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Post hansiin hai duniya.... - 27th February 2015, 11:31 PM
HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho.
Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho.

Tamaam bateiN hoNgii safar meN..
nishaan na honge is pal ke dekho.

Use nahii hai kadra tumhari..
To yaar tum bhi badal ke dekho.

Na chura le dil fir nazar kisii ki
Jise bhi dekho sambhal ke dekho.

Koii zid tumharii bhi hogi poorii..
BachchoN jaise machal ke dekho.

Ho jaye roshan kisi ka ghar jo..
tinka tinka madhu jal ke dekho ..


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27th February 2015, 11:38 PM
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HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho.
Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho.

Tamaam bateiN hoNgii safar meN..
nishaan na honge is pal ke dekho.

Use nahii hai kadra tumhari..
To yaar tum bhi badal ke dekho.

Na chura le dil fir nazar kisii ki
Jise bhi dekho sambhal ke dekho.

Koii zid tumharii bhi hogi poorii..
BachchoN jaise machal ke dekho.

Ho jaye roshan kisi ka ghar jo..
tinka tinka madhu jal ke dekho ..
Kya baat, kya baat, kya baat ! Bohot baDhiya Madhu ji.
Har ek sheyr lajawaab. Aapki shayari itni saral ho kar bhi itni pur-asar hoti hai ke wah wah khud bakhud nikalti hai. Yeh bohot badi baat hai.
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28th February 2015, 08:58 AM
Madhu ji ,
Bahut khoobsoorati se pesh kiya apne dil.ka ehsaas is ghazal
meiN ..Man ko bhaya aap ka ek ek sher ....Aap ki imagination bhi
bahut fertile hai apne Aru ji ki tarah . Aur andaze bayan bhi unique
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Mujhe aapki her peshlash bahut bhati hai ...

Yeh sher bahut pasan aye ......

Use nahii hai kadra tumhari..
To yaar tum bhi badal ke dekho.

Na chura le dil fir nazar kisii ki
Jise bhi dekho sambhal ke dekho.

YuN hi.aate raho.aur bazm ko sajate raho.

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Kya baat, kya baat, kya baat ! Bohot baDhiya Madhu ji.
Har ek sheyr lajawaab. Aapki shayari itni saral ho kar bhi itni pur-asar hoti hai ke wah wah khud bakhud nikalti hai. Yeh bohot badi baat hai.
Dil se daad.
Khaak alfazon ki is kadar tareef karne ke liye dil se shukraguzar hoon main...sagar jee..
aap jaise shayar jab tareef karte hain to yakeen hota hai...kkuch achcha hee likha hoga maine...
yoon hee sath dete rahein..
khush rahein....


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Ho jaye roshan kisi ka ghar jo..
tinka tinka madhu jal ke dekho ..

Wow... per thoda pessimistic laga ...
waqai aap ka kalaam dard se bhara hai.....qabil-e-tareef hai...mubarak ho Madhuji.

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4th March 2015, 08:15 PM
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kia kehny .. Madhu jee..

bohat hii dil-fareb kalam sy ru-ba-ru karwaaya hy..

dilli daad-o-mubarakbaad qabool kejiye!

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bahot hi khoob peshkash hai Madhu jii... waaaaaahhhhhh mazaaa aa gayaaa...

Na chura le dil fir nazar kisii ki
Jise bhi dekho sambhal ke dekho


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Madhu ji ,
Bahut khoobsoorati se pesh kiya apne dil.ka ehsaas is ghazal
meiN ..Man ko bhaya aap ka ek ek sher ....Aap ki imagination bhi
bahut fertile hai apne Aru ji ki tarah . Aur andaze bayan bhi unique
hai.

Mujhe aapki her peshlash bahut bhati hai ...

Yeh sher bahut pasan aye ......

Use nahii hai kadra tumhari..
To yaar tum bhi badal ke dekho.

Na chura le dil fir nazar kisii ki
Jise bhi dekho sambhal ke dekho.

YuN hi.aate raho.aur bazm ko sajate raho.

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aate rahein..
khush rahein...


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Shukriya...sabhat khan jiii
aate rahein...


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HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho.
Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho.

Tamaam bateiN hoNgii safar meN..
nishaan na honge is pal ke dekho.

Use nahii hai kadra tumhari..
To yaar tum bhi badal ke dekho.

