 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
 |
meri aankho.n ki nami laazmi thii... |
 |
|
 |
|
(#1)
|
|
raat ki tanhaii
  
Offline
Posts: 582
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: kolkata
Rep Power: 30
|
meri aankho.n ki nami laazmi thii... -
30th December 2009, 10:48 AM
Doston,
Kitni hee baar hum ye sochte hain, ki kaash... Kaash hamara sapna, sapna na ho kar ek haqeeqat hota... Aur kai baar wohi sapna jo pal bhar pehle, band palkon ke beech aapko gudguda kar muskurane pe majboor kar deta hai, palkein khulte hi aapki aankhon ko nam kar deta hai... aur khayaalo.n mein reh jaata hai bas ek hi shabd.... Kaash!!!! Isi "Kaash" ki daldal mein fans kar, ek lambe samay ke baad mehfil mein kuch pesh karne ki gustaaki kar rahi hun.... ummeed hai aap ise apne nazariye se nawazenge zaroor!!!! andaaz mein Tehraav, labo.n pe ha.Nsi thii.... wo aankhein na jaane kyun, aaj mujhpe thami thi.N... na sawaal na shak, na sharaarat na hak... magar jazbaaton kii wahaa.n, na koii kami thii.... kaha usne bas itna mujhse, "MUJHE TUMSE MOHABBAT HAI..." sharmaii si meri aankho.n mein, ajab si nami thii.... kuch hairaan si... thodi pareshaan si, ek karvaT lii maine... jagti aankho.n pe ab talak sapne ki gehrii dhool jami thii... ehsaas hua tab, meri aankho.n ki nami laazmi thii... unka naseeb saaraa aasmaa.n, mera naseeb fakat do gaz zamee.N thii.. ===================== Nisha... par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
|
|
|
 |
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#2)
|
|
Anshumali
Offline
Posts: 7,420
Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: DELHI (INDIA)
Rep Power: 87
|
30th December 2009, 03:22 PM
Nisha Ji...Aadaab ! aapke kalaam ke khayal aur sabhi ashaar bahut khub lage mujhe....
yeh sher mujhe khaas pasand aaya.... na sawaal na shak, na sharaarat na hak... magar jazbaaton kii wahaa.n, na koii kami thii.... dil se daad hazir hai....kabul ki jiye.... yuhi likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye... apna khayal rakhiyega... duaaon ke saath....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#3)
|
|
Super Mod
Offline
Posts: 3,901
Join Date: Aug 2001
Location: Mumbai
Rep Power: 45
|
30th December 2009, 04:05 PM
Nisha ji,
ek khoobsurat koshish hai aapki nazm par daad kubool farmaaye...likhte rahiYeGaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#4)
|
|
An Incomplite Dream
Offline
Posts: 3,017
Join Date: Mar 2009
Rep Power: 30
|
30th December 2009, 04:10 PM
Nishaa jee Aadaab.......
Kya baat hai aap bhi bahut khoob likhati hai ...... aapki yeh kavish bahut umda rahi.... aur wakai aap bahut gehra likhati hai.... Is kalam per dil se daad kabool kijiye........  likhati rhaiye.......Khush rhaiye....... Khuda Hafez........ 
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#5)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 484
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: Kolkata-City of Joy
Rep Power: 19
|
31st December 2009, 01:36 AM
nisha ji
bahut hi umda peshkash hamari bhi daad kabool kare.... Kaash ki kasmakash saanso ki samasya ho jaati hai kabhi kabhi......aur kya kahu....sapne to dil ke kareeb hai....unki jagah vahi pe hai shayad aankho mai nahi.....varna aankhe nam kyu hoti khyal rakhe khush rahe Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#6)
|
|
Some Mirrors Lie...
Offline
Posts: 3,133
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: Shehr-e-husn
Rep Power: 44
|
31st December 2009, 10:05 AM
andaaz mein Tehraav, labo.n pe ha.Nsi thii....
