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ओ चाँद ! - 21st November 2014, 05:03 PM

कुछ रोज मेरे झरोखे से भी नज़र आ ए चाँद ,
कुछ रोज मुझको भी बहला ए चाँद ,
ये दिल ही नहीं रूह भी धड़कती है,
मुझको भी ये एहसास दिला ए चाँद,

तमन्नाएँ हैं के आसमान तक
जा-जा के पलट आती हैं,
ये तितलियाँ कुछ दूर तो उड़ती है
फिर आसमान में ही बिखर जाती हैं,

कुछ तो शीतल कर मेरे दर-ओ-दीवार को
न ग़म की धुप ही छँटती है,
न बूँदें ही बरसती है,
एक अरसे से ये तपिश मुझे भीतर तक तपाती है।

- चाँद


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Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.

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21st November 2014, 08:40 PM

Dear Chand ,

Namaskar ...Ek nihayat khoobsorat peshkash ..Aapka chand se
guftgoo karna bahut bhaya mujhe ..yuN hi aur chandni bhikerte rahiye.

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22nd November 2014, 10:42 AM

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कुछ रोज मेरे झरोखे से भी नज़र आ ए चाँद ,
कुछ रोज मुझको भी बहला ए चाँद ,
ये दिल ही नहीं रूह भी धड़कती है,
मुझको भी ये एहसास दिला ए चाँद,

तमन्नाएँ हैं के आसमान तक
जा-जा के पलट आती हैं,
ये तितलियाँ कुछ दूर तो उड़ती है
फिर आसमान में ही बिखर जाती हैं,

कुछ तो शीतल कर मेरे दर-ओ-दीवार को
न ग़म की धुप ही छँटती है,
न बूँदें ही बरसती है,
एक अरसे से ये तपिश मुझे भीतर तक तपाती है।

- चाँद

Chaand bhai...bahut khoobsurat ehsaas...ham bhi yehi kehte hai aapke liye

"kabhi kabhi nazar aaya kar SDC par ehh Chaand,
apni Chaandni se roshan kar SDC ko ehh Chaand"

aap bahut accha likhtey hai, likhte rha kijiye aur SDC ki bazm meiN Chaar Chaand lagate rhiye.

god bless u


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.....Sunita Thakur.....

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27th November 2014, 06:31 PM

कुछ तो शीतल कर मेरे दर-ओ-दीवार को
न ग़म की धुप ही छँटती है,
न बूँदें ही बरसती है,
एक अरसे से ये तपिश मुझे भीतर तक तपाती है।




waaahhh chaand bhai kya kya likh diyaaa hai aapne, tadap bhi hai aur dard bhi muhabbat bhi hai aur shiqayat bhii........

bahot khoob..................

Shaad...


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