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anjaney rishtey -
1st September 2003, 07:29 PM
hello! friends...aaj bhut dino k baad is site per aayi hun...and waiting for some one else...but wo yaah nahi hai...neways bes issi kashm kash men ek sher likh rahi hun...
Anjaney rishtey mein apna wajood dhoondtey hai terey rastoon mein apni rah-gurar dektey hai janeey yeh nadaan-dil is mehfil mein, terey honey ka ehsas dhundtaa hai! |
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2nd September 2003, 03:13 PM
Hey Ram.......you are waiting for some one else.....
mera kya hoga........ Tenu bhul ge ne yaar puraane naveya de gal lag ke ni tenu bhul ge ne yaar puraane naveya de gal lag ke....  |
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Re: anjaney rishtey -
2nd September 2003, 03:29 PM
Anjaney rishtey mein apna wajood dhoondtey hai
terey rastoon mein apni rah-gurar dektey hai janeey yeh nadaan-dil is mehfil mein, terey honey ka ehsas dhundtaa hai! wah.....aap sher ke madhyam se jin zazbaton ko vyaqt karna chahti hai,,,mein samjh sakta hoon,,,,,isiliye tareef karne se khud ko rok nahin saka.....behad acha khayaal hai....dil se nikla hua...likhte rahiye.... -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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2nd September 2003, 03:57 PM
Wah!
Meetu ji.. Chaar lines me har ek dil ka haal keh diya aapne to!.. Is pyaar me to har shay me usi ka aks dikhta hai, jiska basar humare dil me hai.. bohat hi khoobi se ye baat kahi hai aapne.. yunhi likhte raha karein..  |
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2nd September 2003, 04:15 PM
Hi Meetu,
bohot achchi tarha aapne apne jazbaat bataye. padhker bohot achcha laga. keep writing this kind of stuff. Hafeez Paradise is always where love dwells |
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4th September 2003, 04:40 PM
Hello meetu ji
Bahot hi khoob likha hai aapne.jitni bhi tarif ki haye kam hai. "janeey yeh nadaan-dil is mehfil mein, terey honey ka ehsas dhundtaa hai!" kya baat hai.Humeine bhi batane ka kasht jaroor karna ki itne sahi alfaaz aur ehsaas lane ke liye kya karna chayee.Yah kissi ek ki jaroorat hoti hain??Par apni kismat to kuch aisi hai..... "Khuda ne bhi thukra diya humeine Jab manga humne tumhara sath Abe duniya ko kya dosh de hum yahan to khuda bhi tera chahne waala nikala." |
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