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Enlightenment!!! - 8th May 2012, 07:43 PM

Am I a constant or an ever evolving idea
Do I start from scratch when conceived again?

Am I a sum total of the universal knowledge
Or merely a fraction of the whole that exists

Emptiness of silence and the maddening chaos
Offers a meaning? an opportunity to escape?

Whatever the purpose to my passage in time
I should have an apparent start, a definite end

I hope there is more than theory of chances
When I will cease to exist as a cosmic being

Eagerly awaiting eternal nothingness, I am
Several light years away from enlightenment


- Pradhyuman


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gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai?
musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai?
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10th May 2012, 03:20 PM

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Am I a constant or an ever evolving idea
Do I start from scratch when conceived again?

Am I a sum total of the universal knowledge
Or merely a fraction of the whole that exists

Emptiness of silence and the maddening chaos
Offers a meaning? an opportunity to escape?

Whatever the purpose to my passage in time
I should have an apparent start, a definite end

I hope there is more than theory of chances
When I will cease to exist as a cosmic being

Eagerly awaiting eternal nothingness, I am
Several light years away from enlightenment


- Pradhyuman

Ufffff! Kyaa baat haye janaab! So heartening to see such a bright light in this dark corner( I.e, the English poetry Section of SDC)!
A man reflecting so deep........a breath of fresh air to see a poem contemplating something other than relations and emotions! Bismil bhaee aap jab bhi retire hongay InshaAllah aapkay bachchay buhat naaz karayngay aap kay achievements par tab tak kay!


Keep going bhaee!


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2nd December 2012, 04:03 PM

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Ufffff! Kyaa baat haye janaab! So heartening to see such a bright light in this dark corner( I.e, the English poetry Section of SDC)!
A man reflecting so deep........a breath of fresh air to see a poem contemplating something other than relations and emotions! Bismil bhaee aap jab bhi retire hongay InshaAllah aapkay bachchay buhat naaz karayngay aap kay achievements par tab tak kay!

Keep going bhaee!

Duagoh
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Thank you ahmad bhai..your appreciation means a lot to me..i like your comment so much that i keep coming to this post for inspiration talk of self-obsession... haha


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2nd December 2012, 05:03 PM

Aadaab Bhaaeee! Jnaab yeh aapka haq n entitlement haye and the cooment was a ztraight shot from the heart. ..Sorry bout reminding the retirement so early..
   
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It actually is an enlightenment in the darkness which is prevailing all around these days, i am a few light years away from enlightenment, i hope u keep coming with such wonderful creations more frequently...!!



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2nd December 2012, 06:26 PM

My dear Pradhuman,
When u touch eternal nothingness, u are
already enlightened . After reading your poem
I shall only say that you are better evolved
person and touched realm of both zero &
Infinity in this poem.

A very beautiful thought provoking poem.

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20th May 2013, 02:30 PM

Dear Taish and Sanjay bhai,

it feels great to know that someone's understood and appreciated your work.. more importantly understood.

so thanks a tonne..god bless

Ahmed bhai - retirement to koi aaj mauka de to aaj le len..

kahun maom se jald pighal jaa ki ab bas
na mujhko yeh roshan jahaan chaahiye

regards,
Pradhyuman - Bismil


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