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Love shama aur parwane ki dastaan..... - 31st January 2008, 12:01 AM

doston......mai yaha shama aur parwane ki guftgu pesh kar rahi hoo....us guftgu me ek duje ke liye beinteha mohabbat chupi hui hai....zara gaur farmaiye....aur agar pasand aaye to reply zaroor kijiyega......


Parwana:-
Aye Shama Tuje Itana Kis Baat Ka Gurur Hai...
Na Jaane Kitane Paravane..Tuj Tak Aate Aate Jal Gaye....


Shama:-
Aye Parawane..apne Ek Din Ki Jalan Pe Naaz Na Kar....
Saari Umra Jalna Mere Nasib Me Likha Hai.....


Parwana:-
Teri Is Jalan Ko Dekh, Mai Roz Teri Taraf Chala Aata Hu....
Har Roz Tuj Se Teri Hi Jalan Ko Me Chura Ke Le Jaata Hu...


Shama:-
Me Jalati hu Muje Is Baat Ki Parvah Nahi Paravene....
Jalan To Is Baat Ki Hai Muje...Mere Sang Tu Bhi Jal Raha Hai.....


Parwana:-
Aye Khuda...Kar Muj Pe Tu Itna Sa Rahem...
Ke Shama pe koi aanch na aaye...Aur uske badle me mai Jalta Rahu Umra Bhar....


Shama:-
Ye Karati Hu Mai Duaa Ke Teri Duaa Kabool Na Ho.....
Ke apni Hi Aag Me Mar Jaau..tuje Jalta Dekhane Se Pahale.....



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31st January 2008, 02:22 AM

wow lamha,

bahut khoobsoorti se aapne shama aur parwane ki guftagoo pesh ki hai,

thanks for sharing it.
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khwaabo.n ke par kabhii kaTne na denaa
inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii

lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii

ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii


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wow lamha,

bahut khoobsoorti se aapne shama aur parwane ki guftagoo pesh ki hai,

thanks for sharing it.
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thank u soooooo much ki aap ko ye guftgoo pasand aayi.....shama aur parwane ki mohabbat bahut khubsoorat hoti hai....unki mohabbat hum sab ke liye ek sabak hai,agar hum sikhna chahe to......
aap uhi aate rahiyega aur saath dete rahiyega......


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doston......mai yaha shama aur parwane ki guftgu pesh kar rahi hoo....us guftgu me ek duje ke liye beinteha mohabbat chupi hui hai....zara gaur farmaiye....aur agar pasand aaye to reply zaroor kijiyega......


Parwana:-
Aye Shama Tuje Itana Kis Baat Ka Gurur Hai...
Na Jaane Kitane Paravane..Tuj Tak Aate Aate Jal Gaye....


Shama:-
Aye Parawane..apne Ek Din Ki Jalan Pe Naaz Na Kar....
Saari Umra Jalna Mere Nasib Me Likha Hai.....


Parwana:-
Teri Is Jalan Ko Dekh, Mai Roz Teri Taraf Chala Aata Hu....
Har Roz Tuj Se Teri Hi Jalan Ko Me Chura Ke Le Jaata Hu...


Shama:-
Me Jalati hu Muje Is Baat Ki Parvah Nahi Paravene....
Jalan To Is Baat Ki Hai Muje...Mere Sang Tu Bhi Jal Raha Hai.....


Parwana:-
Aye Khuda...Kar Muj Pe Tu Itna Sa Rahem...
Ke Shama pe koi aanch na aaye...Aur uske badle me mai Jalta Rahu Umra Bhar....


Shama:-
Ye Karati Hu Mai Duaa Ke Teri Duaa Kabool Na Ho.....
Ke apni Hi Aag Me Mar Jaau..tuje Jalta Dekhane Se Pahale.....

bahut khoob lamha
yunhee likhati raho dost
manu
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1st February 2008, 04:51 PM

kya yeh aappne likha hain?nahin na.....to fir author ka naam mention karna chahiye tha........agar older members aise karenge to naye members kya sikhenge.....

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kya yeh aappne likha hain?nahin na.....to fir author ka naam mention karna chahiye tha........agar older members aise karenge to naye members kya sikhenge.....

i think yaha sab older members rules se wakeef hi hai..to acha hoga ki koi member kisi ko salaah na de...aur ye mohtarma pata nahi kyo mere piche hi pad gayi hai....


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thanx a lot MANU.......tum uhi aate rehna aur saath dete rehna............


