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YuuN Zindagi Hume Sataatii Chali Gayee
Meri Aawaaz MujhmeN Samaatii Chali Gayee
Koi Lafz Nahi Ab Kahne Ko
NighaaheN Baat Bataati Chali Gayee
HumzubaaN Usse Kaise KaheN Hum
Har Raaz Woh Humse Chhupaati Chali Gayee
Hansnaa Naseeb MeN Ab Nahi Shaayad
Zindagi Zakham Nayaa Dikhaati Chali Gayee
Chehre Pe Chehra Dekh "Radhika"
Har Ek Ko Aazmaati Chali Gayee
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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
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YuuN Zindagi Hume Sataatii Chali Gayee
Meri Aawaaz MujhmeN Samaatii Chali Gayee
Koi Lafz Nahi Ab Kahne Ko
NighaaheN Baat Bataati Chali Gayee
HumzubaaN Usse Kaise KaheN Hum
Har Raaz Woh Humse Chhupaati Chali Gayee
Hansnaa Naseeb MeN Ab Nahi Shaayad
Zindagi Zakham Nayaa Dikhaati Chali Gayee
Chehre Pe Chehra Dekh "Radhika"
Har Ek Ko Aazmaati Chali Gayee
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bahut sundar ... radhika ji
Koi Lafz Nahi Ab Kahne Ko
NighaaheN Baat Bataati Chali Gayee
ye sher dil ke khaas kareeb raha .... khuubsurat ghazal likhi hai ... dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhti rahiye ........ radhe radhe ................
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17th January 2012, 10:46 AM
Kya baat.. Kya baat.. Kya baat..!!
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rep+++ added. Daad Qabool kare mohtarma.
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YuuN Zindagi Hume Sataatii Chali Gayee
Meri Aawaaz MujhmeN Samaatii Chali Gayee
Koi Lafz Nahi Ab Kahne Ko
NighaaheN Baat Bataati Chali Gayee
HumzubaaN Usse Kaise KaheN Hum
Har Raaz Woh Humse Chhupaati Chali Gayee
Hansnaa Naseeb MeN Ab Nahi Shaayad
Zindagi Zakham Nayaa Dikhaati Chali Gayee
Chehre Pe Chehra Dekh "Radhika"
Har Ek Ko Aazmaati Chali Gayee
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Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
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17th January 2012, 02:22 PM
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Hansnaa Naseeb MeN Ab Nahi Shaayad
Zindagi Zakham Nayaa Dikhaati Chali Gayee
bahut khoob .......................... !
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YuuN Zindagi Hume Sataatii Chali Gayee
Meri Aawaaz MujhmeN Samaatii Chali Gayee
Koi Lafz Nahi Ab Kahne Ko
NighaaheN Baat Bataati Chali Gayee
HumzubaaN Usse Kaise KaheN Hum
Har Raaz Woh Humse Chhupaati Chali Gayee
Hansnaa Naseeb MeN Ab Nahi Shaayad
Zindagi Zakham Nayaa Dikhaati Chali Gayee
Chehre Pe Chehra Dekh "Radhika"
Har Ek Ko Aazmaati Chali Gayee
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AchChhe EhsaasaaT Se Nawaazaa Hai Ghazal Ko ... Radhika Ji !
Umdaa Sher Kahne Kii ... AchChhii Koshish ... Aur Peshkash !
Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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18th January 2012, 11:21 AM
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YuuN Zindagi Hume Sataatii Chali Gayee
Meri Aawaaz MujhmeN Samaatii Chali Gayee
Koi Lafz Nahi Ab Kahne Ko
NighaaheN Baat Bataati Chali Gayee
HumzubaaN Usse Kaise KaheN Hum
Har Raaz Woh Humse Chhupaati Chali Gayee
Hansnaa Naseeb MeN Ab Nahi Shaayad
Zindagi Zakham Nayaa Dikhaati Chali Gayee
Chehre Pe Chehra Dekh "Radhika"
Har Ek Ko Aazmaati Chali Gayee
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bahut khoob radhika ji...............