wo aankhein na jaane kyun, aaj mujhpe thami thi.N... kuch hairaan si... thodi pareshaan si, ek karvaT lii maine... jagti aankho.n pe ab talak sapne ki gehrii dhool jami thii.. Nisha Jii,, Boht hi khoobsorat andaaz mein, aap ne apne ehsasaat aur khiyaalat tehreer k hur misre meiN biyaan kiye haiN, Oper quote kiye ashaar boht ache lage... Aap ka andaaz waqai kabil-e-tareef hai,,(Reps+++) Likhte rahiye,, Regardz,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#7)
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 474
Join Date: Apr 2009
Rep Power: 25
|
1st January 2010, 11:52 AM
Quote:
Bahu khoob Nisha ji... eise hi likhte rahiye..... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#8)
|
|
|
raat ki tanhaii
Offline
Posts: 582
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: kolkata
Rep Power: 30
|
4th January 2010, 01:35 PM
Quote:
naresh jii.... aadaab!!! choti si koshish ko pasand karne ke liye teh e dil shukraguzaar hun aapki.... duaon ke saath aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#9)
|
|
|
raat ki tanhaii
Offline
Posts: 582
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: kolkata
Rep Power: 30
|
4th January 2010, 01:38 PM
Quote:
anu jii... salaam!!! meri koshish aapko pasand aai, ye meri khushkismati hai.... waqt nikaal kar, mujhe padne ke liye shukriya... duaon ke saath... aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#10)
|
|
|
raat ki tanhaii
Offline
Posts: 582
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: kolkata
Rep Power: 30
|
4th January 2010, 01:43 PM
Quote:
sameer jii... aadaab!!! meri koshish ko saraahne ke liye shukriya.... main hamesha kehti hun, gazalein likhna mujhe nahin aata... bas yuhin, kabhi dil kisi lamhe ko lafzon ka roop dena chahta hai to kalam kagaaz leke baith jaati hun.... aur jo kuch ban paata hai, yahan share kar leti hun.... khair.... apna waqt nikaal kar, mujhe padne aur post pe reply karne ke liye shukriya.... apna khyaal rakhiyega... aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#11)
|
|
|
raat ki tanhaii
Offline
Posts: 582
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: kolkata
Rep Power: 30
|
4th January 2010, 01:46 PM
Quote:
amit jii.... namastey!!! meri is choti si koshish ko pasand karne ke liye teh e dil se shukriya... khush rahiye... duaon ke saath aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#12)
|
|
masttt...
Offline
Posts: 2,151
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Chandigarh
Rep Power: 40
|
4th January 2010, 02:05 PM
ehsaas hua tab, meri aankho.n ki nami laazmi thii... unka naseeb saaraa aasmaa.n, mera naseeb fakat do gaz zamee.N thii.. bahut hi badhiya nisha jii...yeh sheyr khaas pasand aaya... meri taraf se daad qubuul kijiye... aise hi likhte rahiye aapka dost, vikram... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#13)
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 4,715
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Khariar, Odisha
Rep Power: 0
|
5th January 2010, 08:22 PM
Quote:
Nisha jee, ek behad achchhi koshish hai aap ki nazm.. sapne se haqeeqat tak ka safar apne aap me.n kaafi dard aur kaafi bhavnaao.n ko apne saath sameTe huye hai, sanjoye huye hai.. istarah ki paDhne waale ke dil par asar karti hai.. mujhe behad achchhi lagii aap ki koshish aur behad asardaar bhii.... likhti rahe.n... Mayank |
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#14)
|
|
|
raat ki tanhaii
Offline
Posts: 582
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: kolkata
Rep Power: 30
|
11th January 2010, 10:57 AM
Quote:
vikram jii... salaam!!! ye jaankar achcha laga ki aapko meri koshish pasand aai... daad ke liye shukriya... aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#15)
|
|
|
raat ki tanhaii
Offline
Posts: 582
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: kolkata
Rep Power: 30
|
11th January 2010, 11:01 AM
Quote:
mayank jii... salaam!!! meri is koshish ko sarahne ke liye and apni rae se nawaazne k liye teh e dil se shukriya.... aapka saath raha to ye koshish jaari rahegi... aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#16)
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 2,022
Join Date: Mar 2009
Rep Power: 47
|
11th January 2010, 02:41 PM
Quote:
daad kabul farmaye ab ap regards |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#17)
|
|
Huii Sabse Paraayi
Offline
Posts: 5,283
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Kolkata
Rep Power: 44
|
11th January 2010, 02:48 PM
bahut khub Sweety,
tumhari nazm mujhe achhi lagi ek khubsurat koshish per daad hazir hai dil se kabul kijiye buzm ko roshan karate rahiye khus rahiye Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#18)
|
|
beautiful moment.........
