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Thumbs up hi rijaan is back - 19th October 2008, 10:49 PM
Kisi ne likha hai....

Aankh se door na ho dil se utar jaayega,
waqt ka kya hai guzarta hai...guzar jaayega.

bas...yahi soch ke waapas aa gaya hoon. Aap logon ke dil se utarna nahin chaahta. All the love and appreciation I got from o3 mates forced me to come back and re-start my 'Safar-e-Ghazal'.

Watch out for more soon

~Adaab~

dosto mere dost ka ek sher hai jo mai aap ke samne pesha kar raha hu

teri tasveer ko rakh ker apni tasveer k saath
mein nay yeh umr guzari barri tadbeer k saath
mein jis ko apnaata hoon woh bicharr jata hai
meri bannti he nahin katib-e-taqdeer k saath.


Tu Khudaa hai na meraa ishq farishton jaisaa
Donon insaan hain to kyon itane hijaabon main milain


Gham-e-duniyaa bhii Gham-e-yaar main shaamil kar lo
Nashaa barataa hai sharabain jo sharaabon main milain


Aaj ham daar pe khainche gaye jin baaton par
Kiyaa ajab kal wo zamaane ko nisaabon main milain


Ab na wo main hon na tu hai na wo maazii hai `RIJAAN'
Jaise do shaKhs tamannaa ke saraabon main milain

Usko chaha bhi to iqraar karna na aaya,
Kat gayi umr, hamein pyar karna na aaya,
Usney maanga bhi agar kuch to maangi judaai,
Aur ek hum thay ke inkaar karna na aaya!!!!
   
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20th October 2008, 11:19 AM
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Kisi ne likha hai....

Aankh se door na ho dil se utar jaayega,
waqt ka kya hai guzarta hai...guzar jaayega.

bas...yahi soch ke waapas aa gaya hoon. Aap logon ke dil se utarna nahin chaahta. All the love and appreciation I got from o3 mates forced me to come back and re-start my 'Safar-e-Ghazal'.

Watch out for more soon

~Adaab~

dosto mere dost ka ek sher hai jo mai aap ke samne pesha kar raha hu

teri tasveer ko rakh ker apni tasveer k saath
mein nay yeh umr guzari barri tadbeer k saath
mein jis ko apnaata hoon woh bicharr jata hai
meri bannti he nahin katib-e-taqdeer k saath.


Tu Khudaa hai na meraa ishq farishton jaisaa
Donon insaan hain to kyon itane hijaabon main milain


Gham-e-duniyaa bhii Gham-e-yaar main shaamil kar lo
Nashaa barataa hai sharabain jo sharaabon main milain


Aaj ham daar pe khainche gaye jin baaton par
Kiyaa ajab kal wo zamaane ko nisaabon main milain


Ab na wo main hon na tu hai na wo maazii hai `RIJAAN'
Jaise do shaKhs tamannaa ke saraabon main milain
Rijaan mujhe behad afsos ke saath yeh kahana pad raha hai ki yeh gazal aapki nahi hai to aapne eske neeche "NOT MINE" kyun nahi likha aur doosri baat ki yeh gazal "Janab Ahmad Faraz Jii" ki hai aapne unke naam ki jagah apna naam likh diya hai....yeh unki shayri ki toheeN hai.....so pls don't mind, mujhe yeh gazal mashahoor shayar thread mein move karni padegi.

next time pls take care


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.....Sunita Thakur.....

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....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


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Bura Mat Maniyega Meri Baaton Ko** - 21st October 2008, 01:46 PM
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Rijaan mujhe behad afsos ke saath yeh kahana pad raha hai ki yeh gazal aapki nahi hai to aapne eske neeche "NOT MINE" kyun nahi likha aur doosri baat ki yeh gazal "Janab Ahmad Faraz Jii" ki hai aapne unke naam ki jagah apna naam likh diya hai....yeh unki shayri ki toheeN hai.....so pls don't mind, mujhe yeh gazal mashahoor shayar thread mein move karni padegi.

next time pls take care

Mafh Kijiyega Sunita Jee-Aap Iss Thread Ko Mashoor-e-Shayar Par Lakar Theek Nahee Ki Hain**
This Thread Should Be Deleted Because It’s Not The Whole Gazal **
Sochiye-Jinko Theek Tarah Se Nahee Pata Hain Iss Gazal Ke Bade Mein Unko Galatfaimi Hogi, Hogi Na ?
Aur Rahi Baat Puri Gazal Kee To Uss Gazal Jiski Baat Ho Rahi Hain Woh Kayii Baar Submit Ho Chuki Hain **
Waise To Kaafi Pehle Kisi Ne Puchha Tha Ye Gazal Kiski Hain~~~Khair, Chhodiye-Ab Puraani Baaton Mein Kya Rakhha Hain ?

