki daad sir aaNkhoN pe .. aap bhi apna khayal rakhna aapka bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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humne ishq-o-ranj ka hal phool aagan maiN sajaya... kyuN us harjai ko sab jagah dard hi dard nazar aaya... aapke liye bhi daad dher sari ... gol !!! kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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18th March 2005, 07:51 PM
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kamaal ka nahi hai ye ..,,, mera hai   bohat shukriya aapko accha laga ... huH ! kam se kam aapka aana to hua .... aap aayi aapka behad shukriya ...aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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18th March 2005, 08:12 PM
wow! what a change......yeh section mein bhi tehelka macha diya....
kya starting hain....Gunguni subah maiN yuN tera deedaar karte hai… KhaayaloN maiN bhi hum tumhi se pyar karte hai… aajkal aana kam hota hain na so mera reply late ho jaata hain aur bahot se accche kalam chut bhi jaate hain par kya karu?tumne fantastic likha hain.... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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18th March 2005, 09:14 PM
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18th March 2005, 09:42 PM
Uff kya bat hai..
lagta hai ddd sahi keh rahi hai.. har jagah ishq ki hawa faili hui hai :P Bahot sahi ja rahe ho kunal... Tumhari to har rachna kabile tarif hoti hai par im really sorry ki me har post par reply nahi de pati.. To aaj jo mauka mila..kaise kho deti.. Too good.. keep writing.. jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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19th March 2005, 12:52 PM
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haN ye bat sahi hai ki hawa aaj kal har jagah ishq ki hi hai ... well kunal is always right dear  aur haN humare beech ye sorry vorry kahan se aa gaya ... bas tumhara welcome hai yahaN .. umeed hai tumne bhi kiya hoga ...thanx likhta rahuNga sath dete rehna tum .., tumhara dost kunal... Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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19th March 2005, 09:17 PM
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uff ! sach ye kya likh dala ... main to bas partha hi reh gaya ... har ek sher ek se badh kar ek ... bohat accha laga to wo tha pehla sher ... sach subah subah mehboob ka deedar kya thought hai ... sach ek gana yaad aa gaya ... ghar se nikalte hi kuch door chate hi raste main hai uska ghar kal subah deka to bal banati wo khidki main aayi nazar ... aapka bhai raj bas raj hi raj |
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har ek sher apne mein kutch keh raha hai..... aur ravaani bhi barqaraar hai..... dil se daad kabool karoo..... Tumhara bhai........ **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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20th March 2005, 09:38 PM
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 kitne bhai hai yahaN... well kya likh gaya dikhayi nahi deta kya aur pehla sher mera bhi fav. hai... khushi hui ki aapko bhi pasand aaya mere bhai .. aur wah kya gana yaad dilaya hai .. sach mujhe bohat pasand ahai ye geet .. aapka bhi shukriya .. aapka bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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21st March 2005, 02:57 PM
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aap yahan aye aapka shukriya had se jyada aur dab gaya hun aapki tareef ke neecehe Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Naraaz kyun hote ho....... |
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Sahara yaadon ka hai jeena ka ab to husn-e-^AMAN^….. Hum kahan apne dard se inkaar karte hain….. muafi chaoonga phir se dard shaamil kar diya tumhare kalam pe..... tumhara bada bhai...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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22nd March 2005, 07:53 PM
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aur haN muafi ki jaroorat nahi ... gandi aadat yuN thode hi jayegi .. iske liye bhi kuch muhim chalani padegi ... aur ab ye bada bhai likhna chor do ... hahahah tumhara jijaa Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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oye jije..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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25th March 2005, 08:29 PM
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aap akele hi teen ke barabar ho aur gana to pasand aana hi tha hai hi itna accha ...aapka raj bas raj hi raj |
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29th March 2005, 11:53 AM
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gol =)) shukriya kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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7th December 2009, 01:26 AM
bikharti jab jab har kiran, us aaftaab ki jameen par…
sajda khuda ka kar, sadka tera hi sarkar karte hai… sajda aur sadka . dono ka rbt kamyaab hai lein aaftaab ki zameen par ye thoda nahi khula rageeN hai wo galiyaaN, tere husN ke charchoN se… hoga na humsa koi, deewanoN se takraar karte hai… ahem ahem .......... acha hai deewanoN se takraar karte hai… mile yar maikade mai, har sawal ka jawab dhundhte… teri yaadoN mai madhosh, har jam se inkar karte hai.. hmm aisa hota hai... bhayee .... woh nasha har nachy se jayda gahra hota hai maanta bhi hun jaanta bhi |
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