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yeh kis gunaah ki sazaa de rahe ho - 3rd July 2008, 05:54 AM
yeh kis gunaah ki sazaa de rahe ho
ke jeenay ki mujh ko dua de rahe ho

dil azaad mera, qaid me soonch hai
tum kehte ho mujhko, duniya de rahe ho

kabhi sang-di-lee se kahbi bay-ruqi se
yeh tum kis tarha ka aasraa de rahe ho

mai bewajah tumhari zindagi me aayi
zabardasti tum dil me jagaa de rahe ho

zeba likhti rehegi..................
   
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3rd July 2008, 02:15 PM
Aslam u alaikum ,

Sabse Pehle to mein app ko (SDC ) periwaar mein dobara aane per khush amdeed kehta hon

Ab kuch appka kalam perhta hoon
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yeh kis gunaah ki sazaa de rahe ho
ke jeenay ki mujh ko dua de rahe ho
Lajwab sawal laga mujhe
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dil azaad mera, qaid me soonch hai
tum kehte ho mujhko, duniya de rahe ho
Typing mistake hai shayad "Sooch"
Yeh sher bhi bahut umda raha ...
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kabhi sang-di-lee se kahbi bay-ruqi se
yeh tum kis tarha ka aasraa de rahe ho
Typing mistake hai shayad ...
sang dili , be-rukhi
yeh sitam bhi appne khoob nibhaaya hai
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mai bewajah tumhari zindagi me aayi
zabardasti tum dil me jagaa de rahe ho
Behtreen

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zeba likhti rehegi..................
Yeh to bahut achi baat hai


Sach kahon to behad maza aya yeh ghazal perh ker ...bus aik baat kehna chahon ga ghazal mein 5 sher hote hain kam az kam ... to app se guzarish kerta ho jhat pat aik or sher bhi likh daaliye


Aapke agle kalam ka intezaar rahe ga
Khush Rahien
Abad rahien

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3rd July 2008, 06:37 PM
Hi
Mohabbat Har Kise Ko Azmati Hai
Kisise Ruth Jati Hai Kisi Pay Mit Jati Hai
Mohabat Khel Hi Aisa Hai> Kisika Kuch Nahi Jata
Or Kisika Jaan Chali Jati Hai
   
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4th July 2008, 02:42 AM
thanks mujeeb,hussain sahab, dard baantne ka dil karta hai to chale aate hain.
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4th July 2008, 02:20 PM
Zeba ji...........aapne apne dil ki baat behad salikey se bayaaN ki hai....bahut accha laga aapko padna.....yoon hi aati rahiye aur likhti rahiye.

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6th July 2008, 05:20 PM
bahut khoob likha he apne,ye do sher bahut hi khuub rahe

yeh kis gunaah ki sazaa de rahe ho
ke jeenay ki mujh ko dua de rahe ho

dil azaad mera, qaid me soonch hai
tum kehte ho mujhko, duniya de rahe ho

ibadat bhi khuda hai,bagavat bhi khuda hai
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14th July 2008, 02:03 PM
JEENE KE MATLAB MAI NE MOHABBAT SE PALIYA
JISKA BHI GAM HUA USE APNA LIYA
AAP RO KAR BHI GAM KO HALKA NA KAR SAKE
MAI NE HASI KI AAD MEI HAR GAM KO CHUPALIYA……………………….
   
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13th September 2008, 01:50 AM
Zeba ji jawab nahi aapki ghazal ka aur jazbaato ko zahir karne ka . Kuch kehne ki koshish hai is share ke zariye arz hai....

Hamare aashiyan ke tho they chaar tinke, chaman udh gaya aandhiya aate aate
   
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13th September 2008, 10:19 AM
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yeh kis gunaah ki sazaa de rahe ho
ke jeenay ki mujh ko dua de rahe ho
waah! waah!khuubsuurat matla... samjho to bahut kuchh hai aur na-samjho to kuchh bhii nahii.n.. dil se nikli huii daad haazir hai!

dil azaad mera, qaid me soonch hai
tum kehte ho mujhko, duniya de rahe ho

waah! waah! yeh sher bhi khuub hai! daad!
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yeh tum kis tarha ka aasraa de rahe ho
kya kahane!


Zeba jee kya kahane aap ke! bahuut hii dil fareb sher aap ne arz kiya hai.paDh kar dil se khud-ba-khud waah! waah! kiii aawaaz aa rahi hai.. shaayad pahli baar aap ki paDhne ka mauqa mila hai, aur jab aap kisii ko pahli baar paDhte ho aur pursur hota hai to khushi aur bhi baRh jaati hai... ab to lagta hai aap par nigaah rakhni hi paDegii aap yuu.n hi likhti rahe.n.. ham paDhte rahe.nge...

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13th September 2008, 11:59 AM
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