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"Bathroom Singer" -
24th September 2009, 08:00 PM
Aadab ke mehfil ko be-adab ka Aadab,
Ik shariir peshkesh aap sabki jaanib.
Gun-guna rahe thay woh, haath meiN unke, na tha koi saaz,
Hum ne kaha subhan allah, ba.Di meethi hai aapkii awaaz.
Sharmakar bole wo cho.diye bhii, aap to yuuN hi kehte haiN,
Bas chaapluusi meiN fazuul hi, merii taarif karte rehte haiN.
Hum to “bathroom singer” haiN bas bathroom meiN gaate haiN,
Hum bole gustaakhi muaf, bulayeN kabhi mehfil jamaate haiN!
Aapka Dost
Shyam
"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.
वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
-आनंद नारायण मुल्ला
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24th September 2009, 10:39 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by naadaan
Aadab ke mehfil ko be-adab ka Aadab,
Ik shariir peshkesh aap sabki jaanib.
Gun-guna rahe thay woh, haath meiN unke, na tha koi saaz,
Hum ne kaha subhan allah, ba.Di meethi hai aapkii awaaz.
Sharmakar bole wo cho.diye bhii, aap to yuuN hi kehte haiN,
Bas chaapluusi meiN fazuul hi, merii taarif karte rehte haiN.
Hum to “bathroom singer” haiN bas bathroom meiN gaate haiN,
Hum bole gustaakhi muaf, bulayeN kabhi mehfil jamaate haiN!
Aapka Dost
Shyam
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Hum to “bathroom singer” haiN bas bathroom meiN gaate haiN,
Hum bole gustaakhi muaf, bulayeN kabhi mehfil jamaate haiN!
apne purane dost..yane ki mujhe........mat bhuliyega is mahfil me invite karna.............
yehi par dosti pata lag jayegi..............ab
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25th September 2009, 03:07 PM
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Originally Posted by naadaan
Aadab ke mehfil ko be-adab ka Aadab,
Ik shariir peshkesh aap sabki jaanib.
Gun-guna rahe thay woh, haath meiN unke, na tha koi saaz,
Hum ne kaha subhan allah, ba.Di meethi hai aapkii awaaz.
Sharmakar bole wo cho.diye bhii, aap to yuuN hi kehte haiN,
Bas chaapluusi meiN fazuul hi, merii taarif karte rehte haiN.
Hum to “bathroom singer” haiN bas bathroom meiN gaate haiN,
Hum bole gustaakhi muaf, bulayeN kabhi mehfil jamaate haiN!
Aapka Dost
Shyam
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Ha Ha ..............
Aray baab re kasam se hasi ke mare ankhoN se pani aagaya.....
Bhaut hi umda aur last line to kamal bemisal hai... Janab...
Aap bhi Naa Shayam sahab....
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28th September 2009, 12:24 PM
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Originally Posted by zidd
Hum to “bathroom singer” haiN bas bathroom meiN gaate haiN,
Hum bole gustaakhi muaf, bulayeN kabhi mehfil jamaate haiN!
apne purane dost..yane ki mujhe........mat bhuliyega is mahfil me invite karna.............
yehi par dosti pata lag jayegi..............ab
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LOL
Manish bhai aap ka istekbal hai mehfil meiN. Magar zara khusuusi aur zaati mehfil hai to bari bari se mehfil jamegii. Ek saath nahi. MiyaaN sharm-o-haya bhi koi chiiz hoti hai.
Aadab
Shyam
"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.
वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
-आनंद नारायण मुल्ला
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6th October 2009, 02:19 PM
Sameer Bhai Salaam,
Abhi tak sirf Manish bhai ki "Zidd" thi aur ab aap ki "Khwahish" is khusuusi mehfil meiN shirkat ki. To janab-e-aali maiN rukhsat ho jaauN to aap dono dakil hoN. Kyunki jaisaa maine pehle kaha ka tho.Di bahot sharm abhi baaki hai
Khush rahiye
Shyam
"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.
वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
-आनंद नारायण मुल्ला
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6th October 2009, 02:37 PM
Jii woh to humme puri baki hai, jaisa aap thik samjhe.. phir pahele mere ustad Zidd sahab bhi hai there for I ll enjoy.... your posts..
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29th December 2009, 01:37 PM
Pehle aap, pehle aap to Lucknow ki riwaayat hai, magar Aurangabad tak pahuNch gaii jaan kar achha laga. Jaisi aap ki marzi Sameer Bhai.
Allah Hafez,
Naadaan
"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.
वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
-आनंद नारायण मुल्ला
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29th December 2009, 03:20 PM
Woh Lucknow ki railway Aurangabad tak pahunchne ki wajah bhi khaas hai....... aadaab aur tehzeeb to hume wahan ke hi virasat se mili hia.......
Jee mujhe lagata hai ab mera number aa gaya........
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29th December 2009, 06:47 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by naadaan
Aadab ke mehfil ko be-adab ka Aadab,
Ik shariir peshkesh aap sabki jaanib.
Gun-guna rahe thay woh, haath meiN unke, na tha koi saaz,
Hum ne kaha subhan allah, ba.Di meethi hai aapkii awaaz.
Sharmakar bole wo cho.diye bhii, aap to yuuN hi kehte haiN,
Bas chaapluusi meiN fazuul hi, merii taarif karte rehte haiN.
Hum to “bathroom singer” haiN bas bathroom meiN gaate haiN,
Hum bole gustaakhi muaf, bulayeN kabhi mehfil jamaate haiN!
Aapka Dost
Shyam
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ha ha ha
wah dost wah mera to aapne mood hi changekar diya office ke kaam main khoya pada tha aapki yeh shayri padhi aur hans pada thanks muje khushi dene ke liye
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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29th December 2009, 07:49 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by naadaan
Aadab ke mehfil ko be-adab ka Aadab,
Ik shariir peshkesh aap sabki jaanib.
Gun-guna rahe thay woh, haath meiN unke, na tha koi saaz,
Hum ne kaha subhan allah, ba.Di meethi hai aapkii awaaz.
Sharmakar bole wo cho.diye bhii, aap to yuuN hi kehte haiN,
Bas chaapluusi meiN fazuul hi, merii taarif karte rehte haiN.
Hum to bathroom singer haiN bas bathroom meiN gaate haiN,
Hum bole gustaakhi muaf, bulayeN kabhi mehfil jamaate haiN!
Aapka Dost
Shyam
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bade miyaN aadaab....
kamaal hi karte haiN aap....pata nahi kaise aapke ye dono threads meri nazar se ab tak bache the.....maza aa gaya.....aur yeh topic bhi bahut khoob pak'da hai aapne.... ....meri haNste haNste ki daad haNs ke qubuul farmaayeN.....
isi section meiN mere bhi 2 threads haiN...shayad aapko pasand aayeN....
apna khayal rakhiyega aur haNste rakhiyega...
aapka,
vikram...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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25th January 2010, 09:31 PM
Hello niceeeeeee ghazal ,,,,,,keep it up....bye take care
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