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21st August 2014, 01:53 PM
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Zakham Kya Kya Na Zindagi Se Milay
Khwaab Palkon Se Be-Rukhi Se Milay
--Fakhira Batool
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wahhh..
Aap ki aankh se gehraa hai meri rooh ka zakhm,
Aap kya sochen ge, meri shab-e-tanhaai ko..
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21st August 2014, 03:32 PM
yahaN likhaa sher na to kisi ke she'r ka jawaab hai or naa hee kissi ke liye message , jo sh'er acha lagta hai appke saath share ker daita hoN aur iske ilaawa kuch bhee naheeN , ager phir bhee kisi ki dil azaaree huwi ho tu gunehgaar hoN maiN unkaa or muaafi ka talabgaar hoN .
Socha tha ik zakhm hai bhar jayega,
kya khabar thi rag-o-jan mein utar jayega,
theek likha tha meray haath ki lakeeron mein,
tu agar pyar karega to bikhar jayega...!!!
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21st August 2014, 03:32 PM
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Haael raha darmiyaaN hajar kii taraH
Wo tera farz tha, merii dosti thi
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waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!!
Naaz,
you are really improving with your shers..... kya khub khayaal hai....
saNg-o-khisht darmiyaaN kii vajah to nahi
dar bhii taamir kiya hai divaaroN ke biich
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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21st August 2014, 07:50 PM
Aazma le saath mera, teri yaadoN ke siwa kuch bhi nahi
YuuN girebaN meiN jaaNk kar, dil ki tauheen tou na kar
Nm
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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21st August 2014, 08:02 PM
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Waah....hassan ji...
Kiske daaman me chupa ke muh ro le ham
ki har daman bheega hai yanha pani se
Kisase kahein dard e dil apna
Har dil jakhmi hai apni hi kahani se..
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bahut khuub Hasaan ji bahut khub.. wahhh.....
Jo kabhi be’panaah chahta tha,
Ab mujh se panaah chahta hai..
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wahhh Madhu jii.. bohat khoob.. tabaaH saheb.. bohat khoob...
sunehray jazboN ki Qadar karna, rafaqatoN meiN waQar rakhna
andhair nagri meiN dil jalaa ke khiyal rakhna hisaab ho ga!
-nm
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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21st August 2014, 08:11 PM
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wahhh..
Aap ki aankh se gehraa hai meri rooh ka zakhm,
Aap kya sochen ge, meri shab-e-tanhaai ko..
nm
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Quote:
Originally Posted by N@zneen
Haael raha darmiyaaN hajar kii taraH
Wo tera farz tha, merii dosti thi
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Originally Posted by Mujeeb
yahaN likhaa sher na to kisi ke she'r ka jawaab hai or naa hee kissi ke liye message , jo sh'er acha lagta hai appke saath share ker daita hoN aur iske ilaawa kuch bhee naheeN , ager phir bhee kisi ki dil azaaree huwi ho tu gunehgaar hoN maiN unkaa or muaafi ka talabgaar hoN .
Socha tha ik zakhm hai bhar jayega,
kya khabar thi rag-o-jan mein utar jayega,
theek likha tha meray haath ki lakeeron mein,
tu agar pyar karega to bikhar jayega...!!!
NM
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waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!!
Naaz,
you are really improving with your shers..... kya khub khayaal hai....
saNg-o-khisht darmiyaaN kii vajah to nahi
dar bhii taamir kiya hai divaaroN ke biich
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Originally Posted by zainy
Aazma le saath mera, teri yaadoN ke siwa kuch bhi nahi
YuuN girebaN meiN jaaNk kar, dil ki tauheen tou na kar
Nm
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaH!!!
aik se bhad kar ke aik shair... meHfil ko chaar chaand laga diye aap sabhi ne!
woH bhi apne na huway dil bhi gaya hathoN se
aise aanay se toH behtar tha na aana dil ka..
-Nasir Kazmi
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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21st August 2014, 09:24 PM
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Haael raha darmiyaaN hajar kii taraH
Wo tera farz tha, merii dosti thi
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mind blowing.........keep it up my friend
Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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22nd August 2014, 07:25 PM
har baar woh kiyoN mujhy choR jaata hai tanha
mai mazboot bahut hoN mager pathar to naheeN
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22nd August 2014, 09:41 PM
hum tumhe chahte haiN aiteraaf kese kareN!
hujoom-e-shehar ko apne khilaaf kese kareN!
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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22nd August 2014, 10:30 PM
thankyou dear! aur tum tareef karne waali malkaa ho!