Na chura le dil fir nazar kisii ki
Jise bhi dekho sambhal ke dekho.

Koii zid tumharii bhi hogi poorii..
BachchoN jaise machal ke dekho.

Ho jaye roshan kisi ka ghar jo..
tinka tinka madhu jal ke dekho ..
Roz is ehsaas mein hota hi aapko khoob pehchaanta hoon aur roz yeh ittefaaq dil tod deta hai ki miyaaN aabhi kahaN.....

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Wow... per thoda pessimistic laga ...
waqai aap ka kalaam dard se bhara hai.....qabil-e-tareef hai...mubarak ho Madhuji.

per mastibhara kalaam bhi sunaiye hamari tarah

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HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho.
Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho.

Tamaam bateiN hoNgii safar meN..
nishaan na honge is pal ke dekho.

Use nahii hai kadra tumhari..
To yaar tum bhi badal ke dekho.

Na chura le dil fir nazar kisii ki
Jise bhi dekho sambhal ke dekho.

Koii zid tumharii bhi hogi poorii..
BachchoN jaise machal ke dekho.

Ho jaye roshan kisi ka ghar jo..
tinka tinka madhu jal ke dekho ..
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bohat hii dil-fareb kalam sy ru-ba-ru karwaaya hy..

dilli daad-o-mubarakbaad qabool kejiye!
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Na chura le dil fir nazar kisii ki
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kyaa baat hai.............

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Roz is ehsaas mein hota hi aapko khoob pehchaanta hoon aur roz yeh ittefaaq dil tod deta hai ki miyaaN aabhi kahaN.....

Behad khoob aur umdaa tareke se qatl karna aapka peshaa ban chukaa hai...aapke ashaar se yunhi zakhmi hone ki umeed liye...
Kyun sharminda kar rahein hain sahab.....main to bas kuch bahut ehsason ko alfaz dene ki koshish karti hun....aapko pasand aa gaye meri khushnaseebi hai...

Bahut shukriya tawajjo ka......
Aate rahiyega.....

Apna khayaal rakhein..
Madhu


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bahut khoob madhu jee ati sundar hai yeh rachna aapki
likhti rahen
duaon ke saath
Bahut shukriya ishk ji...

Duaon me yaad rakhiyega...

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Wah madhu wah...

Bohut khoob... Ek ek sher pur asar.

Daad aur mubarakbaad dono meri taraf se.
Shukriya sarika...

Aapki daad sar mathe par...

Aati rahiyega..


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Aapki is gazal par kuch lines Arz karna Chaunga..

Ae Chand tum bhi aur Hasin Ho jaoge..
Uske jese bhi Kabhi Nikhar K Dekho..

Suraj ko bhi tum andhere mein paoge..
Uski roshni se kabhi Bikhar K Dekho..
   
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Aapki is gazal par kuch lines Arz karna Chaunga..

Ae Chand tum bhi aur Hasin Ho jaoge..
Uske jese bhi Kabhi Nikhar K Dekho..

Suraj ko bhi tum andhere mein paoge..
Uski roshni se kabhi Bikhar K Dekho..
shukriya azaz sahab......

khoob kaha aapne waah!!

aate rahiyega......


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HasiiN hai duniya chal ke dekho.
Is raNj o gam se nikal ke dekho.

Tamaam bateiN hoNgii safar meN..
nishaan na honge is pal ke dekho.

Use nahii hai kadra tumhari..
To yaar tum bhi badal ke dekho.

Na chura le dil fir nazar kisii ki
Jise bhi dekho sambhal ke dekho.

Koii zid tumharii bhi hogi poorii..
BachchoN jaise machal ke dekho.

Ho jaye roshan kisi ka ghar jo..
tinka tinka madhu jal ke dekho ..


Waaah, kya kehna...bohot hi khoobsurat aur saral peshkash....dherooN daad..

Aapka apna
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Madhu

Bahut Khoobsurat likha hay.Keep up the good work.
bahut shukriya sukanya ji....

aati raha kariye...


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Waaah, kya kehna...bohot hi khoobsurat aur saral peshkash....dherooN daad..

Aapka apna
Bhushan
Behad shukriya...Kaise hain bhushan ji...
Maaf kijiye deri se jawab de rahi hun...
Abhi nazar padi to dekha aapka shukriya karna hee bhiil gayi....

Aate rahiyega..

Madhu.


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