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Love koi mera naam le to muskura dena - 13th July 2011, 05:54 PM
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena
Jana pahechana hai bas ye bata dena

Labon ki muskaan ankhon tak na jaye
Raaz-e-mohabbat koi samajh na paye
Muskil ho chupana to nazre jhuka dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Na zikr karna tum humari talukaat ka
Na yaad karna wo lamha mulakaat ka
Saath guzare haseen pal bhula dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Mita dena apne dil se tum meri har yaad
Kar dena mujh ko kuch is tarah barbaad
Tasveer kahi ho meri to wo bhi jala dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Saja apni duniya loot ke armaan mere
Hoga ruh par meri ye ahsaan tere
Jo kisi se to kabhi wafa nibha dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Koi mera naam le to muskura dena
Jana pahechana hai bas ye bata dena

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13th July 2011, 08:38 PM
Mita dena apne dil se tum meri har yaad
Kar dena mujh ko kuch is tarah barbaad
Tasveer kahi ho meri to wo bhi jala dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Saja apni duniya loot ke armaan mere
Hoga ruh par meri ye ahsaan tere
Jo kisi se to kabhi wafa nibha dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Koi mera naam le to muskura dena
Jana pahechana hai bas ye bata dena

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14th July 2011, 07:49 PM
acha laga aapko padhkar..good one..keep writing..god bless u

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Koi mera naam le to muskura dena
Jana pahechana hai bas ye bata dena

Labon ki muskaan ankhon tak na jaye
Raaz-e-mohabbat koi samajh na paye
Muskil ho chupana to nazre jhuka dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Na zikr karna tum humari talukaat ka
Na yaad karna wo lamha mulakaat ka
Saath guzare haseen pal bhula dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Mita dena apne dil se tum meri har yaad
Kar dena mujh ko kuch is tarah barbaad
Tasveer kahi ho meri to wo bhi jala dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Saja apni duniya loot ke armaan mere
Hoga ruh par meri ye ahsaan tere
Jo kisi se to kabhi wafa nibha dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Koi mera naam le to muskura dena
Jana pahechana hai bas ye bata dena

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Koi mera naam le to muskura dena
Jana pahechana hai bas ye bata dena

Labon ki muskaan ankhon tak na jaye
Raaz-e-mohabbat koi samajh na paye
Muskil ho chupana to nazre jhuka dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Na zikr karna tum humari talukaat ka
Na yaad karna wo lamha mulakaat ka
Saath guzare haseen pal bhula dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Mita dena apne dil se tum meri har yaad
Kar dena mujh ko kuch is tarah barbaad
Tasveer kahi ho meri to wo bhi jala dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Saja apni duniya loot ke armaan mere
Hoga ruh par meri ye ahsaan tere
Jo kisi se to kabhi wafa nibha dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Koi mera naam le to muskura dena
Jana pahechana hai bas ye bata dena
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saari rachna hi bahut sundar lagi padte waqt .. achchhe ehsaas pesh kiye hai ... dil se daad ............ :)

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Na zikr karna tum humari talukaat ka
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Saath guzare haseen pal bhula dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena
Bahot khoob Praneeta ji,
Aj kafi arse baad SDC par aya to apki yeh rachna dekhi.....Aapne hal-e-dil bakhoobi bayaan kar diya hai................
yeh sher khaskar pasand aye...........
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Pari...behad khoobsurat hai ahsaas aapke...par pad kar dil mei dard sa mahsoos hua, ki etna dard poetry mei to dil mei kitna hoga.

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Mita dena apne dil se tum meri har yaad
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Tasveer kahi ho meri to wo bhi jala dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Saja apni duniya loot ke armaan mere
Hoga ruh par meri ye ahsaan tere
Jo kisi se to kabhi wafa nibha dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Koi mera naam le to muskura dena
Jana pahechana hai bas ye bata dena

Tehreer Ke Khayaalaat Dil Ko Bahut Andar Tak Chhoo Ke Jaate HaiN ... Behad Umdaa Likha Hai ... Praneeta Ji !

Dil Se DheroN Daad Aur Mubaaraqbaad .... !

Aise Hi likhti Aur Aati RaheN Aage Bhi ... Khush RaheN ... !

DuaaoN Ke Saath ... !
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Koi mera naam le to muskura dena
Jana pahechana hai bas ye bata dena

Labon ki muskaan ankhon tak na jaye
Raaz-e-mohabbat koi samajh na paye
Muskil ho chupana to nazre jhuka dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Na zikr karna tum humari talukaat ka
Na yaad karna wo lamha mulakaat ka
Saath guzare haseen pal bhula dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Mita dena apne dil se tum meri har yaad
Kar dena mujh ko kuch is tarah barbaad
Tasveer kahi ho meri to wo bhi jala dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Saja apni duniya loot ke armaan mere
Hoga ruh par meri ye ahsaan tere
Jo kisi se to kabhi wafa nibha dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Koi mera naam le to muskura dena
Jana pahechana hai bas ye bata dena
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saari rachna hi bahut sundar lagi padte waqt .. achchhe ehsaas pesh kiye hai ... dil se daad ............ :)

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Aj kafi arse baad SDC par aya to apki yeh rachna dekhi.....Aapne hal-e-dil bakhoobi bayaan kar diya hai................
yeh sher khaskar pasand aye...........
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Pari...behad khoobsurat hai ahsaas aapke...par pad kar dil mei dard sa mahsoos hua, ki etna dard poetry mei to dil mei kitna hoga.

god bless u
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diii
dil ke dard ka koi limit hi nahi
waise thik bhi hai...jab tak dard...tab tak poetry hai
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Take good care of yourself, ok...?

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aap ki namz muskuraa rahee hai magar us ke peechey eyk dard karwat le rahaa hai jo har line ke bech apne aap ko jata arahaa hai lagta ahai ki aap ne is nazm ko khud me doob ke likhaa hai aor ho saktaa hai ki ye aap ki aap beetee hi ho kiun ki nazm me gar che aaNsoo nahi hain magar wo tar ba tar hai
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Koi mera naam le to muskura dena
Jana pahechana hai bas ye bata dena

Labon ki muskaan ankhon tak na jaye
Raaz-e-mohabbat koi samajh na paye
Muskil ho chupana to nazre jhuka dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Na zikr karna tum humari talukaat ka
Na yaad karna wo lamha mulakaat ka
Saath guzare haseen pal bhula dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Mita dena apne dil se tum meri har yaad
Kar dena mujh ko kuch is tarah barbaad
Tasveer kahi ho meri to wo bhi jala dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Saja apni duniya loot ke armaan mere
Hoga ruh par meri ye ahsaan tere
Jo kisi se to kabhi wafa nibha dena
Koi mera naam le to muskura dena

Koi mera naam le to muskura dena
Jana pahechana hai bas ye bata dena
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Honaa Hai Fenaah Yaad Rakh Aye Shams Tujhko Bhi,
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Jazbaaton se overflowing nazm ye bta raiy ha .......kisi ne tapakti aankho se likha ha...Good G V Good!
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bahut khoob, praneeta jee.

Koi mera naam le to muskura dena
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emotions se bhari ye nazam mujhe bahut -2 acchee lagee.aapko is khoobsurat peshqash par dil se daad o mubaraqbad.
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bahut khoob, praneeta jee.

Koi mera naam le to muskura dena
Jana pahechana hai bas ye bata dena

emotions se bhari ye nazam mujhe bahut -2 acchee lagee.aapko is khoobsurat peshqash par dil se daad o mubaraqbad.
khush rahe likhte rahe.


shukriya uff ak sahab
daad o mubaraqbad ke liye bahot bahot shukriya

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