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
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18th January 2012, 02:37 PM
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YuuN Zindagi Hume Sataatii Chali Gayee
Meri Aawaaz MujhmeN Samaatii Chali Gayee
Koi Lafz Nahi Ab Kahne Ko
NighaaheN Baat Bataati Chali Gayee
HumzubaaN Usse Kaise KaheN Hum
Har Raaz Woh Humse Chhupaati Chali Gayee
Hansnaa Naseeb MeN Ab Nahi Shaayad
Zindagi Zakham Nayaa Dikhaati Chali Gayee
Chehre Pe Chehra Dekh "Radhika"
Har Ek Ko Aazmaati Chali Gayee
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Radhika JI......... Boht KHubsurat Ahsasaat Lagay Aap Ke...... KHsuh Rahen...
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
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18th January 2012, 03:06 PM
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YuuN Zindagi Hume Sataatii Chali Gayee
Meri Aawaaz MujhmeN Samaatii Chali Gayee
Koi Lafz Nahi Ab Kahne Ko
NighaaheN Baat Bataati Chali Gayee
HumzubaaN Usse Kaise KaheN Hum
Har Raaz Woh Humse Chhupaati Chali Gayee
Hansnaa Naseeb MeN Ab Nahi Shaayad
Zindagi Zakham Nayaa Dikhaati Chali Gayee
Chehre Pe Chehra Dekh "Radhika"
Har Ek Ko Aazmaati Chali Gayee
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19th January 2012, 02:24 PM
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bahut sundar ... radhika ji
Koi Lafz Nahi Ab Kahne Ko
NighaaheN Baat Bataati Chali Gayee
ye sher dil ke khaas kareeb raha .... khuubsurat ghazal likhi hai ... dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhti rahiye ........ radhe radhe ................
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YuuN Zindagi Hume Sataatii Chali Gayee
Meri Aawaaz MujhmeN Samaatii Chali Gayee
Koi Lafz Nahi Ab Kahne Ko
NighaaheN Baat Bataati Chali Gayee
HumzubaaN Usse Kaise KaheN Hum
Har Raaz Woh Humse Chhupaati Chali Gayee
Hansnaa Naseeb MeN Ab Nahi Shaayad
Zindagi Zakham Nayaa Dikhaati Chali Gayee
Chehre Pe Chehra Dekh "Radhika"
Har Ek Ko Aazmaati Chali Gayee
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Aboslutely Amazing... Indeed Beautifull...!!!! Bahot Khoooob..!!!
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20th January 2012, 01:07 PM
bahot khooob........................................
gul ko zamane mein, gul-e-nayaab kehte hai,
kuchh likhne ke pehle aapko aadaab kehte hai.
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21st January 2012, 09:03 AM
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Kya baat.. Kya baat.. Kya baat..!!
Tarifee kabeel.. ek umdaaH peshkash.. lafz-b-lafz ek dam kasi hui pakntiya.. Thanks for sharing with us.
rep+++ added. Daad Qabool kare mohtarma.
regard,
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ji bhaut bhaut shukriya ..................................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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21st January 2012, 05:00 PM
Koi Lafz Nahi Ab Kahne Ko
NighaaheN Baat Bataati Chali Gayee
kya khoob kahi he radhika ji ..... bahot umda aur tezdar likhti he aap .... aise hi nagme aur sunate rahiye ...
tah-e-dil se humari daad qubool kare .....
sada khush rahiye .....
Narendra ...
Maine har gum khushi me daala he ..
Mera har ek chalan nirala he ..
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23rd January 2012, 07:57 PM
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HumzubaaN Usse Kaise KaheN Hum
Har Raaz Woh Humse Chhupaati Chali Gayee
Hansnaa Naseeb MeN Ab Nahi Shaayad
Zindagi Zakham Nayaa Dikhaati Chali Gayee
bahut khoob .......................... !
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ji thanx a lot ............................
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24th January 2012, 07:32 AM
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AchChhe EhsaasaaT Se Nawaazaa Hai Ghazal Ko ... Radhika Ji !
Umdaa Sher Kahne Kii ... AchChhii Koshish ... Aur Peshkash !
Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!
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ji bhaut bhaut shukriya .................................
Radhika
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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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25th January 2012, 07:11 AM
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bahut khoob radhika ji...............
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ji bahut bahut shukriya .....................................
Radhika
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25th January 2012, 08:38 AM
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YuuN Zindagi Hume Sataatii Chali Gayee
Meri Aawaaz MujhmeN Samaatii Chali Gayee
Koi Lafz Nahi Ab Kahne Ko
NighaaheN Baat Bataati Chali Gayee
HumzubaaN Usse Kaise KaheN Hum
Har Raaz Woh Humse Chhupaati Chali Gayee
Hansnaa Naseeb MeN Ab Nahi Shaayad
Zindagi Zakham Nayaa Dikhaati Chali Gayee
Chehre Pe Chehra Dekh "Radhika"
Har Ek Ko Aazmaati Chali Gayee
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Behad Umdaa radhika ji
Asaan shabdon mein gehri baat kahi aapne, bahut khoob.
aap hi ki tarz par ik aur sher kehnaa chaungaa ki:
kabhi mil jaayenge hum bhi kisi mod par
isi umeed par rishtaa tera Nibhaati Chali Gayee
yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa
-aapka apnaa
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26th January 2012, 07:32 PM
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Radhika JI......... Boht KHubsurat Ahsasaat Lagay Aap Ke...... KHsuh Rahen...
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ji bhaut shukriya ..............................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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28th January 2012, 12:45 PM
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wah.bahut khoob radhika jee............................................... ......
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ji bhaut shukriya ......................................
Radhika
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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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30th January 2012, 08:01 AM
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Aboslutely Amazing... Indeed Beautifull...!!!! Bahot Khoooob..!!!
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ji thanks a lot ............................
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30th January 2012, 10:22 AM
Tasleemaat Radhika Behen!
Buhat buhat achee lagee aapki yay ghazl. Buhat gehree soach wa taqayyul ko nomayaan kerti huee! Daad qaboul karayn!
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31st January 2012, 06:32 PM
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bahot khooob........................................
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ji bhaut shukriya ...........................................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
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Koi Lafz Nahi Ab Kahne Ko
NighaaheN Baat Bataati Chali Gayee
kya khoob kahi he radhika ji ..... bahot umda aur tezdar likhti he aap .... aise hi nagme aur sunate rahiye ...
tah-e-dil se humari daad qubool kare .....
sada khush rahiye .....
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Ji Bhaut Bhaut Shukriya................................
Radhika
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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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YuuN Zindagi Hume Sataatii Chali Gayee
Meri Aawaaz MujhmeN Samaatii Chali Gayee
Koi Lafz Nahi Ab Kahne Ko
NighaaheN Baat Bataati Chali Gayee
HumzubaaN Usse Kaise KaheN Hum
Har Raaz Woh Humse Chhupaati Chali Gayee
Hansnaa Naseeb MeN Ab Nahi Shaayad
Zindagi Zakham Nayaa Dikhaati Chali Gayee
Chehre Pe Chehra Dekh "Radhika"
Har Ek Ko Aazmaati Chali Gayee
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Bahot khoob... Bhaot Muqammal koshish rahi aapki Radhikaa jee.. Aapki kavish ka alag hi ras hai.... Likhte raheN yuNhi... Khush rahiye...
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5th February 2012, 06:51 PM
Ek khoobsurat si khalish apne andar samete hue hai apki ghazal Radhika ji. Bahaut khoob !
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Behad Umdaa radhika ji
Asaan shabdon mein gehri baat kahi aapne, bahut khoob.
aap hi ki tarz par ik aur sher kehnaa chaungaa ki:
kabhi mil jaayenge hum bhi kisi mod par
isi umeed par rishtaa tera Nibhaati Chali Gayee
yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa
-aapka apnaa
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ji bhaut bhaut shukriya ..............................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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9th February 2012, 04:45 PM
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Tasleemaat Radhika Behen!
Buhat buhat achee lagee aapki yay ghazl. Buhat gehree soach wa taqayyul ko nomayaan kerti huee! Daad qaboul karayn!