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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23rd August 2014, 01:29 AM
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Chalo anaa kii deewar giraa deteiN haiN
Mere yaara ek dusrey ko maNa leteiN haiN
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Humne Sookhi hui ShakhoN pe Lahu Chhirka tha FaraZ..
Phool Agar Ab bhi Na khilTay Tou qayamaT Hoti....
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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23rd August 2014, 03:52 AM
Abhi mohabbat ka ism-e-aazam laboon pe rehnay de jan-e-MOHSIN
Abhi hai chahat nai nai si, abhi hain jazbay jawan jawan se
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23rd August 2014, 10:44 AM
mujhe dost kahne wale zara dosti nibha de
ye matalba hai haq ka koi ilteja nahi hai
sunita dii
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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23rd August 2014, 11:22 AM
Iss mehfil-e-shayri ka bhi kuch ajab hai silsila yaaron
Koi dard sunaata hai aur hum daad dete hain
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
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23rd August 2014, 11:36 AM
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Wah! jij bahot khoob...............................
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Bohat shukriya saali sahiba
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
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23rd August 2014, 11:38 AM
Gustakhi maaf
Ghalib revisited
hazaaroN adayein 'eisee ke har ada pe dam nikle
bohot nikle mere alfaaz lekin fir bhee kam nikle
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
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23rd August 2014, 07:56 PM
Waqt ka pata chalta nahin apnon ke sath,
Apnon ka pata chal jata hai waqt ke sath...
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Mujse ab Shayriya nahi hoti,
mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm
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23rd August 2014, 10:30 PM
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Waqt ka pata chalta nahin apnon ke sath,
Apnon ka pata chal jata hai waqt ke sath...
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waaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh..................... sau fee sadii sach baat kaahi hai...
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23rd August 2014, 10:40 PM
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Waqt ka pata chalta nahin apnon ke sath,
Apnon ka pata chal jata hai waqt ke sath...
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wahhh wahh! tabaaH saheb.. bohat khoob..
tum apni neend bharay shehar meiN talaash karo!
jo aankh raakh huii us meiN khwaab kia ho ga?
-Mohsin Naqvi
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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23rd August 2014, 10:44 PM
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Gustakhi maaf
Ghalib revisited
hazaaroN adayein 'eisee ke har ada pe dam nikle
bohot nikle mere alfaaz lekin fir bhee kam nikle
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Quote:
Originally Posted by ananthpak
Iss mehfil-e-shayri ka bhi kuch ajab hai silsila yaaron
Koi dard sunaata hai aur hum daad dete hain
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wahh wahh sir... bohat bohat khoob...
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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25th August 2014, 06:21 AM
sukriya Shaad shaheb or Hassan bhai..
Dopaher Tak Bikk Gaya Bazaar ka Harr ek Jhoot
Or Main ek Sach Lekar Shaam Tak Baitha Raha.. nm
Mujse ab Shayriya nahi hoti,
mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm
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25th August 2014, 11:30 AM
Yaki'n maano khataye saaf dikhti hai hume unki...
ishq andha nahi hota, ye bas dildaar hota hai...
- Lekhraj
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25th August 2014, 05:07 PM
Ye bhi kya kam hai k hum teri tamanna mein jiyen
Lutf-e-manzil naa sahi, hasrat-e-manzil hi sahi....
Nm
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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25th August 2014, 07:38 PM
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Ye bhi kya kam hai k hum teri tamanna mein jiyen
Lutf-e-manzil naa sahi, hasrat-e-manzil hi sahi....
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Wah zainy ji.... Bahut khoob
Tere sang zindagi ho aisi kismat hi nahi
Uspe ye sitam tera ki yaad me apni Marne bhi nahi deta.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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26th August 2014, 11:17 AM
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Wah zainy ji.... Bahut khoob
Tere sang zindagi ho aisi kismat hi nahi
Uspe ye sitam tera ki yaad me apni Marne bhi nahi deta.
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Kitni nadaan si hasrat hai tumne zindagi se ki...
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Ishq bhi karte ho...aur kismat ki baat bhi..???
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26th August 2014, 02:14 PM
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Kitni nadaan si hasrat hai tumne zindagi se ki...
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Ishq bhi karte ho...aur kismat ki baat bhi..???
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Waah bahut khoob lekhraaj ji..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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26th August 2014, 02:15 PM
Kusur tera nahi mere hath ki lakeeron ka hai
Jise bhi chaha vo kisi aur ka nikla. ....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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27th August 2014, 03:38 PM
Is jahan mein mazdoor sa darbadar koi nahin,
Jis ne banaye sab ke ghar us ka ghar koi nahin.. nm
Mujse ab Shayriya nahi hoti,
mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm
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28th August 2014, 10:57 AM
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Kusur tera nahi mere hath ki lakeeron ka hai
Jise bhi chaha vo kisi aur ka nikla. ....
