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Haseen log to sheeshe ke ghar banate hain -
12th February 2008, 03:02 PM
HI FRIENDS
AAJ KUCHH LIKHA THA TO AAPKI IS MAHFIL MAIN USE PESH KAR RAHA HUN Pighalte waqt kee surat mujhe rulati hai Na jaane kyun teri surat ubhar ke aati hai Hame to shahar kee veeraniyan hi bhaane lagi Hamare kisse ye aksar hame sunati hai Haseen log to sheeshe ke ghar banate hain Meri nakamiyan kagaz pe ghar banati hai ! Apne haalat pe jane kyun hasi aati hai Jindgi roj bahut der tak samjhati hai Ab kisi or kee khushiyon ke rahnuma hain ham Gam kee parchhaiyan bhi hamko ye batati hai Har kisi daur main gam ban ke janam leta hun Fark bas ye hai ki meri shaql badal jaati hai Wo kis ka afsaana tujhko suna raha hai koi Jisko sunkar tere maathe pe shikan aati hai ! Na jane kaun se sanche main dhal gayi kismat Jindgi dard kee jageer najar aati hai ! Ishq ka naam ab hothon ko chubhan deta hai Ye nadi pyaas ke manjar mujhe dikhati hai ! tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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12th February 2008, 03:08 PM
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wowwww...........bahut khoob........maine shayad aaj aapko pheli baar pada hai.....aur sach kahti hoon, aapki shayri bahut aachi hai, har lafaz napa-tula, har sher dil ko chu gaya.........aate raha kijiye aur aise hi bazam ki ronak badatey raha kijiye. god bless u  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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12th February 2008, 05:04 PM
hi sunita ji
aapko mera likha itna pasand aaya to meri koshish safal ho gayi dil se aapka shukriya ada karta hun ke mahfil main aapne meri is gajal ko reply karke hosla afjai kee thanks khush rahiye tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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14th February 2008, 01:38 PM
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Even in this ghazal u have done wonderful job, really nice experience to read u. keep it up regards manu |
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16th February 2008, 02:11 PM
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hello ji Anish ji aap jab bhi aate hai ek alag si ghazal laate hai... apki har ghazal ki tarah yeh ghazal bhi bahut khoob rahi... har sher har lafz bahut khoob hai... bas aap yun hin likhte rahein yehi chahungi meri taraf se daad kabool farmaaye taek caer jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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16th February 2008, 09:36 PM
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Wo kis ka afsaana tujhko suna raha hai koi Jisko sunkar tere maathe pe shikan aati hai ! Na jane kaun se sanche main dhal gayi kismat Jindgi dard kee jageer najar aati hai ! wah janab aapne bohat hi umda likha hai her sher bohat khubsurat bana hai lekin ye do ashaar dill ke qareeb lage likhte rahiyega yunhi... apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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17th February 2008, 02:54 PM
very nice.bahot dard hai aapki shayri me.
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17th February 2008, 05:17 PM
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humari dua hai app yuhi likhte rahiye AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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22nd February 2008, 01:26 PM
Hi acharya ji
Aap ne meri is koshish par apni daad dee iske liye apka shukr gujar hun main aap ne kaha ke jazbon ko alfazon ka chola pahna ke sanwarna mujhe aata hai aisa nahi hai ham sabhi yanha isiliye hain aap or hamare yanha ke dusre saathi bhi is hunar main mahir hain ya yun bhi kah sakte hain kee ham sabhi kisi na kisi bahane se apna dard, apne ahsaas, apne tajurbe lafzon main dhal ke syaahi se kagaz par utaar dete hain fir wo gajal ban jaaye to koi kya kahe hai na khair achha laga aapka is mahfil main meri gajal ko sarahna Khush rahiye Hi shweta How r u!! hamesha kee tarah tumhare reply kee pahle se hee main apeksha kar raha tha or tum aayi achha laga ek baar fir se shukriya ke tumne meri rachna ko kabil samjha or main yanha aata hun aap se kuchh doston se dil kee baaten baantne ke liye or jab aapsabhi ka pyaar milta hai reply milte hain to mujhe bahut khushi hoti hai Hamesha khush raho TC Hi friend (Koi To Ho) Apka dil se shukr gujar hun kee aap itne saare diggajon kee mahfil main hamari gajal ko bhi waqt de kar reply kar paye dil se shukriya kabool kijiyega Khush rahiye Hi friend Only Ask Aapko mera likha pasand aaya to koshish safal ho gayi aapne reply karke jo hosla afjai kee hai uske liye tahe dil se shukrgujar hun thanks Khush rahiyega Hi dineshdharvi ji Aapko mera likha pasand aaya ye meri liye kafi hai aapka reply padh ke dil se khushi hui is khushi ko mujhe dene ke liye or meri rachna ko waqt den eke liye dil se shurkgujar hun thanks Khush rahiye Hi acharya ji Aap ne meri is koshish par apni daad dee iske liye apka shukr gujar hun main aap ne kaha ke jazbon ko alfazon ka chola pahna ke sanwarna mujhe aata hai aisa nahi hai ham sabhi yanha isiliye hain aap or hamare yanha ke dusre saathi bhi is hunar main mahir hain ya yun bhi kah sakte hain kee ham sabhi kisi na kisi bahane se apna dard, apne ahsaas, apne tajurbe lafzon main dhal ke syaahi se kagaz par utaar dete hain fir wo gajal ban jaaye to koi kya kahe hai na khair achha laga aapka is mahfil main meri gajal ko sarahna Khush rahiye Hi shweta How r u!! hamesha kee tarah tumhare reply kee pahle se hee main apeksha kar raha tha or tum aayi achha laga ek baar fir se shukriya ke tumne meri rachna ko kabil samjha or main yanha aata hun aap se kuchh doston se dil kee baaten baantne ke liye or jab aapsabhi ka pyaar milta hai reply milte hain to mujhe bahut khushi hoti hai Hamesha khush raho TC Hi friend (Koi To Ho) Apka dil se shukr gujar hun kee aap itne saare diggajon kee mahfil main hamari gajal ko bhi waqt de kar reply kar paye dil se shukriya kabool kijiyega Khush rahiye Hi friend Only Ask Aapko mera likha pasand aaya to koshish safal ho gayi aapne reply karke jo hosla afjai kee hai uske liye tahe dil se shukrgujar hun thanks Khush rahiyega Hi dineshdharvi ji Aapko mera likha pasand aaya ye meri liye kafi hai aapka reply padh ke dil se khushi hui is khushi ko mujhe dene ke liye or meri rachna ko waqt den eke liye dil se shurkgujar hun thanks Khush rahiye tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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