Offline
Posts: 6,429
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: u.s.a
Rep Power: 42
|
11th January 2010, 07:23 PM
bahut khoob dear Nisha..... ehsaas bahut khoobsurat hai... dilse daad hazir hai... yuhi is mehfil ko roshan karte raho.... khush raho....
rep+++++++++++++++++++ added  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#19)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 1,089
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Toronto,Canada
Rep Power: 31
|
12th January 2010, 12:55 AM
Nisha ji,
Kaise hain aap? aapko kaafi samye baad padhna naseeb hua... aapki ghazal behaad pasand aayii .. har sher dil ke kareeb raha... likhtey rahye... khush rahyee duaon ke saath ijazaat aapki dost mandeep ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#20)
|
|
|
raat ki tanhaii
Offline
Posts: 582
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: kolkata
Rep Power: 30
|
16th January 2010, 10:40 AM
Quote:
zidd jii... meri koshish aapko pasand aai, ye meri khushkismati hai.... waqt nikaal kar, mujhe padne ke liye shukriya... duaon ke saath... aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#21)
|
|
|
raat ki tanhaii
Offline
Posts: 582
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: kolkata
Rep Power: 30
|
16th January 2010, 10:41 AM
Quote:
diya di.... hi.. i m sooooo glad ki aapko ye nazm pasand aai.... padne, pasand karne aur reply karne k liye badaaaaaa waalaaa thanxxxxx!!!!  aapki nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#22)
|
|
|
raat ki tanhaii
Offline
Posts: 582
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: kolkata
Rep Power: 30
|
16th January 2010, 10:42 AM
Quote:
lamha jii.... salaam!!! meri koshish aapko pasand aai, ye meri khushkismati hai.... waqt nikaal kar, mujhe padne ke liye shukriya... duaon ke saath... aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#23)
|
|
|
raat ki tanhaii
Offline
Posts: 582
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: kolkata
Rep Power: 30
|
16th January 2010, 10:45 AM
Quote:
mandeep dii.... aadaab!! nazm ko pasand karne ke liye aur hausa afzai karne ke liye dil se aapki shukraguzaar hu.N.... ummed hai ki aap yuhin humein padte rahengi aur hamari kalam ko apni raae se nawaazti rahengi.... duaon ke saath... aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#24)
|
|
|
~"REBELLIOUS IN LOVE"~
Offline
Posts: 3,264
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Ruatonga, Cook Islands
Rep Power: 52
|
16th January 2010, 10:46 AM
Quote:
wah.....kya khub ghazal kahi hai aap ne daad dil se qabul kare likhte rahe Warm Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
 Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota Ananthpak |
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#25)
|
|
|
raat ki tanhaii
Offline
Posts: 582
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: kolkata
Rep Power: 30
|
16th January 2010, 10:47 AM
Quote:
hassan jii aadaab!!! maafi chahti hun der se reply kar rahi hun.... meri koshish aapko pasand aai, ye meri khushkismati hai.... waqt nikaal kar, mujhe padne ke liye shukriya... duaon ke saath... aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#26)
|
|
|
raat ki tanhaii
Offline
Posts: 582
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: kolkata
Rep Power: 30
|
16th January 2010, 10:49 AM
Quote:
salaam!!! maafi chahti hun der se reply kar rahi hun.... hausla afzai ke liye shukriya... khush rahiye... duaon ke saath... aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#27)
|
|
|
raat ki tanhaii
Offline
Posts: 582
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: kolkata
Rep Power: 30
|
16th January 2010, 10:52 AM
Quote:
praneeta di.... hiii.... kab se aapka wait kar rahi thi..... mujhe laga aap aaoge hi nahi....  meri koshish ko pasand karne ke liye thanx..... keep smiling always....!!! aapki nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#28)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 95
Join Date: Dec 2009
Location: Faridabad
Rep Power: 18
|
17th January 2010, 12:02 AM
nisha ji pehli baar hi padha aapko...apka ek ek sher lajawab hai...bahut umda. badhayi.
