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shayri is my life
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zikr tera zikre bahaar ho jaise...(Gazal) -
13th December 2014, 05:55 AM
Sabhi dosto.n ko Raj ka bhut sara pyaar...dosto apni ek nayii koshish or umeed ke saath hazir hoo.n aapke saath ka intezaar rahega...
Zikr tera zikre bahaar ho jaise,
Beqraari mei.n qraar ho jaise..
Sunta nahi.n hai meri ik bhii,
Dil pe tera ikhtyaar ho jaise..
Tune nahaa ke gaisuu kyaa jhatke,
Saari fiza par nikhaar ho jaise..
Har shaii tujhe dekhne ko tarse,
Har koii tera bimaar ho jaise..
Roshan hai yu.n tujhse dunia meri,
Maaho aaftaab bekaar ho jaise..
Chahat bhii tu ulfat bhii tu,
Naam tera hii pyaar ho jaise..
Tere bin kush bhii nazar nahi aataa,
'Veer' par tera khumaar ho jaise..
Aapki raye ka muntzir....Raj..
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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13th December 2014, 03:14 PM
Bahot ache Rajveerji, bahot mazaa aaya pad kar, yuhi likhte rahiye
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13th December 2014, 03:36 PM
Rajveeer ji, kya khoob likha hai.
Bohot badhiya, har ek sheyr pe alag alag daad.
Yunhi mehfil ko rounaq bakhshte rahiye.
aapka khair khwah
Sagar Aashna
Sagar Aashna
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Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar
Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota
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shayri is my life
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14th December 2014, 06:43 AM
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Bahot ache Rajveerji, bahot mazaa aaya pad kar, yuhi likhte rahiye
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Shukria hardeep ji jo aapne apna keemti waqt nikala...sàath dete rahiyega..Raj...
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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14th December 2014, 10:22 AM
une nahaa ke gaisuu kyaa jhatke,
Saari fiza par nikhaar ho jaise.
amaaa waahhhhh............ kya sher kah diyaa raj paaji...
mmazaa aa gayaaa kya roomaani kalaam likha hai aapne... bas daad hi daad pesh hai... likhte rahiye
Shaad....
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shayri is my life
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17th December 2014, 06:30 AM
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Originally Posted by Sagar Aashna
Rajveeer ji, kya khoob likha hai.
Bohot badhiya, har ek sheyr pe alag alag daad.
Yunhi mehfil ko rounaq bakhshte rahiye.
aapka khair khwah
Sagar Aashna
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Sagar bhai mai.n aapka dil se shukarguzaar hoo.n jo aapne apni raye se nawaaza...yu.n hii saath dete rahiyega..Raj..
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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17th December 2014, 08:44 AM
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Originally Posted by rajveeer
Sabhi dosto.n ko Raj ka bhut sara pyaar...dosto apni ek nayii koshish or umeed ke saath hazir hoo.n aapke saath ka intezaar rahega...
Zikr tera zikre bahaar ho jaise,
Beqraari mei.n qraar ho jaise..
Sunta nahi.n hai meri ik bhii,
Dil pe tera ikhtyaar ho jaise..
Tune nahaa ke gaisuu kyaa jhatke,
Saari fiza par nikhaar ho jaise..
Har shaii tujhe dekhne ko tarse,
Har koii tera bimaar ho jaise..
Roshan hai yu.n tujhse dunia meri,
Maaho aaftaab bekaar ho jaise..
Chahat bhii tu ulfat bhii tu,
Naam tera hii pyaar ho jaise..
Tere bin kush bhii nazar nahi aataa,
'Veer' par tera khumaar ho jaise..
Aapki raye ka muntzir....Raj..
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Good one Rajveer, well written
Chahat bhii tu ulfat bhii tu,
Naam tera hii pyaar ho jaise..
Nice
ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं
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20th December 2014, 03:25 AM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
une nahaa ke gaisuu kyaa jhatke,
Saari fiza par nikhaar ho jaise.
amaaa waahhhhh............ kya sher kah diyaa raj paaji...
mmazaa aa gayaaa kya roomaani kalaam likha hai aapne... bas daad hi daad pesh hai... likhte rahiye
Shaad....
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Sameer bhai aapki daad paa kar mere ashaar gazal bann gye...bhut bhut shukria bhai...aate rehna...Raj...
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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20th December 2014, 04:53 PM
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Originally Posted by rajveeer
Sabhi dosto.n ko Raj ka bhut sara pyaar...dosto apni ek nayii koshish or umeed ke saath hazir hoo.n aapke saath ka intezaar rahega...
Zikr tera zikre bahaar ho jaise,
Beqraari mei.n qraar ho jaise..
Sunta nahi.n hai meri ik bhii,
Dil pe tera ikhtyaar ho jaise..
Tune nahaa ke gaisuu kyaa jhatke,
Saari fiza par nikhaar ho jaise..
Har shaii tujhe dekhne ko tarse,
Har koii tera bimaar ho jaise..
Roshan hai yu.n tujhse dunia meri,
Maaho aaftaab bekaar ho jaise..
Chahat bhii tu ulfat bhii tu,
Naam tera hii pyaar ho jaise..
Tere bin kush bhii nazar nahi aataa,
'Veer' par tera khumaar ho jaise..
Aapki raye ka muntzir....Raj..
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Bahut khoobsurat gazal raaj ji...dil se daad kubool kijiye..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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26th December 2014, 05:53 AM
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Good one Rajveer, well written
Chahat bhii tu ulfat bhii tu,
Naam tera hii pyaar ho jaise..
Nice
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Behad shukarguzaar hoo.n mayoos bhai...saath dete rahiyega...Raj..
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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26th December 2014, 09:23 PM
Rajveer ji aapki ghazal mein bahut kashish aur rumaniyat mili mujhe , per ke dil gardem garden ho gaya ji
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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26th December 2014, 09:51 PM
Rajveer ji
Bohot khoob gazal kahi........behad umda....maza aa gaya padh kar.....waaaaaaaah.
Daad kubul kijiyega
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30th December 2014, 04:12 PM
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Rajveer ji aapki ghazal mein bahut kashish aur rumaniyat mili mujhe , per ke dil gardem garden ho gaya ji
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Sanjay ji namaskaar....aapki hazri or tareef ke liye shukar guzaar hoo.n...saath dete rahiyega..Raj..
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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2nd January 2015, 01:49 PM
Khoobsurat gazal par dil se daad hazir hai.
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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