main hi doshi hovanga -
15th February 2009, 06:44 PM
ohna nu shikayat hai meri takni to, jo mainu apna apna kehnde ne! pyar karn da na daa lageya, aje ta oh saccha jhootha parkhde rehnde ne. je roia ta dikhava keh shadna ohna ne, taahi daag eh main hanjua nal v na dhovanga. j sari dunai kehndi a,ta main hi doshi hovanga.
asin mande haan pyar sanu zroor ho gya,
par aisa v ki kasoor ho gya,
payi ishq tere ch judai aisi,
sada rab v sadekolon door ho gya,
zindgi lage na ek pal changi jeen nu,
maut raani nu appne te gaaroor ho giya.........
kita ishq tere ne DEEP nu ina pagal kita '
k lokan vich mashoor ho gya
deep veer yaar tusi bahut hi jiyada wadiya likh de ho
Sat sri akal D33P ji,
Mainu tuhadi shayri bohat hi vadia lagdi hai. Mainu zaada punjabi ohndi ta nahi, par tuhadi shayri samaj aa jaandi hai. Tuhanu rab ek lambi umar deve, ke saare tuhadi shayri parde rehn...
Best of luck for your future...
ohna nu shikayat hai meri takni to, jo mainu apna apna kehnde ne! pyar karn da na daa lageya, aje ta oh saccha jhootha parkhde rehnde ne. je roia ta dikhava keh shadna ohna ne, taahi daag eh main hanjua nal v na dhovanga. j sari dunai kehndi a,ta main hi doshi hovanga.