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24th December 2014, 09:34 AM
koi do ku saal pehlaaN eh nazm maiN apni maa nu sunaaun layi likhi si par ajj taq oh mauqa nahiiN mileya...tuhaade naal saaNjhi kar reha haaN
loR paye, meri jaan layiN ve rabba meri maa nu lammi umar dayiN ve rabba jeth-haaRh diyaN loo'aaN koloN oh bachauNdi chunni diyan jhallaN maar bukkal ch paauNdi tattiyaaN hawaawaN mere koloN vi na laNghiyaN sadraaN pugaiyaN ohne jo maiN moohoN maNgiyaN karaaN arjoi, mann layiN ve rabba meri maa nu lammi umar dayin ve rabba "labbhe-labbhe" jad mainu keh ke pukaardi jadoN haTh pyaar naal sir toN di vaardi ik saah ch sau-sau seesaaN de ke nihaardi khushiyaaN di seet-lehar dil ch usaar'di maNgdaa maiN hor kuchh naeeN ve rabba meri maa nu lammi umar dayiN ve rabba maNgdi duaavaaN mere layi na oh thakdi dukh mera thoDa vi sahaar naiyoN sakdi mera har dard oho bina kahe jaan'di ik waari mukh takk, auk'DaaN pachaandi ardaas eh qabool kar layin ve rabba meri maa nu lammi umar dayin ve rabba loR paye, meri jaan layiN ve rabba meri maa nu lammi umar dayiN ve rabba meri maa nu lammi umar dayiN ve rabba is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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24th December 2014, 02:17 PM
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Maiksh ji....bahut hi pyari duaa hai maa lye, bahut sahi te sacche likhiya hai tusi maa lye....sacchii maa hi hai jo bina kahe hi dil di gal samaj laindi hai...aiwe hi te nahi kise ne geet likhiyaa ki "maa te rabb da roop hai dooja" har kise de sir te maa da pyar bhariya hath hamesha rhe. rabb raakha  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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27th December 2014, 07:23 AM
Maikash ji wah bhai wah asi vi dua kartde haaN ki tuhadi maa di lambi umar hoi ....Tuhada apni maa de prati jazba bahut changa lagiya ...
Waquey ch maa di jagah koi nahi lai sakda , ( kuch jazba main vi likh rehaN) Main rus janda si tu mere naal kade na russi , Meri neeNd lai tu kai raat na sutti , Tera paar main maa kade pa nahi sakda , Is janam vich tera karz maiN lah nahi sakda. Tuhade is jazbe nu mera salaam Maikash sahib. Sanjay Sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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5th January 2015, 08:57 PM
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maava' ta sabdi thandiyaa chaava hundiyan ne rab tuhadi eh ardaas nu zaroor parvaan kare.. eho jaye ehsaas saareya'n naal saanjhe karde raho Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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17th January 2015, 12:49 AM
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waheguru sab diyaaN maavaaN nu lammi umr bakhshe is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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17th January 2015, 12:51 AM
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bilkul sahi gal hai janaab, maa da rutba rab ro uchaa bohat shukurguzaar haaN ji tuhaada jo tusi is nimaani jehi koshish nu saraaheya is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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17th January 2015, 12:57 AM
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eh nazm mere dil diyaaN tehaaN vich vasi hoyi hai, badi vaar koshish keeti hai ke maa nu sunaa devaan ya likh ke bhej deyaN par hauNslaa nahiiN hunda rab kare tuhaadi zabaan te duaa zaroor qabool hove tuhaada karzaai reha is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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20th February 2015, 10:28 PM
Maikash g Very Nice, bahuuuut vadiya likhiya aa
"Love is life So don't live ur life without love "  |
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