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Angry Har Nazar se Narazagi si Lagti hai !!!! - 4th March 2004, 09:18 AM
Kyun har nazar se narazagi si lagti hai
aaine mein apni muskurhat bhi ajnabi si lagti hai
duur kahin dil tooote to dard yahan hota hai
kyun har insaan apni kismat per rota hai

dil to badha tha mera lekin
shaayd us ko yeh kamra tangh padhta tha
ab to logo se milne mein bhi dar lagta hai
gale se laga le koi to ..woh gunehgar sa lagta hai

yadon ki aandhi mein jab dum mera ghutta hai
apna saya bhi dhundhla sa dikhta hai
khud ko hi dhuundhne mein zamane beet gaye
koi mujh se meri pechaan puche to kuch ajeeb lagta hai !!!!

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Hi - 4th March 2004, 09:54 AM
ShaleeNi...tussi gr8 hongiii...khub alfazon ko shakll dii hai....gr8 work...hame pata hai yu likhne kai liye....kiss dauR aur feelin se guzarna padta hai.....bass bhagwaan se prathnaa hai woh ap ko deR sari khushiyan de....ap ka mitrr..Sanju!

kuch line dil koo chhu gayii hai....

gale se laga le koi to ..woh gunehgar sa lagta hai

koi mujh se meri pechaan puche to kuch ajeeb lagta hai !!!! .......sach kaha!!!!!!!!

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muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame..

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Cool Bahut khoob - 4th March 2004, 12:24 PM
Hi talkingeyes..bahut dard bhari or dil chhu lene wali hai aapki ye rachna ......

YooNto puri rchana pasand aai, par khaas taur par ye sher....


dil to badha tha mera lekin
shaayd us ko yeh kamra tangh padhta tha.....


khud ko hi dhuundhne mein zamane beet gaye
koi mujh se meri pechaan puche to kuch ajeeb lagta hai....

Bahut khoob, Uparwala aapke hunar ko barkator dil ko khushi de....likhte rahiyega.

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Re: Har Nazar se Narazagi si Lagti hai !!!! - 4th March 2004, 01:12 PM
Kyun har nazar se narazagi si lagti hai
aaine mein apni muskurhat bhi ajnabi si lagti hai
duur kahin dil tooote to dard yahan hota hai
kyun har insaan apni kismat per rota hai

dil to badha tha mera lekin
shaayd us ko yeh kamra tangh padhta tha
ab to logo se milne mein bhi dar lagta hai
gale se laga le koi to ..woh gunehgar sa lagta hai

yadon ki aandhi mein jab dum mera ghutta hai
apna saya bhi dhundhla sa dikhta hai
khud ko hi dhuundhne mein zamane beet gaye
koi mujh se meri pechaan puche to kuch ajeeb lagta hai

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aap ne jab bhi likha hai seedhe dil se likha hai,,,aur dil mein bas jate hai aap ke zazbaat....yahan is kalaam mein aapne mno har shaksh ki duvidha ko jubaan de di ho jaise,,,,aap ke kalaam mein har shaksh khud ka aksh dekh sakta hai.....bahoot khubsurati se antarmann ki kashamkash ko kagaz par utara hai aapne...un to sari gazal hi bejod hai ,,maga jis sher ne mujhe andar tak choo liya wo yeh hai....

Kyun har nazar se narazagi si lagti hai
aaine mein apni muskurhat bhi ajnabi si lagti hai

likhte rahiye ....take care
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Re: Har Nazar se Narazagi si Lagti hai !!!! - 4th March 2004, 01:57 PM
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Kyun har nazar se narazagi si lagti hai
aaine mein apni muskurhat bhi ajnabi si lagti hai
duur kahin dil tooote to dard yahan hota hai
kyun har insaan apni kismat per rota hai

dil to badha tha mera lekin
shaayd us ko yeh kamra tangh padhta tha
ab to logo se milne mein bhi dar lagta hai
gale se laga le koi to ..woh gunehgar sa lagta hai

yadon ki aandhi mein jab dum mera ghutta hai
apna saya bhi dhundhla sa dikhta hai
khud ko hi dhuundhne mein zamane beet gaye
koi mujh se meri pechaan puche to kuch ajeeb lagta hai !!!!
meri nanuuuuuuu,
gr8 work.
dil to badha tha mera lekin
shaayd us ko yeh kamra tangh padhta tha


yaado ki aandhi maie na uljo tum,
jo ho, oose maan se maan lo tum
apna astitwa, aaine maie na dhundho tum.
jisko tumhara dil ka kamra tang pada,
ooske liye apna astitwa na banaao tum.

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4th March 2004, 07:50 PM
Kyun har nazar se narazagi si lagti hai
aaine mein apni muskurhat bhi ajnabi si lagti hai

Kya khoob farmaya hai dost aap ne. Bahut khoobsuratii se aap ne apne dil ke zazbatooN ka bayaN kiya hai.

duur kahin dil tooote to dard yahan hota hai
kyun har insaan apni kismat per rota hai

Waah!! Absolutely right. insaan ki fitrat hi yahi hai.


Dear Shaaliini ji,

Mere dost abb aur jyada nahii likhaa jaa raha hai hum se. Puri shayri hi la~jawaabb hai. Har sher apne aap mein ek purii kahaanii hai. Puri shayri aap ki dil ki zazbaat ko achhi tarah se ehsaas dila raha hai. Mere paas pure alphaz nahi hai jis se meiN yah izhaar kar sakooN ki mujhe yah shayrii kitnaa achhaa lagaa. Par hume yakiiN hai ki aap ke paas woh dil zaroor hai jise aap humaarii dil ki zazbaat ko samajh sakeiN.

Take care, Bye

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bahot dardbhari lekin bahot khub - 4th March 2004, 09:47 PM
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6th March 2004, 09:51 AM
yadon ki aandhi mein jab dum mera ghutta hai
apna saya bhi dhundhla sa dikhta hai
khud ko hi dhuundhne mein zamane beet gaye
koi mujh se meri pechaan puche to kuch ajeeb lagta hai !!!!


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