zauq e wisaal e dahashat e furqat nahi rahi.
ab usko mujhse waisee muhabbat nahi rahi.
ab yu bhi mujhko tujhse ummiden nahi bachi
ab yu bhi tujhko mujhse shikaayat nahi rahi.
uski bagal men meri jagah na rahi , mere
kandhe ki uske sar ko zarurat nahi rahi.
dono jahaan jis pe lutaa du khushi-2
ab naaz men tere wo nazaakat nahi rahi.
aik barq si gira de jo rag-2 men dafatan
ab lams men tere wo haraarat nahi rahi.
raste men kho gayi kahi manzil ki aarzoo
chaahat to mil gayi ki haa chaahat nahi rahi.
Waah bhai waah
Kya hi khoob ghazal kahi hai. Ek ek sher bahut hi sundar hai. Taareef ke liye shabd nahi'n hai'n mere paas. Duaa hai ke aise hi likhte raho, sadaa khush raho.
bahot bahot khoob...jitni taareef karun kam hai..daad hi daad... aage bhi aapko padhna chaahunga.. god bless..yeh sher to kamaal ka hai
ab yu bhi mujhko tujhse ummiden nahi bachi
ab yu bhi tujhko mujhse shikaayat nahi rahi.
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gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai?
musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai?
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Rashmi Sharma
path par kaante bahut hain tere
par manjil par jaana too.ne
dar na jatilata se jeewan ki
isko saral banana too.ne
pasat na hone paye honsle
khud ka sahas khud hi juta le
Kya hi khoob ghazal kahi hai. Ek ek sher bahut hi sundar hai. Taareef ke liye shabd nahi'n hai'n mere paas. Duaa hai ke aise hi likhte raho, sadaa khush raho.