jee is bazm me bahot arse baad lauta hun....ek sher aapki nazar karne jaa raha hun.....ise matlaa bana ke ghazal likh saka to jaroor pesh karunga.....filhaal....
bahot berukhi darbadar dekhte hain
woh meri nazar se shaher dekhte hain
aadaab.
ek sher aur likh lun... azal hote hote
ek umr ho gayi hai... ghazal hote hote
arsaa hua hai aapka deedaar kiye hue
arsaa hua hai kisi se takraar kiye hue
kuch din aur ruk jayenge teri khaatir
arsaa hua hai kisi ka intezaar kiye hue.
aadaab.
ek sher aur likh lun... azal hote hote
ek umr ho gayi hai... ghazal hote hote
shukriyaa..luvsuman jee. -
30th September 2002, 11:13 AM
luvsuman jee bahot bahot shukriya ki aapko hamara kalaam pasand aaya......jee aajkal bazm me haazri hi nahi lagvaa paate waqt hi nahi milta......fir bhi aapko sher pasand aaya aur aap hamare liye duaa kar rahe hain......hame bahot accha laga. shukriya. aapke ehsaanmand rahenge....in sheron ko ghazal bana ke aapke saamne fir se haazir ho jayenge...
enjoy your life. and take care of yourself.
rahUL i
ek sher aur likh lun... azal hote hote
ek umr ho gayi hai... ghazal hote hote