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Thoda sa Naughty, Thoda Shaitaan -
3rd July 2014, 07:02 PM
AAj mere chote bhai ka janmdin hai toh usi ke liye kuch likha tha socha aap logo ke saath share karun, mujhe nahi pata yeh iss forum ke liye waajib hai ki nahi, pad kar khud hi faisla kijiye. थोड़ा सा नॉटी, थोड़ा शैतान मेरा भाई शैतानी करके, करता हैरान मेरा भाई चोटी खींच के भागता, है बुद्धुराम मेरा भाई हर वक़्त रुलाता,बोहुत सताता, करता संग्राम मेरा भाई remote छीने, t .V . पे झगडे, लड़ाकू विमान मेरा भाई पापा को बताऊंगा कह-कह कर, करता परेशान मेरा भाई इस सूने से जीवन में, भोली मुस्कान मेरा भाई कभी कभी तो लगता है, कोई वरदान मेरा भाई Apki Dost Masti |
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3rd July 2014, 08:38 PM
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bahot hi acchii aur bhaavnatmat kaavitaaa likhi hai aapne... na jaane kyun aapne sochaa ke ise humorous section me daala jaae... ye to har bhai bahen ki kahaanii hai .. sach mera bachpan yaad dilaa gayee aapki ye kavitaa .. bahot mubaarak ho aapko... shukriyaa Shaad.... |
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4th July 2014, 11:39 AM
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sabse pahle aapke bhaai ko jaNmdin ki haardik shubhkaamnaaye.. eswar usko jivan ki har khushi de. bahut hi sundar ............. ek ek sabd sach kah rahaa ho jaise ... ati uttammmmmmmm zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! ===========================  sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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6th July 2014, 09:52 PM
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Samajh hi nahi aaya kahan dalun, padte waqt mujhe bohut hansi aa rahi thi sab bachpan ki shaitaniyan aankh ke aage ghoom rahi thi iss liye yahan daal diya.  Aap hi suggest karo kahan dalna chahiye tha? |
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6th July 2014, 10:01 PM
chaaliye yoon hi sahii.... jiss cheez se hansii aati hai hamesha wo humorous nahi hotii..
well ye bhi ajeeb sawaal hai ke kahaan post karte .... khair koi baat nahi.. jab aapko aise duvidaa aage nazar aaye ke kahaan kya post karen aur koi forum samajh na aaye to aapki shaayri me aapka hameshaa swaagat rahta hai.... ye mera suggestion hai bas.... baaki u r free to post the thread in any forum you feel comfortable... Shaad... |
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6th July 2014, 10:16 PM
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buhat khoobsoorat nazm saaf aur shaffaaf!! A bouquet of beautiful emotions and memories sorted into poetry...... reminded me of my own Didi.... bayshumaar daad qaboul farmayayn behen!! I think Anjuman e Shayri will to some extent suit this poem .... just my humble view... Ahmad |
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7th July 2014, 02:19 AM
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 Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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7th July 2014, 04:54 PM
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pehle toh takheer se aane ke liye muaafii chahunga... aur aapke bhai ko belated but a very Happy Birthday.... aur yakin maaniye, aapkii iis kavita ne hamaare bhai-behen ke rihtoN kii yaad dila dii, vaise toh meri sabhii behneN (incl. cousin sisters) mujhse chhoti haiN, magar baat toh vahi hai jo aapne bayaan kii.... iis khubsurat ehsaas ko hamaare saath baa.ntne ke liye aapka bahot bahot shukriya Adil kii jaanib se dua.e.n....... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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10th July 2014, 06:53 PM
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10th July 2014, 06:58 PM
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AAge se main dhyan rakhungi, agar koi tarika hai isey move karne ka to bataiyega. Apki Dost Sarika |
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10th July 2014, 07:03 PM
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Bhai behen ka rishta hota hi aisa hai, aksar for granted liya jata hai, lekin jab ek takleef mein ho toh dusre ki aankh apne aap bhar jati hai. Yun toh sharaartein jab koi karta hai to bohut gussa aataa hai magar waqt beet jaane ke baad yahi sharaartein yaad aati hain. Main try karungi yeh post sahi forum mein chala jaaye, sujhaav ke liye shukriya. Apki Behen Sarika |
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10th July 2014, 07:05 PM
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10th July 2014, 07:13 PM
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Behnein choti ho ya badi, yeh bhai humesha apne aap ko bada hi samajhte hain aur tang karna apna haq samajhte hain. Aur isi mein toh bachpan ka mazaa hai, hai na. jab peeche mud kar bachpan ke baare mein sochte hain tab sabse pehle yahi shaitaaniyan aur meethi ladaaiyaan yaad aati hai. Apki dost Sarika |
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15th July 2014, 03:53 PM
Iska jawaab maine to tumhe de hi diyaa tha khair woh mai yaha post nahin karungaa...behad aacha likha hai...
tumhara apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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