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Ji Bhaut Bhaut Shukriya...........................
Radhika
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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
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11th February 2012, 01:26 PM
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12th February 2012, 04:21 PM
Bahut khoob, Radhika Ji...!
Teesra sher hamara apna sa lagaa...!
Thanks for sharing
DuaaoN ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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Bahot khoob... Bhaot Muqammal koshish rahi aapki Radhikaa jee.. Aapki kavish ka alag hi ras hai.... Likhte raheN yuNhi... Khush rahiye...
Shaad...
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15th February 2012, 06:22 PM
bahut khoob radhika ji
likhte rahiye
:-ek bujhaa hua dhumil
palak jhapakte hi jo aankh se hu'aa ojhal
woh lauT kar nahiiN aayaa gaye dinoN ki taraH
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Ji Shukriya ...........................................
Radhika
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YuuN Zindagi Hume Sataatii Chali Gayee
Meri Aawaaz MujhmeN Samaatii Chali Gayee
Koi Lafz Nahi Ab Kahne Ko
NighaaheN Baat Bataati Chali Gayee
HumzubaaN Usse Kaise KaheN Hum
Har Raaz Woh Humse Chhupaati Chali Gayee
Hansnaa Naseeb MeN Ab Nahi Shaayad
Zindagi Zakham Nayaa Dikhaati Chali Gayee
Chehre Pe Chehra Dekh "Radhika"
Har Ek Ko Aazmaati Chali Gayee
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radhkaa ji namskaar............
bahut dino baad aapka likhaa padha hai shayed maine ... pata ni kyuN
aapka jo matla ahai bas.. dil choo gaya.... baht der sochtaa raha hai... pata nahi kya sochtaa raha........
YuuN Zindagi Hume Sataatii Chali Gayee
Meri Aawaaz MujhmeN Samaatii Chali Gayee
meri awaaz mujhme samati chali gaye........... kahun ki ye acha likhaa hai to ... bahut kam hai.......... bas ye wo likha ahai jo main nahi likh paayaa ........ mujhe lkhnaa chahiye tha
baaki saari ghazalachi hai. hum zubaan kais ekaheN hum . ye sher bhi acha hai......
nigaah bata batati chalee gayee........ ye bhi acha hai.....
yun hi likhte raheN....
regards
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21st February 2012, 08:48 PM
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Wah radhika ji.sach me aapke labzo ne bahut kuch keh diya. . .
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Ji bhaut shukriya ........................................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com
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12th March 2012, 11:50 AM
Ji Bhaut Bhaut Shukriya......................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com
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13th March 2012, 02:00 AM
Bahot Sunder Likha hai aapne...
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1st September 2012, 05:36 PM
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bahut khoob radhika ji
likhte rahiye
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Ji shukriya .............................................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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4th September 2012, 01:17 PM
Radhika ji, Bahot Acchi Shayri Likhi hai aapne... Vaastavik Dard Darshaati Lines Likhi hain... yuhi likhti rahiye aur Khush Rahiye...
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8th September 2012, 06:08 AM
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Originally Posted by Radhika_2
YuuN Zindagi Hume Sataatii Chali Gayee
Meri Aawaaz MujhmeN Samaatii Chali Gayee
Koi Lafz Nahi Ab Kahne Ko
NighaaheN Baat Bataati Chali Gayee
HumzubaaN Usse Kaise KaheN Hum
Har Raaz Woh Humse Chhupaati Chali Gayee
Hansnaa Naseeb MeN Ab Nahi Shaayad
Zindagi Zakham Nayaa Dikhaati Chali Gayee
Chehre Pe Chehra Dekh "Radhika"
Har Ek Ko Aazmaati Chali Gayee
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bhut hi khoobsurat likha hai
dheroo daad kabool kijiye
kafiir
na jane kon kon hume duaaon mai yaad rakhta hai
mai dobne lagta hoon samnder uchal deta hai
Us Mukaaaa pe mera junon aajaye
tujhe pukaroon mere muh se khoon ajaaye
...nm
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