 ~*~*~* उदास पथिक ~*~*~*दिल की चीखे जब बढ जाती हैं और जज्बातो की आंधी रोके नही रुकती.. तो लिख लेती हू.... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#29)
|
|
|
raat ki tanhaii
Offline
Posts: 582
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: kolkata
Rep Power: 30
|
21st January 2010, 10:52 AM
Quote:
udaas jii... aadaab!! nazm ko pasand karne ke liye aur hausa afzai karne ke liye dil se aapki shukraguzaar hu.N.... ummed hai ki aap yuhin humein padte rahenge aur hamari kalam ko apni raae se nawaazte rahenge.... duaon ke saath... aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#30)
|
|
|
Banned
Offline
Posts: 2,586
Join Date: Jun 2008
Location: New Delhi
Rep Power: 0
|
21st January 2010, 10:58 AM
Quote:
apke har sher ka pahla misraa mujhe behad behad khoobsurat laga ..... doosra bhi acha tha ur har sher acha hai lekin pahla misraa har baar kamaal liey laga andaaz mein Tehraav, labo.n pe ha.Nsi thii.... na sawaal na shak, na sharaarat na hak... kuch hairaan si... thodi pareshaan si, ek karvaT lii maine... kya flow adaygi hai ... mazaaa a gaya ..... bahut bhavuk khyaal hai..... apna khyaal rahe ... likhti rahe |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#31)
|
|
|
Moderator
Offline
Posts: 15,199
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Chandigarh (Mohali)
Rep Power: 63
|
25th January 2010, 11:08 AM
Quote:
Dear NISHA.........behad khoobsurat nazm....ek ek lafz pasand aaya....keep it up reps +++ pyar aur duao.n ke saath diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#32)
|
|
|
raat ki tanhaii
Offline
Posts: 582
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: kolkata
Rep Power: 30
|
25th January 2010, 11:09 AM
Quote:
vikas jii.... tareef aur hausla afzai ke liye teh-e-dil se shkriya... ummeed hai aage bhi aap meri kalam ko apni rae se nawazenge.... duaon ke saath aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#33)
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 567
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: Dubai
Rep Power: 29
|
25th January 2010, 11:31 AM
Quote:
"ehsaas hua tab, meri aankho.n ki nami laazmi thii... unka naseeb saaraa aasmaa.n, mera naseeb fakat do gaz zamee.N thii.." Behteriin ehsaas, us se bhi behter andaaz-e-bayaaN. Bahot khuub. Beautiful and touching. Subhanallah. Ek umda kalaam pe dil se nikli daad qubuul kareN. Apna khayal rakheN, Khush raheN, Likhte raheN, Naadaan HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai." -Anand Narayan Mulla. वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत, हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है. -आनंद नारायण मुल्ला |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#34)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 1,849
Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: Mumbai
Rep Power: 32
|
25th January 2010, 12:06 PM
na sawaal na shak, na sharaarat na hak...
magar jazbaaton kii wahaa.n, na koii kami thii.... Very Good work Nisha Jee........... Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#35)
|
|
|
raat ki tanhaii
Offline
Posts: 582
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: kolkata
Rep Power: 30
|
27th January 2010, 10:15 AM
Quote:
hiii di.... thank you soooo much for appreciating... it means a lot!!! and u know it!!!! hai na??? love you... urs nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#36)
|
|
|
raat ki tanhaii
Offline
Posts: 582
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: kolkata
Rep Power: 30
|
27th January 2010, 10:21 AM
Quote:
naadaan ji... salaam!!! meri koshish aapko pasand aai, ye meri khushkismati hai.... waqt nikaal kar, mujhe padne aur hausla afzai ke liye shukriya... duaon ke saath... aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#37)
|
|
|
raat ki tanhaii
Offline
Posts: 582
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: kolkata
Rep Power: 30
|
27th January 2010, 10:24 AM
Quote:
sajid ji.. salaam!!! meri is choti si koshish ko pasand karne ke liye teh e dil se shukriya... duaon ke saath aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#38)
|
|
ek dost
Offline
Posts: 5,566
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: gujarat (india)
Rep Power: 34
|
12th February 2010, 04:01 PM
nisha ji bahut hi acha likha hai apne. khush rahiye hamesha dua ke sath
bahut hi behisaab sher hai na sawaal na shak, na sharaarat na hak... magar jazbaaton kii wahaa.n, na koii kami thii AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#39)
|
|
|
raat ki tanhaii
Offline
Posts: 582
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: kolkata
Rep Power: 30
|
10th March 2010, 09:07 PM
Quote:
salaam!!! maafi chahti hun der se reply kar rahi hun.... meri is koshish ko saraahne ke liye shukriya... khush rahiye... duaon ke saath... aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#40)
|
|
|
Adhoori Aas
Offline
Posts: 1,543
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: india , shivpuri
Rep Power: 31
|
11th March 2010, 10:23 AM
Quote:
ek arse baad aapko padne ka mauka mila aur sukoon mila ki aapki kalam ki dhar main kafi painapan aa gaya hai, yakeen maniye behad hi khoobsurat nazm pesh ki hai aapne mahfil main, is nazm per meri or se daad daad aur daad aapka dost dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
«
Previous Thread
|
Next Thread
»
Linear Mode
|
|
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com
