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Shayri-e-ishq -
26th June 2002, 05:59 PM
MILNA LAGI HAI JURMAI WAFAI KI SAZA MUJHE
ANAI LAGA HAI YAAD KOI BEWAFA MUJ KO!!!!! wel tell me hw you like this sher  |
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hi -
27th June 2002, 02:19 AM
MILNA LAGI HAI JURMAI WAFAI KI SAZA MUJHE
ANAI LAGA HAI YAAD KOI BEWAFA MUJ KO!!!!! Its really nice but i think it could be better if you had wrote it this way.... "Milne lagi hai jurm-e-wafa ki saza mujhe, Anee lagi hai yaad kisi bewafa ki mujhe." You write good though keep it up (Y) Majboori ka naam leker, khanjar sine mien uttar diya" "Broken Heart" |
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2nd July 2002, 03:28 PM
tanx for that you can help me correct me shers u no i am not perfect but learning day by day
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you write good |
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you write good -
3rd July 2002, 04:29 AM
you are a good writer i think what it is, is that its hard sometimes to write hindi/urdu in english...........sometimes you mean right but it sounds wrong when you write in english.........
but you do write so well keep it up Majboori ka naam leker, khanjar sine mien uttar diya" "Broken Heart" |
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sukriya -
3rd July 2002, 03:24 PM
wel tanx i think that you are right i do get abit cofused with the words....................
merai anso kai har katra mhabbat ki nishani hai.......... samaj lo to moti hai.................... na samjo to pani hai............................. |
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wow -
4th July 2002, 12:22 AM
wow this was a really good one.
"Mohabbat mein ansuo ko jo pani samjhe woh deewana nahi, Hum to tere ashiq purane hai kya tune hume pechana nahi, Tere ansuo ko pani banne se pehle pe lenge hum Tujhe na pa liya ek din to keh dena yeh sunny tera deewana nahi"  Majboori ka naam leker, khanjar sine mien uttar diya" "Broken Heart" |
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5th July 2002, 05:14 PM
wow
aap dono ke sher humme bohoth pasandh aaye. Sunny ji, waise maine aap ki details phad hi aur aisa laga jaise meri tarha bhi is duniya mein koi hain. aap ne likhe ke aap ke interests hain "Trusting others and getting hurt"...mera bhi. aap ne apni biography mein yeh bhi likhe "broken heart"...mera bhi hain. mohobbat duniya mein amar hain...na koi maar sakta hain aur na hi kabhi marta hain. I wish ke aap ke dil mein mohobbat hamesha rahe kiyun ke aap bohoth khush naseeb hain ke aap ko aisa tajurba hasil hua. Aur pagal kudi ji....aap ki shayri humme bohoth pasandh hain. likthe rehiyega...i wish that jin ke liye aansun aap bahathi hain...woh iski keemat samjh jaaye. Mohobbat ki kadardaan Amrita |
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Sukriya -
7th July 2002, 12:37 PM
Is na cheez ko cheez kehne ka sukerya
Humne to bus woh kiya jo bhi dil kiya... thanks for liking my shairy........... Majboori ka naam leker, khanjar sine mien uttar diya" "Broken Heart" |
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8th July 2002, 04:35 PM
shukriya ap kai comments kai thanks for liking my shayri........................
wel kash woh merai ansoo ko samaj patha.......................... like they say its life |
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