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i think yaha sab older members rules se wakeef hi hai..to acha hoga ki koi member kisi ko salaah na de...aur ye mohtarma pata nahi kyo mere piche hi pad gayi hai....
lekin aapto rules se wakif nahin hain...shared post ko apane naam se post kkiya hain...yeh lijeye ek aur link.........ab na kehna 2 saal pehle aapke aur dharm jee ke khayal itene kyun milte hain

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lekin aapto rules se wakif nahin hain...shared post ko apane naam se post kkiya hain...yeh lijeye ek aur link.........ab na kehna 2 saal pehle aapke aur dharm jee ke khayal itene kyun milte hain

http://************.com/index.php?showtopic=934


i think i dont even know these sites....and if u really think that i m lying , i cant do any thing about that...
this is an insult...and i dont deserve this....so i m leaving this site....i'll never come back...i think u r happy now...good bye....


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lekin aapto rules se wakif nahin hain...shared post ko apane naam se post kkiya hain...yeh lijeye ek aur link.........ab na kehna 2 saal pehle aapke aur dharm jee ke khayal itene kyun milte hain

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are dear kya baat karte ho app kisi ne sach hi kaha hai ki koi acha karta hai to kisi na kisi ko to bura lagta hai per apko inta bura kyu lag raha hai kya apki lamha se koi dushmani hai jo app unke piche pad gayi hai mana ki kisi se galati hoti hai per app kon hote hai us galati ko dohrane wale. agar apko acha nahi lagta hai to mar padhhiye kuch bhi magar aise kisi ki insert to mat kijiye


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are dear kya baat karte ho app kisi ne sach hi kaha hai ki koi acha karta hai to kisi na kisi ko to bura lagta hai per apko inta bura kyu lag raha hai kya apki lamha se koi dushmani hai jo app unke piche pad gayi hai mana ki kisi se galati hoti hai per app kon hote hai us galati ko dohrane wale. agar apko acha nahi lagta hai to mar padhhiye kuch bhi magar aise kisi ki insert to mat kijiye


ha dinesh ne sach kaha hai agar aapko achha nahi lagta hai to aap mat padhiye par kisi ka itna insult nahi karna chahiye aap ye socho ki agar lamha ki jagah aap hote aur kisi ne aapko itna kuch kaha hota to aapko kaisa lagta to please aage se aisa mat karna ok bye


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are dear kya baat karte ho app kisi ne sach hi kaha hai ki koi acha karta hai to kisi na kisi ko to bura lagta hai per apko inta bura kyu lag raha hai kya apki lamha se koi dushmani hai jo app unke piche pad gayi hai mana ki kisi se galati hoti hai per app kon hote hai us galati ko dohrane wale. agar apko acha nahi lagta hai to mar padhhiye kuch bhi magar aise kisi ki insert to mat kijiye
maine bhi to wahin kaha galti ki hain to admit kare.....juth kyun bol rahe hain woh bhi chilla chillake ke usnein hi likha hain.......insult maine nahin kiya unki rudeness ne kiya hain.....
   
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Sad hey lamha accept ur fault - 2nd February 2008, 12:22 PM

Plz don't deteriorates the environment of this site, i m going to intimate the administrator about the problem

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doston......mai yaha shama aur parwane ki guftgu pesh kar rahi hoo....us guftgu me ek duje ke liye beinteha mohabbat chupi hui hai....zara gaur farmaiye....aur agar pasand aaye to reply zaroor kijiyega......


Parwana:-
Aye Shama Tuje Itana Kis Baat Ka Gurur Hai...
Na Jaane Kitane Paravane..Tuj Tak Aate Aate Jal Gaye....

Shama:-
Aye Parawane..apne Ek Din Ki Jalan Pe Naaz Na Kar....
Saari Umra Jalna Mere Nasib Me Likha Hai.....

Parwana:-
Teri Is Jalan Ko Dekh, Mai Roz Teri Taraf Chala Aata Hu....
Har Roz Tuj Se Teri Hi Jalan Ko Me Chura Ke Le Jaata Hu...

Shama:-
Me Jalati hu Muje Is Baat Ki Parvah Nahi Paravene....
Jalan To Is Baat Ki Hai Muje...Mere Sang Tu Bhi Jal Raha Hai.....

Parwana:-
Aye Khuda...Kar Muj Pe Tu Itna Sa Rahem...
Ke Shama pe koi aanch na aaye...Aur uske badle me mai Jalta Rahu Umra Bhar....

Shama:-
Ye Karati Hu Mai Duaa Ke Teri Duaa Kabool Na Ho.....
Ke apni Hi Aag Me Mar Jaau..tuje Jalta Dekhane Se Pahale.....

aapne dil ke aarmano ko aapne kya alfaz aur naya mod de ke sawara hain
log kehte regjayenge wah wah
par aapne to aapne dard ko hi pukara hain


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