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teraa dar ho - ek taazaa ghazal -
10th October 2002, 09:53 AM
dosto
Sept 28 ko kahii ek ghazal haazir hai.. mere khyaal se mainey itnii muKhtsar bahr meiN pahley kabhii ghazal nahiiN kahii.. mulaahizaa ho teraa dar ho meraa sar ho noor ho aisaa jo ghar-ghar ho zakhm ho gahraa aur andar ho jhoNkaa hai ya tum baahar ho. phir se chchalko tum saaGhar ho khushboo ho, mere andar ho pighal bhii jao! kyaa paththar ho? geet ho,merey hoNTo par ho dil joDo gar shiishaagar ho. _*_*_*_*_**__*_* mere khyaal meiN aur bhii sher kahey jaa saktey they.. lekin maiNey yahiiN khatam karnaa munaasib samjhaa. aap kii aaraa kaa intezaar rahegaa.. khaas taur pe is liiye taaqiid kar rahaa huuN ki mainey pahlii baar muKhtasir bahr meiN koshish kii hai.. shukria Feroz Feroz ye zindagi hai kya 'feroz' shayari hai kya kuchh haulnaak haadsey asha'ar ho gaye |
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11th October 2002, 09:03 AM
Feroz jee:
vaise to aapki kahi har ghazal dil choo leti hai lekin yeh zara hat ke thii. Itni mukhtsar bahr mein kehne waala andaaz bahut achchaa laga. Yuun lagta hai jaise is andaaz ne ghazal ko ek masoomiyat si de di, jaise kise chote bache ke chehre pe nazar aati hai. Yakeen maaniye, ghazal bahut hi dilnasheen aur pyaari lagi. Khaas kar ke yeh do sher bahut pasand aaye phir se chchalko tum saaGhar ho wah! kitne kam lafzoN mein kitni badi baat keh di pighal bhii jao! kyaa paththar ho? is andaaz-e-shikaayat ke to kya kehne! Khuda kare aapke qalaam paDne ko milta rahe. Rab rakhaa Aapki shayari ki qaayal - Zara Suniye Yakeenan yaha koi sailaab aaya hoga |
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18th October 2002, 06:49 AM
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shukria aap kaa kii aap ne yahaaN aa kar merii ghazal ko paDhney par waqt sarf kiiyaa aur phir hauslaa afzaai bhii kii .. ye ghazal itnii jaldii ban gayii ki maiN khud hairaan huuN. baharhaal aap kaa shukria..aaiNdaa bhiii isii tarah karam famaatii rahiyegaa... Feroz Feroz ye zindagi hai kya 'feroz' shayari hai kya kuchh haulnaak haadsey asha'ar ho gaye |
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