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11th June 2004, 04:51 PM
kal sham ki barish kamre mein aadrata ka anaa teri upasthiti ka ehsaas dilana ki tum aa gayi ho gaalo ki chhuvan numi rupi faily tumhari sugandh khich le gayi mujhe tumhare paas paya phir khud ko tumhari julfo tale swarg ki anubhuti pariyo ka shahar tha hakikat ke karib khila laal gulaab tha chhoti chhoti bunde hoTho per bikhari thi aankhe thi kuchh band-band hava thi kuchh mand-mand madakta mein huye etane madhosh na raha phir mujhe koi hosh.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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14th June 2004, 05:43 PM
Akant ji,
swarg ki anubhuti pariyo ka shahar tha hakikat ke karib khila laal gulaab tha you have written very nice...this line is so beautiful..when you feel such condition you will see the above line in real manner... ANKIT That tale of sadest thought.... |
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15th June 2004, 05:00 PM
ANKIT Ji
Thanks for liking my words.. barish ho rahi thi aur man kuchh ud raha tha to unhe shabdo mein dhalane ke liye ek pryaas kiya tha..aapko achchha laga..its my pleasure.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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16th June 2004, 03:28 PM
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wah wah maza aa gaya. dubte jao un madhosh vatavaran main.unkhayalato main dubne ka maza aur hi hai. |
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17th June 2004, 01:31 PM
Meeta ji
laakh laakh shukriyah ji.. dubane aur madhosh hone ke liye taiyaar baithe hain.. jaise hi mauka mila kud padenge..bina koi pal gavaye..LOL vaise aapko achchha laga, laga ki likhana mera kuchh sarthak raha.. mushkurati rahiye.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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20th June 2004, 10:51 AM
Akant ji..
aapki khaasiyat hai ki aap kisi ek waakiye ko lafzon me itni khubsoorti se pirote ho ki manzar maane aankhon ke saamne guzar raha ho.. I'm sure ki kaii dost ye baat aapse keh chuke hain, magar kya karein, haqeekat hai ye.. Is baar bhi dekhiye, kya ghazab ka manzar banaaya hai aapne.. saadgi aur dilkashi me dooba hua.. bohat khoob! |
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12th July 2004, 12:28 PM
Afshan ji,
kaisi hain aap? der se reply likh raha hoon .. eska khed prakat kerta hoon. main apane home town mein tha esliye der se reply likh raha hoon. chhote vakyaat ko shabdo mein dhalane ki koshis aapko achchhi lagi.. behad shukriyah aapko.. aapki reply padhker mujhe bahut khushi mili..aap khush rahiye aur khushiyo ki bahare lutati rahiye.. shubhkamnao sahit, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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12th July 2004, 01:17 PM
Namaskar Akant Ji
Aapki kavita bahut sundar hay.Baarish par apney bahut achha likha hay.I even had posted one kavita on baarish Just check out Dhoondli Dhondli si yadein.Hope so u will like it.Apkey rachna bahut achee hay. Take Care Muskurate rahiye |
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12th July 2004, 04:24 PM
hmm.. aur aap apne hometown me KYU the, ye bhi pata chal gaya ab to..
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13th July 2004, 05:49 PM
Sukanya ji
dher saara dhanyvaad aapko...well mere likhe shabd aapko achchhe lage bahut khushi mili mujhe..maine aapki rachana padhi..aapne bahut achchha likha hai. jaha rahiye vahi khush rahiye... shubhkamnao sahit, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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13th July 2004, 05:53 PM
Afshan ji,
aapko pata chala gaya ki main home town mein kyu tha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ha to aapko anant dhanyvaad... sachchi bahut khushi mili hai mujhe... Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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14th July 2004, 02:57 PM
 Sirf dhanyvaad se kaam nahi chalega!! Party deni hogi.. bhaabi ke haath ka bana hua khaana khilaana paRega!.. Saath baith kar shaadi ki album dikhaani paRegi!.. aur dostoN ki saari mazaak masti bardasht karni hogi!!..  ..Kaho.. manzoor?? |
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14th July 2004, 03:51 PM
Afshan ji,
sab manjoor hai... aapki saari shirte manjoor hai... kripaya kuchh aur shirte likhe... phir baaki cheejo ka prabandh suru kerunga... well fatafat likh ke bhejiye...nahi to ....der ho jayegi... Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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Doobe rehiye.. -
14th July 2004, 03:52 PM
Akant saahab...yooN to Meena ji ne ye khabar Manoj saahab ki post par hi de di thi...phir bhi aapki ye post parhi to socha ke yahi sahi jagaah hai aapko mubarak baad dene ki.....Shadi ki haardik shubh kaamnaaeiN...aap donoN ko meri or hamaare is pariwaar ki taraf se...
Or saahab ye jo likh baithe heiN na aap.....ab kya kabooN....kuchh gehra hi likh baithe haiN...so...dube rahiye....uooNhi.. Enjoy... Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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14th July 2004, 05:47 PM
Are wah! Baat maan li??
