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Father...hah!...what is this word? - 18th June 2005, 08:51 PM

Father…hah!...what is this word?
I have a father, but yet, the relationship is so unfamiliar
A father is there to support his children
A father is there to make them happy
Every child needs a father…
So why is it that I have one…but don’t know him?
A father is supposed to spend time with his children
A father is supposed to cherish them
So why doesn’t my father have time for me?
Everyone I know talks highly of their dad
But I can’t even do that…
For, I don’t know my papa enough to talk about him
He is like a stranger who lives with my family
And never seems to notice his children
He never notices his children’s eyes
Eyes that are filled with longing for his love
Eyes that plead for him to glance over and notice
He never notices that I get in trouble
Only…and only so that he would know I exist
And if not explain…at least yell at me…to show a little care
My father had always been too busy with his business…
To notice how much I’ve grown
It seems…he cares more about his work than his children
He has never been there on his children’s birthdays
Always off to some business meeting
He has never noticed how we feel…what we want
My wish is…that my father knows who I am…and he cares for me
I have never known the full meaning of a father
Will I ever?


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Re: Father...hah!...what is this word? - 19th June 2005, 11:48 AM

Hi frnd!!

At the first sight it came to my mind tht its something special on father's day (19 jun)!!!...but yahan to complaint hai.....chalo isse aise maan lete hain ki.....this in a way is showing how much imp role a father has in our lifes.....he is....who cares for us when v r in trouble......he is the one whose valuable advice is always needed.....and he is the only one who stands equal to Maa ...mother!


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Kuch nagme gaa kar chale gaye kuch aahe bhar kar laut gaye,

Wo bhi ek pal ka kissa the mein bhi ek pal ka kissa hoon,
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19th June 2005, 12:29 PM

hey warda.....lite yaar....he may b busy with his work....though he may not show u....but he loves u a lot n cares a lot for u...
don worry yaar...every thin will b ok
take care


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Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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19th June 2005, 01:37 PM

Father…hah!...what is this word?
I have a father, but yet, the relationship is so unfamiliar
A father is there to support his children
A father is there to make them happy
Every child needs a father…
So why is it that I have one…but don’t know him?
A father is supposed to spend time with his children
A father is supposed to cherish them
So why doesn’t my father have time for me?
Everyone I know talks highly of their dad
But I can’t even do that…
For, I don’t know my papa enough to talk about him
He is like a stranger who lives with my family
And never seems to notice his children
He never notices his children’s eyes
Eyes that are filled with longing for his love
Eyes that plead for him to glance over and notice
He never notices that I get in trouble
Only…and only so that he would know I exist
And if not explain…at least yell at me…to show a little care
My father had always been too busy with his business…
To notice how much I’ve grown
It seems…he cares more about his work than his children
He has never been there on his children’s birthdays
Always off to some business meeting
He has never noticed how we feel…what we want
My wish is…that my father knows who I am…and he cares for me
I have never known the full meaning of a father
Will I ever?


Very well expressed Warda.... Father is really very important...! Do keep writing buddy.. take care


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Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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19th June 2005, 02:55 PM

Hi Warda sister,

A Father is the most important person in our lives...

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22nd June 2005, 06:08 PM

hmm
well shaliniji ki tarah mujhe bhi pehle yehi laga tha ki there is sumthing special

welll....mayb u shud talk it out with ur dad....mayb he will for once understand u

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23rd June 2005, 04:12 PM

kabhi kisi ko ...muk.kamal jahaaN nahi milta
KaheeN jameeN ...to kaheeN aasmaan nahi milta..


(from hindi song...?)


Ek Pita ko mai bhi jaanta hooN ....eise hi ek pita ko

Jiske paas apne bachchhoN ko dene ke liye kuchh bhi nahi tha

Kabhi bhi nahi .... or abhi bhi nahi shaayad....

per wo chaahta bahut tha apne bachchoN ko....

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per aapki rachna ki baat kahoon to...waakai kaabil-e-taareef hai...beshaq dard kuchh jiyaada hai...per rachna behtreen.


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23rd June 2005, 11:06 PM

Warda Dear...

Go and show this poem to ur Dad, I am sure he would see what he has lacked in the role of father.. I am sure he loves u madly as every father does and he is working for u guys only but he has to realise that its not only important to love somebody but to express that love is important as well..

Dont keep the feelings to yourself, discuss it with him.. You are the only person who could do that . I am sure you will get all the love you deserve.

My father has died recently but I have not lost him.. he is still alive in my heart and would always be. Please do not loose each other while you are both still alive..

Best of Luck

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23rd June 2005, 11:24 PM

Hi warda

this poem is full of pain and grief clamouring for a father;s love. those of us who get total love from oyr fathers may neva really understand the pain of one ignored by thier father. I dont know if you wrote about ur personal feelings even tho everyone jumped to that conclusion but i know life can be real hard without the love n support of a father. i like your work.

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8th April 2006, 06:48 AM

I was just reading through my older posts, to pick up on my mistakes, when i came upon this post...this special post. i looked at it, and again just like the time i had written this, tears formed. just like the last time, my wish is still the same. and now, i have come up with another. just a few feelings.


I want again to be my daddy’s princess
To be his lovely daughter
I want again to be someone close to him
I want again to have him hold me close

As my eyes burn with unfallen tears,
I pray to God for my daddy back
As I smile at the jokes of my peers
I wish I could joke about my dad’s slack

When will he come home one day
And spend a cherished moment with his family?
When will he show his children the way
And listen to their silent plea?

I want to ride up on my dad’s shoulders again
I want to eat ice-cream with him again
But, why is it that time has not allowed me that?
Why is it that I haven’t felt a single hug for years?

Oh I love you my sweet daddy
Oh how much I wish it were true
That you would spend an evening with me
That you would watch my eyes fill with glee

Oh, I love you daddy
And I hope you love me too…


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8th April 2006, 07:38 AM

hmm true father is very important in life and we need them .i can feel your pain .very well expressed.

--------------- if your father will read this sure come and give u sweet hug .and u dnt worry we all r here always .but i know every one loves daddy.me too .

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