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Thumbs up Ghazal: teraa ShuKriyaaH jaaN teraa ShuKriyaaH haii...! - 2nd February 2016, 11:44 PM

Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaste aur Aadaab!

bazm meiN aayaa huuN apni taazaah Ghazal ke saath… ummid kartaa huuN aapka pyaar aur saath ees baar bhee mujhe milengaa… aapko mere ehsaas pasaNd aayenge. mulaa’iizaa farmaaiiyeN.

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tuu meraa Khudaa haii tuu sab se judaa haii
ye sach haii miree jaaN tuu dil kii duaa haii

ye mausam KhuShii kaa aayaa haii abhee to
mere saath har pal tuu duKh meiN rahaa haii

kaaNTe hoN hazaaroN to kyuuN Ghum kareN hum
kismat meiN Khudaa ne Gul hii Gul liKhaa haii

kaisaa ye naShaa haii muHabbat meiN jaanaaN
maiN jaauN kahiiN bhee tuu mujhko diKhaa haii

tuu mere liye hii aayiiN haii zameeN par
tujh se chaaNd taareN thoDe se Khafaa haii

sach haii JOSH ko tuune ziNdaa kiyaa haii
teraa ShuKriyaaH jaaN teraa ShuKriyaaH haii



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3rd February 2016, 12:16 AM

Dhaval,

Bahaut time baad aapka kuch likah hua padha...bata nahi sakte ki kitni khushi ho rahi hai. You wrote so good. Thoda jaldi likha kijiye...aapko padhne ka wait rehta hai. Har ek sher bahaut khoobsurat aur bahaut saare pyar se bhara hua hai.

Yeh sher behaddddd pasand aaya :-)

sach haii JOSH ko tuune ziNdaa kiyaa haii
teraa ShuKriyaaH jaaN teraa ShuKriyaaH haii

Yeh bahaut jyada achha likha and it touched my heart. Bahaut sari mubarakbaad itni BEHTERIN gazhal ke liye. You deserve three cheers :-)

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3rd February 2016, 12:57 PM

dhaval ji..bahut dino baad apko padhne ka mauka mila......khoobsoorti se ishq k jazbaat pesh kiye hain aapne..matla aur maqta khaas pasand aaya...

Aate rahiyega........
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Dhaval,

Bahaut time baad aapka kuch likah hua padha...bata nahi sakte ki kitni khushi ho rahi hai. You wrote so good. Thoda jaldi likha kijiye...aapko padhne ka wait rehta hai. Har ek sher bahaut khoobsurat aur bahaut saare pyar se bhara hua hai.

Yeh sher behaddddd pasand aaya :-)

sach haii JOSH ko tuune ziNdaa kiyaa haii
teraa ShuKriyaaH jaaN teraa ShuKriyaaH haii

Yeh bahaut jyada achha likha and it touched my heart. Bahaut sari mubarakbaad itni BEHTERIN gazhal ke liye. You deserve three cheers :-)

Smiles,
Jiyaa


jiyaa

namaste

bahot KhuShii huiii tuhe yahaaN deKh kar... eri koShiSh ko pasaNd karne ke liye ShuKriyaah... yuuNhi paDhtee rahaaa karo aage bhee...saath dete rehna/

KhuSh aho... apnaa Khayaal raKho

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27th February 2016, 10:54 PM

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dhaval ji..bahut dino baad apko padhne ka mauka mila......khoobsoorti se ishq k jazbaat pesh kiye hain aapne..matla aur maqta khaas pasand aaya...

Aate rahiyega........
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Madhu jee

namaste

aapka behad ShuKriyaah koShiSh ko pasaNd karne ke liye.. yuuNhi paDhte rahaa keejiye

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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28th February 2016, 09:02 AM

Dhawal bhai namaste,

Bohot khoob likha aapne...kya baat hai....
Dheroon daad

Aapka apna
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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaste aur Aadaab!

bazm meiN aayaa huuN apni taazaah Ghazal ke saath… ummid kartaa huuN aapka pyaar aur saath ees baar bhee mujhe milengaa… aapko mere ehsaas pasaNd aayenge. mulaa’iizaa farmaaiiyeN.