Ek minute!.. Zara Meena ko bhi bula laayein.. warna wo kahegi ki itna achha mauka aaya aur humne bataaya nahi..  Aap rukiye.. hum dono abhi haazir hote hain.. list ke saath.. |
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14th July 2004, 06:20 PM
sab manjoor hai...
aapki saari shirte manjoor hai... kripaya kuchh aur shirte likhe... phir baaki cheejo ka prabandh suru kerunga... well fatafat likh ke bhejiye...nahi to ....der ho jayegi... Akant... akant, yah kya baat hui......... khair..... list to ban hi raha hai par jaroory nahi k abhi sab maange bata di jaaye.... hum dost to aise hai..... khanae ki baat par sharmaate nahi... or agar sab maange yahi bata di or tumne intzaam kar liya ooska kya maja? hum to jab ji chaha farmaaish bata denge..... oosi wakt jab milna hoga...... banno.... thhik kaha na? meena |
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15th July 2004, 01:12 PM
Yes! Bilul theek kaha meena.. Humaari FILHAL ki maang ye hai ki hum dost jab bhi koi maang karein aapko puuri karni paRegi..
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15th July 2004, 03:53 PM
Afshan ji
lo main kab se entjaar ker raha hoon ki ab aayi list.. lekin yah kya abhi tak list ka pata nahi....thodi der aur ruk lete hain....chaliye aap ke kahane per... Meena ji.. yah to bataiye ki list kaha hai?... aur kripa kerke kuchh firmaisho ko bata dein.. unhe by air bhej du.. jaise hi mile next firmaish bata dene ki kripa keriyega...lol Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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15th July 2004, 03:56 PM
Afshan ji,
To aapki mange usi samay puri honi chahiye jis samay aap firmaish kerengi.... sure main pure 0.00% bisvash ke sath kahta hoon ki puri hogi aapki maange....lol Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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16th July 2004, 05:52 PM
0.00%..hmm.. chalo.. minus figures me to nahi hai..
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18th July 2004, 12:32 PM
Afshan ji,
ha ha ha....ha bhai vahi 0.000000000000000% Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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20th July 2004, 08:09 PM
Dear Akant...
Aapke ke iss kavita ko abhi pada aur ji ne chaha ki aap se kahein ki younhi likhte rahiyega...saath saath aapko shaadi ke naye path par kadam rakhne ki badhaaiyan dete hein... aapka vivahit jeevan soukhmai rahe...douaein dete hein... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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21st July 2004, 03:21 PM
Manush ji,
bahut bahut dhanyvaad...aapko kavita aapko achchhi lagi.. yah hamari khushi hai... aur haa pryas kerunga aage bhi likhane ka.. punah dhanyvaad aapko..ha dost shadi ke naye path per kadam humne rakh diye hain.. aur apani her koshis kerenge ki apana aur apani patni ka bherpur kheyaal rakh sake.. sath sath apane mata-pita ,bhai bahan..etc sabka.. aur koshis kerunga ki apane path per bana rahu.. shubhkamnao sahit, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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21st July 2004, 06:48 PM
Akant ji,
Bahut hi meethi si kavita likhi hai aapne.. Kalpna karte hi honthon pe ek ajab se muskaan aa gayi.. Aise hi mehfil sajaate rahiye.. Khush rahiye.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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22nd July 2004, 01:42 AM
good job sir.. and congrats....
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22nd July 2004, 12:28 PM
Priya ji,
behad shukriyah aapko... well kavita ne aapko muskurahat de.. i am feeling good... ha ummid kerta hoon ki aage bhi likhata rahunga.. aur aap sabko najar kerta rahunga... khush rahiye... Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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22nd July 2004, 04:02 PM
Punnu ji,
Thanks for appreciating my words.. Its my plesure that you have liked my creation... with best wishes.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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27th July 2004, 12:37 PM
Congratulation Akant ji,
shadi ki hardik badhaye... jeevan mein her jagah aap log khush rahe yahi dua hai... ANKIT That tale of sadest thought.... |
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hello akant ji
apki kavita waqai bahoot khoobsoorat hai,,aur sach ye laga ki apko really dil se kisi ka intezar hai,,jo apke angfan me aa hi gayi.... apko apni shadi ki bahut bahut badhaiyan,,,apke liye mera yahi shubhkamna hai,,,, "jeevan ke is madhur bandhan me paao tum her khushi ki raah koi bhi kanta mile na path me barhtey jao pragati ki raah swapan kero saakar sabhi ke bhula ke her ranz aur aah madhur ho jeevan sada tumhara poorn kero tum sab ki chhah" bus inhi shubhkamnao ke sath,,,,aap donooo hamesha khush rahiye,,,, |
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27th July 2004, 04:07 PM
Akant Bhai,
hameha ki tarah bahut hi accha likha hai is baar bhi... Your command over hindi is really good.... I loved this post...... Aise hi likhte rahiye.... Tc.. Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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27th July 2004, 05:54 PM
Ankit ji,
bahut bahut dhanyvaad aapko... punah es page per aane ke liye shukriyah.. maine yah kavita apani jeevan sangini ko hi samarpit kerke likha tha.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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"jeevan ke is madhur bandhan me paao tum her khushi ki raah koi bhi kanta mile na path me barhtey jao pragati ki raah swapan kero saakar sabhi ke bhula ke her ranz aur aah madhur ho jeevan sada tumhara poorn kero tum sab ki chhah" Swati ji, anant dhanyvaad... bahut khubsurat kavita.. aapki yah kavita hum dono ko bahut pasand aayi.. maine ese apani wife ko bhi padh ke sunaya.. dil se abhari hain hum dono aapke... with best wishes, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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29th July 2004, 03:55 PM
Pulkit ji,
Thank you very much... bas meri normal hi hindi hai.. maine hindi ki koi special class nahi kiya. main totaly science student raha/hoon. main chemistry ke field mein kaam kerta hoon aur vo bhi non-hindi area mein...i mean Kolkata mein.. achchha laga aapka reply padhana.. khush rahiye.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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