Definition Of Love

Notorious21 · **Definition Of Love -** 14th January 2005, 11:28 AM

Love is a word
I'm not quite sure I understand,
Is it suppose to disappear
And leave you with your heart in your hand?

When one loves with their whole heart
And gives all they have inside,
Shouldn't it be accepted and cherished,
Not just stepped on and thrown aside?

Why do people take advantage of hearts,
Then leave them hurting and not able to understand?
Is there something I'm not seeing,
Or has love gotten way out of hand?

I guess my definition of love
Is much more than that,
I thought love was strong and everlasting
Not something people could throw away at the drop of a hat.

Shouldn't we realize what we have
And nurture it the best we can?
Can't we love and be loved
And make a life with that woman or man?

Love is suppose to be beautiful,
A feeling like none ever felt,
Love is there always and forever
It isn't suppose to bring pain and regret.

I know what kind of love I need
And I will find it one day,
But I guess it's these painful experiences
That makes you look forward to a love that will stay.

So when love comes knockin on your heart,
Be careful of who you let in,
Not everyone considers love as you do
Open your heart slowly, It's worth it in the end.

$hivani · **hi -** 16th January 2005, 07:48 PM

hi notorius21......ur composition is just the thing that i feel but i was not able to put it into words the way u have done...........its EXTREMELYYYYYYYY wonderful and heart warming...please keep writing!!!.bye 4 now!...take care!

Notorious21 · **thanx -** 20th January 2005, 10:42 AM

thank you shivani well i try 2 write.... im not good at it but im tryin my best 2 write watever is in my heart...
take carez
Notorious (Mac)

Rohin · 24th January 2005, 02:08 AM

Hi Mac,

This is an awesome composition.
Really i like simplistic words.
I think they convey the emotions better.
I am really touched by your poetic skills.

Do keep writing in the future too.

But u know perhaps u need a better title then Notorious as ur writings are not Notorious

Thanks
Rohin

feelIt · 1st February 2005, 01:21 PM

very well written...........really true n sooooooo touching

Life is so unfair...Sometimes, you can't tell the person how much you love him and he thinks that you hate him...! And Sometimes, you lose the person you love by telling him that you love him...!

Notorious21 · **WiThOuT wOrDs -** 11th February 2005, 06:07 AM

Your smile tells a story
That I could never read.
As if it were puzzle
Or just a simple mystery.

But your eyes gave me clues
And your touch hints,
So when I looked at your face again
I wasn’t in suspense.

Your smile told me
How I was always on your mind.
And your eyes ask,
“How could you have been so blind?”

So blind not to notice
How you were being touched.
The last clue
That answered the puzzle
That said, “I Love You So Much.”

So when you look at me
In that special kind of way
Without words, I’ll smile back
And you’ll know
What I’m about to say ...

I Love You