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22nd May 2003, 01:50 AM
kal to humne tujhko tha dekha
aaj na jaane kaisi ho haasil tha jo bachpan ka pehlu kaash jawaani waisi ho waisi ho teri voh baatein dhadkan ko chuti thi saansein haathon mein tasveer sa chehra taro ne ho chaand ko ghera meri bhi kismat mein maalik shaam suhaani aisi ho kal to humne tujhko tha dekha aaj na jaane kaisi ho........... Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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22nd May 2003, 07:29 AM
nice written keep up the good work!!!!!!!
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22nd May 2003, 10:44 AM
wow kool keep u pthe good work
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22nd May 2003, 08:48 PM
Thanks guys...hum to bas koshish karte....aap isi tarah padte rahe hum isi tarah likhte rahenge
-mast Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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6th February 2004, 12:25 AM
kal to humne tujhko tha dekha
aaj na jaane kaisi ho haasil tha jo bachpan ka pehlu kaash jawaani waisi ho waisi ho teri voh baatein dhadkan ko chuti thi saansein haathon mein tasveer sa chehra taro ne ho chaand ko ghera meri bhi kismat mein maalik shaam suhaani aisi ho kal to humne tujhko tha dekha aaj na jaane kaisi ho........... Dear Anu Jee, bohot khub hein yeh bhi. As always. This one made me smile. It's really so beautiful. Woh kagaz ki kashti woh barish ka paani.......  yea it was too good to be true. Bachpan chali gayi hein.......Haathon ki lakeeron meh likhha hein tera mera dil ka rishta hein(2 times) haar dhadkan yehi baat kahe tera mera sath rahe tera mera sath rahe haathon ki lakeeron meh likhha hein.......Mujhe yeh gana bohot pasand hein. Tahe dilse shukriya kabool kijiyega. Aur yunhi likhte rahiyega. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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11th February 2004, 06:18 AM
shimul ji shukriya ki aapko yeh pasand aaya....aapka likha gaane mujhe bhi bahut aacha lagta hai...
aaage bhi likhte rahiyega duaaon ke saath -mast Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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11th February 2004, 01:02 PM
Achha? Nice to know. Likhte rahiyega. Thank you. Take care. God bless you.
Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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11th February 2004, 01:26 PM
Hello Anu jee.... Kaise he aap?
Vaise mujhe aapkaa naam pataa nahi.N he, yeh to Shimul jee ka reply padhaa issi liye... par jaan.naa jharoor chaahoo.Ngaa... Ye bahot hi achchha likhaa he aapne..... kal to humne tujhko tha dekha aaj na jaane kaisi ho haasil tha jo bachpan ka pehlu kaash jawaani waisi ho waisi ho teri voh baatein dhadkan ko chuti thi saansein haathon mein tasveer sa chehra taro ne ho chaand ko ghera meri bhi kismat mein maalik shaam suhaani aisi ho kal to humne tujhko tha dekha aaj na jaane kaisi ho........... chaahe hum aapke liye aur kuch kar sake yaa nahi.N par aapke liye maalik se ye duaa jharoor karenge ki aaapke bhi jivan me... '' ek shaam suhaani aisi ho " Aisi hi khoobsurat rachnaa likhte rahiyegaa... & just take care of yourself.... God bless you.... ---------------------------------------------- Ye alfaz he dard e dil ke, aur kuch nahi.n Ye ghaav he zindagee ke, aur kuch nahi.n ---------------------------------------------- |
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5th April 2004, 10:46 PM
Rakshit JI Jaankar Bahut khushi huyi ki aapko Yeh Kalaam pasand aaya...aapki dua ke liye bhi bahut bahut shukriya aur aasha karta hoon ki aage bhi aapse baat-cheet hoti rahegi...
Likhte RahiYeGaa -Mast |
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6th April 2004, 01:36 AM
kal jaise tha tumne mujhe dekha..
aaj bhi main vaisi hun.. kangan chudi bindiya paayal, aaj bhi main vaisi hun.. aankhein bekaraar, har pal tera intzaar.. ab tak main vaisi hi hun.. Bahut acha likha Mast ji aapne.. try kar rahi thi aapko reply dene ki, lekin abhi theek se hua nahi.. lagta hai ab hoga bhi nahi.. time jo kaafi pad gaya. khair koshish ka silsila jaari rahega.. umeed karti hun aapko pasand aaya hi hoga. "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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6th April 2004, 08:32 AM
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bahot samay k baad ek sundar kavita mere charsu jaise khushbu ban ke chahyi. gr8 work. tumhari dost meena |
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Re: aaj na jaane kaisi ho... -
8th April 2004, 09:57 AM
waisi ho teri voh baatein
dhadkan ko chuti thi saansein haathon mein tasveer sa chehra taro ne ho chaand ko ghera meri bhi kismat mein maalik shaam suhaani aisi ho bahoot khoob... mast saheb....aapki kalam mein ek jaadu hai jo gazal ko kai kai baar padhne par majboor kar deta hai....aur har sher sharab ki maafiq khumaar chod jata hai nashe man par.....likhte rahiye.....aur hamari daad qubool kijiye. -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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9th April 2004, 08:53 PM
priya ji aapse to hum kab se puch rahe hai ki kaisi hai aap hi faraar rehti hai yaha se bina zamanat ke..lol
Bahut aacha laga aapka reply humhe aur aacha laga aapka yaha paakar... Yunhi sada likhti rahiYe hasti rahiYe muskuraati rahiYeGaa Duaaon ke saath -Mast |
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9th April 2004, 09:38 PM
meena ji bahut aacha laga ki aapko yeh rachnaa pasand aayi..aur umeed hai aage bhi jo likhunga aapko pasand aayega...
Likhte RahiYeGaa Duaaon ke saath -Mast |
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9th April 2004, 09:40 PM
manoj bhai Jadoo to padne waali nazar ka hai jise shayar ke jazbaaton ko samjhna aata hai
Bahut shukriya ki aapko yeh nazm pasand aayi aur koshish yahi rahegi ki aage bhi jo likhun woh aapko pasand aaye Likhte RahiYeGaa Duaaon ke saath -Mast |
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