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tuu meraa Khudaa haii tuu sab se judaa haii
ye sach haii miree jaaN tuu dil kii duaa haii

ye mausam KhuShii kaa aayaa haii abhee to
mere saath har pal tuu duKh meiN rahaa haii

kaaNTe hoN hazaaroN to kyuuN Ghum kareN hum
kismat meiN Khudaa ne Gul hii Gul liKhaa haii

kaisaa ye naShaa haii muHabbat meiN jaanaaN
maiN jaauN kahiiN bhee tuu mujhko diKhaa haii

tuu mere liye hii aayiiN haii zameeN par
tujh se chaaNd taareN thoDe se Khafaa haii

sach haii JOSH ko tuune ziNdaa kiyaa haii
teraa ShuKriyaaH jaaN teraa ShuKriyaaH haii



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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaste aur Aadaab!

bazm meiN aayaa huuN apni taazaah Ghazal ke saath… ummid kartaa huuN aapka pyaar aur saath ees baar bhee mujhe milengaa… aapko mere ehsaas pasaNd aayenge. mulaa’iizaa farmaaiiyeN.

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tuu meraa Khudaa haii tuu sab se judaa haii
ye sach haii miree jaaN tuu dil kii duaa haii

ye mausam KhuShii kaa aayaa haii abhee to
mere saath har pal tuu duKh meiN rahaa haii

kaaNTe hoN hazaaroN to kyuuN Ghum kareN hum
kismat meiN Khudaa ne Gul hii Gul liKhaa haii

kaisaa ye naShaa haii muHabbat meiN jaanaaN
maiN jaauN kahiiN bhee tuu mujhko diKhaa haii

tuu mere liye hii aayiiN haii zameeN par
tujh se chaaNd taareN thoDe se Khafaa haii

sach haii JOSH ko tuune ziNdaa kiyaa haii
teraa ShuKriyaaH jaaN teraa ShuKriyaaH haii



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Dhaval bhai khoob khayaal hue hai aapki is nayi peshkash mein par do sher mujhe yaha atakte hue nazar aa rahe hai...

kaaNTe hoN hazaaroN to kyuuN Ghum kareN hum
kismat meiN Khudaa ne Gul hii Gul liKhaa haii


ise agar aap yun kahe to

kaaNTe hoN hazaaroN to kyuuN Ghum kareN hum
kismat meiN Khudaa ne mere Gul hii liKhaa haii

tuu mere liye hii aayiiN haii zameeN par
tujh se chaaNd taareN thoDe se Khafaa haii

is mein zara se pher badal kar raha hoon

tuu mere liye hii haii aayiiN zameeN par
tujhse chaaNd taareN zara se Khafaa haii

aage ek baar dekh lijiyeegaa jaisa aapko sahi lage



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Romantic.... very romantic...

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Dhaval Bhai

Bohat dinoN baad! Umda romantic khayalat!

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Chottu....bahut hi pyare ehsaas...maiN samaj sakti hu en ehsaasoN ko duaa karti hu bhagwaan se ki mera chottu hamesha yu hi khush rhe.
muje yeh wala sher bahutttttttttt khaas lga.

sach haii JOSH ko tuune ziNdaa kiyaa haii
teraa ShuKriyaaH jaaN teraa ShuKriyaaH haii


bahut sare pyar aur duaoN ke saath


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11th March 2016, 09:12 AM

bahut khoob dhaval bhai..... kamaal ki ghazal pesh ki hai aapne....
acchii bayaani aur rawaani ka saath dekhne milaa hai aapke is kalaam me.....


kaaNTe hoN hazaaroN to kyuuN Ghum kareN hum
kismat meiN Khudaa ne Gul hii Gul liKhaa haii

kaisaa ye naShaa haii muHabbat meiN jaanaaN
maiN jaauN kahiiN bhee tuu mujhko diKhaa haii


bahut khoob, likhte rahen, salaamat rahen...... khush rahen...

Shaad.....


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