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kuch na kare? -
26th April 2006, 07:34 PM
Zakhm dete hain or kehte hain ke Aah na Karen
Hum unki muhobbat me zindgi tabaah na Karen Wo mere saamne rahe or main unhe na dekhun Kabhi aisa din bhi aaye ye khudaa na Karen Bosa na do to phir dil ko kadaa rakhna tum Itne maasoom nahi hum ke iltizaa na Karen Bosa—kiss, kadaa—tight,firm Hum unhe ek baar dekhen,or bas dekhte rahen hum Unko ye zidd ki unki simt hum nigaah na Karen Simt—towards Tumhi ho apne or milte ho gair bann ke tum Zulm humpe Karen lekin iss tarah na karen Haan ye sach hai ke bahut vaadon ko toda humne Hum koi khuda to nahi hain ke khataa na karen Gunaahgaron ki basti me ek ibarat hai dost Sab kuch kare magar Mohobatt ka gunaah na karen Sangdil hain wo magar ye bhi mumkin nahi Shayri BHAVIN ki padhen or waah na Karen |
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26th April 2006, 10:59 PM
Haan ye sach hai ke bahut vaadon ko toda humne
Hum koi khuda to nahi hain ke khataa na karen Gunaahgaron ki basti me ek ibarat hai dost Sab kuch kare magar Mohobatt ka gunaah na karen Waaaaaah.... Janaab, bahut hi khoobsurat aashaar pesh kiye hain aapne... padhkar accha laga... aapne likhe hain to daad kubool kijiyega... nahi likhe hain to bhi share karne ke liye shukriya but yaad rakhiyega ke doosron ki poetry post karne par neeche "Not Mine" likh den... Do keep sharing such gems... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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Re: kuch na kare? -
27th April 2006, 12:37 PM
kya baat hai jannab bahut hi aacha likha hai aapne
yuhi likhte rahiye......... bye and take care passionate....... pyar kare jo hume sone sa khara jiski ankhon me ho pyar hi pyar bhara me uska "veer" wo meri "zarra" -------------------Brizesh_kol_------------------------------------- 
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27th April 2006, 08:49 PM
Sangdil hain wo magar ye bhi mumkin nahi
Shayri BHAVIN ki padhen or waah na Karen....khoob kaha aapne dard ke sagar mein gote kha rahi hai aapki rachna....har sher jaise dard mein dooba hua.......khoob byan kiya aapne..... behtreen rachna par daad kabool kijiyega apna khayal rakhyiega |
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hi -
27th April 2006, 09:11 PM
Hi pulkit ji
how are U ? aap ne hemara kelaam pedha iske liye sukriya aur jo nashihat di vo bhi hum jante hai aap ko kelam pasnd aaye ye sun kar aacha lega fir se ek baar mera kelam padhne ka behot behot sukriya SOME ONE |
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27th April 2006, 09:12 PM
HI passionatelover ji
how are U ? aap ne hemara kelaam pedha iske liye sukriya aur jo nashihat di vo bhi hum jante hai aap ko kelam pasnd aaye ye sun kar aacha lega fir se ek baar mera kelam padhne ka behot behot sukriya SOME ONE |
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27th April 2006, 09:14 PM
Hi Wefa ji
how are U ? aap ne hemara kelaam pedha iske liye sukriya aur jo nashihat di vo bhi hum jante hai aap ko kelam pasnd aaye ye sun kar aacha lega fir se ek baar mera kelam padhne ka behot behot sukriya SOME ONE |
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