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Na yun paas aao - 17th June 2015, 08:23 AM
DostoN,

Mehfil Kucha-e-kalam mein sabhi sha.i.raan ki musalsal koshish kaamyaabiyon ki bulandi par hai aur is mehfil ki nayi koshish aap sab ke saamne rakh raha hooN..


na yun paas aao na doori badhaao
na naz.ren churao.n na yun mus.kuraao (Mast)

na sapne dikhao na neenden udaao
Na humko tum apna dewaana banao (Bhushan)

yun chehre se mere ye naz.ren hataao
na hum.ko yun ap.nii ye aa.dat lagaao (Masti)

Muhabbat bhare pal vo fir laut aayeiN
Kabhi maiN jo roothuN mujhe tum manaao (Madhu)

jo muddat se ham se kinaaraa kiye they
wahii kah rahe hain hame na bhulaao (Shaad)

poore chehre ka deedar hai karna!
meri jaaN! rukh se zulfeN hataao (Hasan)

Mujhi se jo roothe aawaz de rahe haiN.
Mere intezar meiN palkeiN bichao (Hamdam)

Ajab hai ye dil bhi dhadakta hi jaye
ya tum paas aao ya fir door jao (Madhu)

Khuda us nazar mein hai kaisi khumari
kahun bhi to kaise na jalwe dikhaao (Mast)


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17th June 2015, 08:38 AM
Subhan allah...sabki koshishein kya khoob rang layi hain....
aur ek khoobsoorat ghazal me tabdeel huyi hain aapki sab ki shayri ke roop me...sabhi ko madhu ki daad aur mubarak baad...ummeed karti hoon..doston ka sath aur hausla yoon hee hasil hota rahega.......


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17th June 2015, 09:34 AM
wahhhh kya umda gazal taiyaar hue hai.........sabhi shayroN ko mubarakbaad

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bahut bahut mubaarak ho aap ko Mast saahab aur tamaam SDC ke members ko is khoobsurat pahal ke liye....... aap sab ke sahyog se hi ye silsilaa kaamyaab huaa hai.... hum ummeed karte hain ke din ba din ye kaamyaabi SDC ke kadam choomtee rahe... aap sab ka saath aur pyaar bana rahe......


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behtreen koshish mast bhai ek behtreen ghazal ban gayee
duaon ke saath

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bahut bahut mubaarak ho aap ko Mast saahab aur tamaam SDC ke members ko is khoobsurat pahal ke liye....... aap sab ke sahyog se hi ye silsilaa kaamyaab huaa hai.... hum ummeed karte hain ke din ba din ye kaamyaabi SDC ke kadam choomtee rahe... aap sab ka saath aur pyaar bana rahe......


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wahhhh kya umda gazal taiyaar hue hai.........sabhi shayroN ko mubarakbaad
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Subhan allah...sabki koshishein kya khoob rang layi hain....
aur ek khoobsoorat ghazal me tabdeel huyi hain aapki sab ki shayri ke roop me...sabhi ko madhu ki daad aur mubarak baad...ummeed karti hoon..doston ka sath aur hausla yoon hee hasil hota rahega.......
Doston Bas aap sabki koshishon ka natijaa hai ki itni behtareen ghazal ho paayi...

Is kaamyabi ka sehra mein apne sabhi dost jinohne is ghazal ko dhaalne aur sawaarne mein mehnat ki unhe detaa hoon...

Aage bhi aise aur is se nayaab ghazalein bazm mein pesh ho isi umeed ke saath

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