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judai ke yeh pal -
8th June 2006, 10:12 AM
judai ke yeh pal, aaj nahi to kal
kho jaayenge, hum ho jaayenge,tere pyar me pagal yeh mausam yaadgaar hai, ke saajan us paar hai jis din milengay woo, us din ka intezaar hai pairon me payal, ankhon me kajal lagayenge, phir sajayenge, sitaroon se anchal un se ghar ki zeenath hai, har shai khoobsorath hai do din ki hai judai, jeevan bhar ki mohabbath hai chatt jayengay badal, dil me hogi kuch halchul dil khil jayega, phir mil jayega, sabar ka yeh pal zeba likhti rahegi................ |
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alag rang hai |
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alag rang hai -
8th June 2006, 10:35 AM
alag rang hai kala, ka par bahut achha hai achha sala parh ke likhtee rahiye
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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8th June 2006, 02:16 PM
judai ke yeh pal, aaj nahi to kal
kho jaayenge, hum ho jaayenge,tere pyar me pagal yeh mausam yaadgaar hai, ke saajan us paar hai jis din milengay woo, us din ka intezaar hai waaaahh..kya baat hai... pairon me payal, ankhon me kajal lagayenge, phir sajayenge, sitaroon se anchal un se ghar ki zeenath hai, har shai khoobsorath hai do din ki hai judai, jeevan bhar ki mohabbath hai beautifully expressed... chatt jayengay badal, dil me hogi kuch halchul dil khil jayega, phir mil jayega, sabar ka yeh pal waaaaah... bahut khoob.... Hi Zeba, Kaisi hain? ummeed hai acche se hongi. Aaj ek arse baad aapko padha.. Likha to humesha ki tarah hi khoobsurat hai... ek change hai isme... is baar dard se pare ek aashaa hai aapke kalaam me... accha laga aapko padhkar is baar bhi... likhti rahiye... aati rahiyega... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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Re: judai ke yeh pal -
8th June 2006, 04:14 PM
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hiii... zeba jii.... dil ke dard ko kis khoobi se aapne shabdo mai dhala hai,,, vakai kaabil-e-tarif hai,,,, ek ek shabd mai dard najar aaya,, aesa laga jese humare hi dil ka haal bayaa kiya ja raha ho,,, khaaskar ye line to bahut acchi lagi... "yeh mausam yaadgaar hai, ke saajan us paar hai jis din milengay woo, us din ka intezaar hai" ishiqa ki daad kubool kijiyega..... keep writing... bye and take care...  Is se pehle ki dilo me nafrat jaage, aao ek shaam mohabbat me bita di jaaye.... Karke kuch 'ISHQ' ki baatein, Is shaam ki masti badha di jaye.......!!!! ISHQ.. |
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4th February 2010, 07:38 PM
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ZEBA jii, aapki yeh poetry hamare dil ke kareeb rahi, judai ke paloN mein jo milan ki aas hai, ensaaN ko marne nahi deti yeh aas.....bahut khoob likha hai aapne. god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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4th February 2010, 07:50 PM
Nice lines Zeba......................
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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