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Aaj meri kahani fir adhuri reh gayi. -
24th September 2005, 07:56 AM
Meri khamoshi hi thi jo seh gai,
Uski yaadein hi aab dil mein reh gayi, Thi shayad uski bhi koi majburi, Aaj meri kahani fir adhuri reh gayi. |
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24th September 2005, 08:55 PM
hi sahil sahab,
aapne bohat hi acche andaz mein likha hai taarif ke liye alfaaz nahi mil rahe itna accha apne likha hai bilkul dil ko chugai aapki shayri............. hum raahe wafa se kabhi piche nahi hatenge, sun lijiye mit jaayenge sanam aap ki khatir........ mai kabhi kuch nahi likhta bas dusron ka likha post karta hoon kyonki mai shayar nahi hoon lekin mujhe shayri bohat pasand hai |
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24th September 2005, 09:25 PM
sahil ji...this is not the forum to submit the shayris written by u...
post it in either ishq or dard... u hav to submit the creations of others includin the name of author.. i guess u havent read the rules for postin in this forum... ne ways nice to read u take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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25th September 2005, 09:10 PM
BOHAT KHOOB...
kHAYAL BOHAT PASAND AAYA ... KYUNKI KAHIN NA KAHIN YESACH HAI ... AISE HI LIKHTE RAHO AAPKA APNA KUNAL Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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25th September 2005, 11:56 PM
Hi Sahil,
How are you.bahut hi acha kalam hai apka...bahut pasand aya......... God Bless you.....take care.keep riting Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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hi -
27th September 2005, 09:48 PM
nicely written.kp it up.take care.
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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