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Vo jiske aaj hai, kal unse bhi naa ho shayad...
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29th August 2014, 08:13 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Pyaare DostoN, BhaaiyoN aur Behno.....
Shayri ke silsile ko aage badhaate hue hum is nateeje par pahoche hain ke hum aaj se ek nayaa silsilaa shuru karenge.... jaisaa ke Title hai "Sher of the Day"
isse aapko andaaza to ho gaya hogaa ke isme karnaa kya hai..
Magar main zaraa ise aur tafseel me bataana chahungaa....
Rules Kuch is tarah se haiN..
1) Members isme ek din me ek sher post kar sakte haiN.
2) sher kisi ka bhi ho sakta hai, khud ka ho to neeche apna naam likheN, kisi aur ka post kar rahe hon to neeeche asli Shayar ka naam likheN, aur agar maloom na ho to "Not mine" likheN...
3) kewal ek hi sher likheN, yaani 2 lines ka ek sher.
for ex-
Jaan-E-Mohsin Tu Bhi Ziddi Tha Ana Mujh Me Bhi Thi
Dono Khud Sar They, Jhuka Tu Bhi Nahi Main Bhi Nahi.......!!
-Mohsin Naqvi
To chaliye aaj se shuru karte hain is naayaab silsile ko... meri appeal hai aap sab members se ke zyada se zyada log isme shareeq hoN aur apne pasandeeda sher se mehfil me chaar chaand lagaaeN......
Merii tarf se pehlaa sher kuch yooN hai...
Mumkin hai ke mehboob teri Aankhon me hai "Shaad",
Us chehraa ke jaisaa hi Tujhe Dikh rahaa hai ChaanD
-Shaad
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Uffffff mistake hote hote bachi saad bhai naya hu na...
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31st August 2014, 09:12 AM
कौन कहता है दुआओ के लिए हाथो की जरूरत होती है,
कभी किसी माँ की आँखों में झांक कर देखिये..
Koun kehta hai duaon ke liye haatho ki jarurat hai
Kabhi kisi maa ki aankho me jhaank ke dekhiye. nm
Mujse ab Shayriya nahi hoti,
mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm
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31st August 2014, 09:56 PM
Mere ghar ka sannata dekhkar kanhi vo laut na jaye.
Isliye har shaam Mahfilein saja lete hain.......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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1st September 2014, 01:17 AM
Inn BaadloN Ka Mizaaj Bhi Mere Mehboob Jaisa Hai,dostoN
Kabhi Toot Ke Barasta Hai ,Kabhi Be-rukhi Se Guzar Jata Hai.
NM
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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1st September 2014, 01:21 PM
Har vo shayari...Jisme tujhe mahboob likha hai..
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Zamane ne suni, aur kaha kya khoob likha hai...
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1st September 2014, 01:34 PM
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Har vo shayari...Jisme tujhe mahboob likha hai..
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Zamane ne suni, aur kaha kya khoob likha hai...
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kya baaat hai..... waaahhhh..........................
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1st September 2014, 01:37 PM
sher arz hai.....
Tujhko pukaarne ka hauslaa bhi naa rahaa.
ye bhi na ho sakaa ke tujhe bhool hi jaate..
Shaad......
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1st September 2014, 09:17 PM
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sher arz hai.....
Tujhko pukaarne ka hauslaa bhi naa rahaa.
ye bhi na ho sakaa ke tujhe bhool hi jaate..
Shaad......
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wahhhhhh..... shaad shaheb kya khub likha hai.. superb..
Mujse ab Shayriya nahi hoti,
mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm
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1st September 2014, 09:20 PM
Ujrre huye iss dil ke har ik zakhm se pucho,
Iss sheher mein kis kis se mohabbat na hui thi Mohsin saheb..
Mujse ab Shayriya nahi hoti,
mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm
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1st September 2014, 09:32 PM
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Ujrre huye iss dil ke har ik zakhm se pucho,
Iss sheher mein kis kis se mohabbat na hui thi Mohsin saheb..
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mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai 'Faraz'
magar toot ke chahna sirf aik baar hota hai
-Ahmed Faraz
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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2nd September 2014, 10:31 AM
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mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai 'Faraz'
magar toot ke chahna sirf aik baar hota hai
-Ahmed Faraz
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Wah Wah..bahut khoob..
Yaaro'n kitab-e-ishq ka ye pahla sabak hai...
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Chaaho agar kisi ko..to bas toot kar chaho...
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