Gazal Kuch Iss Tarah Se Shuru Hoti Hain:

Ab Ke Hum Bichhde To Shaayad Kabhi Khwaabon Mein Mile
Jiss Tarah Suukhhe Huye Phuul Kitaabon Mein Mile



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Angry hi - 28th October 2008, 04:16 PM
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Rijaan mujhe behad afsos ke saath yeh kahana pad raha hai ki yeh gazal aapki nahi hai to aapne eske neeche "NOT MINE" kyun nahi likha aur doosri baat ki yeh gazal "Janab Ahmad Faraz Jii" ki hai aapne unke naam ki jagah apna naam likh diya hai....yeh unki shayri ki toheeN hai.....so pls don't mind, mujhe yeh gazal mashahoor shayar thread mein move karni padegi.

next time pls take care
hi how r u
sunitaji ye gajal meri nahi hai muje pata hai lekin galti meri hai kyo ki har typ karte time mai kuch kuch na mistake kar hi bait tha hai vaise ye gajal muje mere barthday gif me mili hai mai koi itna bada writer nahi hu. jo itni khubsurat gajal likh du & sorry mai not main likh na bhul gaya. but next time i can remembar.............................

Usko chaha bhi to iqraar karna na aaya,
Kat gayi umr, hamein pyar karna na aaya,
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Thank u friend - 28th October 2008, 05:34 PM
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Mafh Kijiyega Sunita Jee-Aap Iss Thread Ko Mashoor-e-Shayar Par Lakar Theek Nahee Ki Hain**
This Thread Should Be Deleted Because It’s Not The Whole Gazal **
Sochiye-Jinko Theek Tarah Se Nahee Pata Hain Iss Gazal Ke Bade Mein Unko Galatfaimi Hogi, Hogi Na ?
Aur Rahi Baat Puri Gazal Kee To Uss Gazal Jiski Baat Ho Rahi Hain Woh Kayii Baar Submit Ho Chuki Hain **
Waise To Kaafi Pehle Kisi Ne Puchha Tha Ye Gazal Kiski Hain~~~Khair, Chhodiye-Ab Puraani Baaton Mein Kya Rakhha Hain ?

Gazal Kuch Iss Tarah Se Shuru Hoti Hain:

Ab Ke Hum Bichhde To Shaayad Kabhi Khwaabon Mein Mile
Jiss Tarah Suukhhe Huye Phuul Kitaabon Mein Mile



*Writer: Ahmed Faraz Jee **
*Singer: Mehdi Hassan Jee **
Dilki Gehraaion Kee Gehraaion Se Shukriya **

hi dost

muje bahot khushi hui aap ne jo bi likha hai lajawab likha aap ne kame aap ka fan hi bana diya... bahot kuch jante ho aap gajlo ke bare me
muje bahot khushi hai jo aap ne itna khubsurat rep dia hai.... vaise sunita ji ne bhi to thik kaha galti hamari hi thi jo ham NOT MINE typ karna bhul gaye... mai ek chota sa shayer hu bus kabi kabi koshis kar leta hu khuch likh ne ki........
muje aap ke andaj bahot pasand aaye hai

dekhte dekhte hatho se nikal jayege
hum bhi suraj ki trah sham ko dhal jayege
itne awaaz ke pather na uchalo yaro
humto ahsas ki garmi se pighal jayege

Usko chaha bhi to iqraar karna na aaya,
Kat gayi umr, hamein pyar karna na aaya,
Usney maanga bhi agar kuch to maangi judaai,
Aur ek hum thay ke inkaar karna na aaya!!!!
   
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